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QUE SERA SERA- Chapter 20
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She saw them hunching over to talk intimately and then laughing.
The butterflies in her stomach were fluttering around. She felt slight relief that Helena had at least talked to her.
It was a start.
She made her way back to Alice, Shane and Dana.
“Wow, we saw that…it looks like you’ve gone and done it again…” Alice reprimaded, shaking her head in shock.
“Shut up Alice…” Shane said crinkling her brow at Alice.
“Alice! Sorry Bette…” Dana chastised and then apologised for Alice.
“Sorry Bette..that came out all wrong…” Alice apologised.
“It’s ok guys, Alice…I know…and you’re right…I did do it again…” Bette said shaking her head gently.
“Hey, so what time is this band gonna start rocking this place?” Alice attempted to change the subject and smiled at Dana for support.
“It says they start at 8pm which is…in fifteen minutes!” Dana exclaimed looking at her watch.
As Bette glanced up again at Helena and Mel, she heard some familiar words…
“Beautiful…here we go…again…my love you know…I will never let you go…my love…beautiful…here we go…again,” Damien Marley sang.
She saw Helena freeze as the words started playing.
She saw her put her glass down and lean over to say something into Mel’s ear.
She saw them laughing and then the look in Helena’s eyes before she leaned forwards to kiss Mel.
Alice and Shane followed Bette gaze…
“Oh my God…” Alice exclaimed…
“What?” Dana turned around to ask what was happening and Shane shook her head as Bette stood up.
Storming her way over to the bar, Bette felt her blood boiling and her heart pounding uncontrollably in her chest.
She could see them still kissing tenderly….
She could see one of Helena’s hands on Mel’s waist and the other at the side of her breast and her anger raged.
Approaching them she grabbed Helena’s hand away from Mel’s waist and holding it tightly, she pulled them apart.
“Just what the hell do you think you’re doing?” she said angrily to Helena.
“What? Are you serious?” Helena asked in disbelief.
“Just what the hell do you think you’re doing?” Bette shouted at her.
“You and I need to talk! NOW! Outside.” Bette shouted, trying to steer her towards the door.
“I’m not bloody going anywhere!” Helena retorted angrily.
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TBC…
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Now you know you are wrong…all that space you had left on the page…you could have written something…lol. Keep posting I love me some drama.
uh oh….somebody’s gonna get it…skycaptain is right, you are sooooo wrong for leaving us hanging like this…it’s like a banana split with no bananas…you’ve got to post soon…PLEASE!
Great Chapter as alwaays Sis =)Can’t wait for the next…
I was so excited to see four pages…But as is Nesha’s style she’s left us hanging again.I love that Bette’s jealous. Now we wait for the explosion.
*read like fine print* Niki’s play by plays are reserved for drama only. So here goes: *whispering* Dag on it where is she? I know she saw them. Tina, keep it in your pants…who’s the latin guy?…oh, it’s Al..hehe…what is with all the kissin’? This has got to be the English version.!! PB and hot sauce…ewww…….Melanie?….what the?…aaaaahhhhh……..alpha Bet—I agree with Sky, now you KNOW that YOU are wrong, girl!!! Get back here! PPS
You are so wrong, so very wrong. Wht did you leave us hanging. that is so bad. Someone is in trouble. But who/ thanks
wow….datz intense
CLIFFHANGER! Nooo. That was soooooooooo not nice.
OK, so I gave in and read it early. I figure it wouldn’t take TOO long because you like adding a ton of space between your lines >:o ;p :D :D It’s so like Helena to bring some new girl in when she feels hurt or vulnerable. Yay for Bette! You grab that arm of Helena’s! I can’t wait for some heated verbal exchange between the two!
oh shoot!!!! Porter on the move and that could be one dangerous thing. I’m with sky captain though, you were hecka wrong for leaving all that space one the bottom of the page, you know you could of filled that up a little more LOL
Nesha – I’m glad you’re back sweetie but damn did you have to bring the drama right away. So Tina still confuses me; I don’t know who the hell she wantsto be w/ but I wish she’d make up her mind already. And poor Bette; Helena is handling this the exact wrong way. If only she would try hearing Bette out instead of trying to show her up….. post soon please.
Damn, I’ve just noticed you had updated on the 4th november ! And now I’m so late to comment… A
Damn, I’ve just noticed you had updated on the 4th november ! And now I’m so late to comment… A
Oh my God Nesha how could you do this to us??? You really are the queen of cliffhangers huh? Don’t wait another month before you give us the rest of this story girl, we won’t make it that long LOLZ
great chapter! really love the drama! thank u! pls post soon!
Brilliant chapter as always! Love your portrayal of Alice and Dana. And I really like how your very own sense of quirkiness is becoming infused in your writing- ‘the sofa said’ :D Great! Loved it, thanks, and do post soon!
omg, what does Bette really want? and as for Tina, shame on her!!!
I agree with Rau. Helena isn’t a toy and yet Bette seems to be treating her like a yo-yo. Which coincidently is exactly how Bette is letting Tina treat her. Where’d her spine go?
these two really nned to talk and get things sortet out… please don’t let them split up…. PPS… btw… great chapter
Ooh, drama drama drama! I don’t know how Bette can justify being angry at Helena when she’s treating her like a toy she can use whenever she wants. How hypocritical! Honestly! Come on, Bette… dump Tina and choose Helena already!
fantastic chapter nesha. i been sitting on te edge of my seat waiting for the end to see what would happen and you leave me with a cliffhanger like that. i’m having a moan but i really love it. good chapter we missed you. post soon ok
Tina’s crazy and Bette needs to figure out that Helena is the one for her….Make Helena see that Bette is the one for her too!!!!
About bleedin time darlin. You cant leave us hanging like that. However I will forgive you this time cause you put my fav ladies in this chapter (kisses). Still loving the story babe, please try not to make us wait as long next time xxxx
OUCH, that one had to hurt. Poor Bette, she’s got quite the uphill battle on her hands.
Keeping us waiting that long for an R rated story???. Well ok, it was beautifully written, good character analyses, great dialogues and we’ve got 4 pages and a cliffhanger. But I longed for a hot, sizzling sexscene. Nevertheless, thanks for sharing this great story.
Alright, I have absolutely no idea what happened last night with my computer, I thought I was in the twilight zone, even thought I was interrupted while writing my comment I somehow “managed” to double post ??… And then my connection died. I’m thinking it’s a conspiracy, but since I have no other evidence… Anyway, I just wanted to say I have loved this chapter. When Helena made her arrival at the Planet I even could picture her moving in slow motion and I was sure Bette was going to faint !… LOL ! But seriously, I was totally carried away by this chapter. This is just so thrilling. Thank you very much, Nesha.Ok, off to read your new chapter now !