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QUE SERA SERA- Chapter 22
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What have I done? I can’t believe I just did that!
Crossing her arms against her chest now, she walked slowly and thoughtfully towards the car park.
Why was everything so hard? Why did it have to hurt so much?
Opening the car door, something glimmering in the moonlight on the backrest of the seat caught her eyes.
She squinted to make sure she was seeing properly before carefully removing the large knife that was deliberately stabbed into the seat.
Jerking her head around, she glanced hastily into the dark and deserted car park.
Her heart pumped and she discreetly peered into the back seat of the car to make sure it was empty before jumping in.
She hadn’t remembered to lock the doors after they’d gotten out just now.
Locking all the doors, she swiftly opened the glove compartment and flung the knife inside…not even bothering to check if anything was missing.
Where did it come from? What did it mean?
Looking around the now eerie car park, she pulled on her seatbelt and started the ignition.
Maybe it was a prank…
She turned on the front headlights and with her free hand she felt around for the handbag she’d secured under her seat before she’d gone inside.
Bingo! It wasn’t stolen…Ok…so nothing valuable was stolen…maybe it really was a prank?
She frantically rummaged around in it for her cell phone until she remembered she’d put it in her skirt pocket.
Thank you God for small mercies…
Pausing, she flipped it open to check for a clear signal before looking in her rear-view mirror one last time.
Holding it made her feel safer…
As she turned her head to reverse, a dark shadow moved across the passenger window and she screamed as it rapped on the window and tried to turn the door handle.
“Bette!” a familiar voice called in.
“Helena!” Bette exclaimed in surprise, holding on to her chest and leaning over to unlock the door.
After she’d climbed in, Bette leaned over to lock the door again.
“God, you scared the life out of me! I didn’t see you coming.” Bette protested smiling.
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Now that’s the kind of drama I love ! That’s what I’m talking about ! That conversation between B & H was so spot on Nesha ! I couldn’t wait for that “fight” to happen. At least one of them has really spoken their mind. I only wish Bette would have tried to explain her behaviour. Now, that being said, I think they still need some more time to clear things up since they’ve only just begun to really express themselves. Those two have certainly not found a solution by deciding to go home and f…ing their brains out. As for the last twist, I need to say that I was kind of surprised that helena would come back so easily after the “storm”. I thought her leaving would have been more “definitive”, at least for the night. She had “won” that round by “exiting the stage” with class. But I guess she’s just so much mature than I am (LOL!). She just doesn’t need that kind of illusion of a ” victory “.Now, even though I can see why Bette is still so confused and so torn about the choice she has to make, she really needs to make up her mind. I’m sure she must think that by leaving Tina for good she’s going to lose Angelica, but I’m sure she can be smart enough to talk Tina into making a fair decision for them both.As for the knife stabbed in the car seat, I could almost hear John Williams’ score from Jaws soundtrack ! Really ! So thrilling !Anyway, I’m so hooked on this story, I just can’t wait for your next chappie. Please post ASAP, Nesha !!! I’m loving this story…
The knife thing is kinda creepy…Bette better not hurt Helena anymore or I’ll kill her; not the psycho stalking Helena. Helena’s been through enough with Winnie, Tina and Dylan.
WOW!!!! That was Great!!!!! I just hope B&H will be OK. The Knife thing nice touch. Thank you PPS
Hey, if I found a knife in my seat, I’d be taking that thing to the police station, then taking Helena home. In that order. Bette should know better than that since all those wacky things have been happening. And Helena must really love Bette to come back after being slapped. Not me sister, she’d have a lot of groveling to do! But I’m loving the story-as always. Thanks.
okay, that was good, but the knife…to throw it in the glove box, what’s up with that???
This story is kind of bizare. I REALLY think Bette is kind of crazy or something. She plays with Tina…Cancels on Hel… Then goes crazy on a woman she sees Helena with.. Accuses Helena of cheating.. Then just like that wants to have sex with Hel.. Slaps helena… and I dont know.. She seems really unstable. I almost WANT Helena to run away from Bette as fast as she can
Hey I have a freeze full of anything you want. It was chilly here this week so we had Taco soup good . WITH tHANKGIVING COMING WE WILL HAVE PLENTY FOR YOU AND WHOM EVER YOU CARE TO BRING.
Hey I have a freeze full of anything you want. It was chilly here this week so we had Taco soup good . WITH tHANKGIVING COMING WE WILL HAVE PLENTY FOR YOU AND WHOM EVER YOU CARE TO BRING. Love this Bette But can’t imagine her slapping anyone. Helena did seem to care since she came back thanks for posting. Made Chocolatechip cookies and like a pig had a glass of Milk and cookies. thanks
Ahhhh I was just wondering last week when you’d get back to the threatening manila-enveloped letters of doom. Assuming that it is related to the knife? No, Bette! It’s not a prank! A prank would be a plastic spork stuck in your seat–not a knife! Yes, Helena is crazy…crazy in love! They can go do the sexy-sexy and leave all the worrying about the sharp utensil stuck in the seat to me.
Again you captured these feelings so incredible well…and I don’t agree with BeautifulRagdoll, If Bette is kind of crazy or something, then I am too and if she seems really unstable, well I guess than I’m unstable. You can’t be always rational, sometimes you just have to let go. Loved this chapter, it moved me and it made me cry. Thanks.
Oh my God. Helena and Bette are well-suited; they’re both a little shizo. I wonder who is leaving these messages and the knife. Hmm… Can’t wait till you post next! ;D
Well, when you write stuff like this, I can’t help but keep reading. I’m loving it. Figures Helena would rather spend her time with her parts wrapped around Bette, than at the Planet. I love the mini drama. It’s very irrational and typical of Bette and Helena. Makes sense that they’d want to smack each other around and then get back to steamy sex. Yum!
I’m confused….so I’ll wait for next update…
jeeez my heart really was thumping as i read this! gripping chapter, ‘turbulent’ I’d like to say! I liked how it ended in a bittersweet kinda way- so has Bette made a decision NOW? :) Thanks for this, do post soon
P by P: Making up coming in…5..4…what? Eek!!….*silence*……*pin drop*….ouch…..*whispering* Ok, I am liking this Helena…..dag, why do they keep smackin’ her?…Helena flashing her bicep in 5…4…huh?…..wow…*silence*….B, I don’t know…I wish I did —-AHHHH, the stalker is back!….How far were they from the car?…..AHHHHH…Oh, it’s Helena…..*raising one eyebrow*….hmmm……Belena……*knocking on B’s head* No kiss or promise of more is worth forgetting about the knife, lady! Weellll, look at Nesha…going all Helebette on us….I’m impressed :0)! The first part was like standing by watching people you know have a private “conversation”…that you shouldn’t hear but you really wanna hear….so you find ways to move out of hair pulling distance…and yet stay close enough to catch the action….just in case you need to do a play by play!! I don’t do this but some people do *flashing my most believable smile* Seriously, I don’t…it’s about privacy.
Another good chapter =)
Hey, I told you guys it was hard to beat the success of the last chapter, didn’t I? :) Sorry some of you didn’t enjoy it as much or if you got confused. Will try harder next time! Thanks :)
WTF I was all over the edge of my chair reading this nesha. this was da bomb. and y wuz every1 comfuzed? i think the knife was linked to helena’s letters, they have to be right? and helenas not crazy every1 shes in love. when we’re in love we do crazy things and we don’t want to believe the people were in love with have faults. its very clear helena is very attracted to bette and she cant help but go back even though bette is making her angry. helena is torn am i right nesha? Please post soon
Nesha you re right I totally love this chapter (even though it ended a little stoo soon). So helena had a change of heart; I don’t know why but I’m glad that she did and now her and Bette can get home and get down to some loving. So what was up w/ the knife in the back seat? Was it just a prank? That part had me a bit confused but no biggie. So please let this union b/w Bette and Helena be the real deal. I love them together and i don’t want Tina’s head games or Helena insecurities about Bette’s ability to be faithful to keep them apart. It seems to be more than just a sex thing for Bette when it comes to Helena, otherwise Bette wouldn’t of cared when Helena showed up w/ that other chic on her arm. Post soon Nesha, love ya!
I don’t think we are not not liking this chapter as much as we are confused. I felt like something was missing in the middle, like the real page two.Helena should have kicked Bette’s a$$ for slapping her not go home with her. I do feel these two really like each other but poor Helena is constantly getting hit in her beautiful face and not fighting back. Bette’s face slap was uncalled for and the punishment for that is not a night of hot fcuking, although I have to admit I’m looking forward to reading that..I want to see my girls healthy not beating the crap out of each other. Please let them talk. Now the other issue is that crazy stalker that these two seem willing to just ignore. What the F?… Okay Nesha some talking them some crazy monkey make up F’ing
huh? What happened? Is Helena crazy? Is there 2 Helena’s? Why didn’t a knife embedded in the seat didn’t freak Bette out more? Keep posting.
Almost forgotten about the psycho on the loose, who could it be…? Keep posting and i will keep reading babes xx
pheeeeeeewwwwww all caught up! And what a fantastic set of chapters to come back to, you had me worried with Tinho there for a while but hopefully Bette will realise she needs to move forward not back, and who the bloody hell is this stalker?! ok now don’t go keeping us hanging now chick, more soon please, loving this this, just amazing!