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QUE SERA SERA- Chapter 24
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“That she’d have you eating out of the palm of her hand if she wanted to. That’s all you are to her Bette! A challenge! Well the game’s over now Helena, you’ve won, another trophy on your shelf, now leave her alone!” Tina continued vehemently.
"She said that did she?" Bette smiled incredulously at Helena, "So I’m your trophy?"
Helena blushed profusely and then went pale as the shock registered on her face.
“Helena?” Bette called.
“Bette, I…it’s not like that at all!” Helena shakily started to say.
“It’s true Bette! Bette, just come home with me. This is Helena we’re talking about here! The dragon? She tried to make your life a living hell, remember? Bette! Are you listening?” Tina asked, suddenly insecure.
Bette pursed her lips seriously again and nodded uncomfortably, “What exactly is it about Helena?”
Tina interrupted again, her tears flowing freely now, “She hasn’t changed Bette! She’s still the same old Helena. Please…let’s go home and talk baby. We’ve got eight years behind us…we’ve got a daughter…and…and I love you…I’ve never stopped.”
Helena’s eyes widened at Tina in surprise, anger, hurt, jealousy and she looked over at Bette. Her graceful arms at her sides, her beautiful curls hugging her shoulders, her gorgeous lips and her deep and emotive eyes…
As she continued to stare at Bette, something suddenly snapped inside of her and she realised she could see what she didn’t see before.
She could see Bette’s discomposure, she saw Bette crumbling before her very eyes.
She couldn’t bear to look at either of them anymore.
She suddenly knew how Bette felt and she began to relive the pain of her own self crumbling as Dylan laid her betrayal, card by card, on the bargaining table.
She remembered what it felt like to have your heart torn in two pieces and she unexpectedly even felt sorry for Tina.
She was revived to reality by Bette calling her name, “Helena, I’m going to take Tina home. I really don’t know what to say about all this. It’s been a fuckin’ long day and I’m suddenly brain-dead. I’m really sorry…”
‘Famous last words’, thought Helena.
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wow… powerful stuff. I can imagine how tough it must be for Bette. Good to see you back writing. Thanks, and post when you’re able
Bette is getting on my nerves so much. I wish she’d stop stringing both of them along like puppets instead of human beings. Rawr!! And I don’t know what you’re talking about Nesha, this chapter was fantastic as always. :D
Man Bette has a decision to make…was Helena only with Bette to see if she could get her? Does Tina really love her or is she trying to insure a warm spot next to her in bed cause she hates to be alone? So many questions in Bette’s head…we need some answers. More please.
its good to have you back! come on bette make up your mind women…p.p.s.
hey look who’s back !!!! Glad to see ya babes and what a chapter it was. Dang poor Bette I really don’t want to be in her shoes right now having to women prowl on you like that. I know you have a busy life but please don’t wait too long to post the next chappy ok?
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! Oh, I think I held my breath all the way through. That was indeed great!!! Welcome back!! PPS
welcome back…may be the only one thinking this, but…tina sure does have a lot of nerve…not only does she leave bette, she has a new family and now bette is supposed to drop everything for her…oh, hell no! sometimes, you just can’t look back, and this here…is one of those time…please post a B and H passionate reunion….PLEASE.
WOW ! First of all, let me start by saying this was definitely worth the waiting. In fact, I can’t make my brain work well enough to praise this chapter, but rest assured that I love it ! Secondly, don’t be ridiculous, Nesha, of course we were not pissed at you, just sad that this story we loved so much wasn’t being updated anymore. To tell you the truth, I was kinda losing hope that you would ever post again ( Hopefully the next update will come soon ! … LOL ).Anyway, I still love your way of building dramatic tension. I have enjoyed very much the “triangular conversation” and thought it was very necessary at this point. That was very well executed, especially since I’m pretty sure it wasn’t easy. Although many issues remain unsolved for the moment, at least these three characters have ” bursted the boil “. As a matter of fact, I feel that, for the very first time, Bette was able to honestly say exactly how she felt… How she felt about Tina, how she felt about Helena, and just how confusing and torturing this situation is for her. That’s the good thing about emotional exhaustion, I guess… You finally get to say what you feel whithout giving too much thought to long-term consequences.I only wish Helena had a chance to explain what Tina ( what a snitch, btw ! But I guess everything is fair in love and war, huh ? ) said Helena had said about Bette, because I’m pretty sure Helena uttered those words in a totally different context and a long time ago. Besides, wasn’t Bette the one who first called Helena the f..king scourge of the universe ? LOL ! Mind you, not that I didn’t understand her anger towards Helena back then… Anyway, the way you describe these characters’s feelings is amazing. OMG ! I can totally see why Bette is so torn.On a side note, I don’t remember if I have said this before, but I also want to compliment you on not automatically making Tina the villain. It would be too easy. Indeed, although I’m not sure her intentions are completely good and disinterested – she must be very jealous of Helena, but who would blame her for that ? – I’m sure she has genuinely realized she still loved Bette. And this makes this story much more complex and interesting than if you had chosen to make her the queen b.tch that some authors have chosen to. Anyway, congratulations on this “tour de force”, Nesha !This was one hell of a chapter ! And don’t worry, we did notice that it was slightly longer than usual.Thank you very much. Please post again soon, pleeeease….
nesha ur back!!! dis story is the only storee i comment on. lets see, dis was an amazing chapter nesha and i fink iagree wit lfan-niki like i was holding my breathe as i was reading the whole thing an i really cannt believe u decided to stop dere when tina and bette were getting all hot an bovered. i feel so sorry for tina, i like her in dis story because i know where shess coming frm when she leaves the person she loves to go wit somebody else and then she ralize she loves bette and wants to go back. a similar thing happened to me and luckiy my ex took me back. so now i fink i’m torn between helena an tina now heheh! do you blame me though i just love your writing an the way you make me feel emotional when i read. its good to have u back. i don’t kno if i could forgive u if u go again. only playin wit u. i bet u could tell i missed u right? dis is the longest post i fink i ever written. post soon for us ok nesha. your fan is waitin.
I was so happy to see you posted an update to this, and in no way did it disapoint, great chapter chick. Cant wait for you to post again, whenever that is lol i know myself how difficult it can be to post sometimes. So i’ll read whenever you post. :D
Nesha I’m just happy you are back. But i am a little miffed that you stopped the chapter where you did (you big tease). What about Helena? I feel for Bette she is trapped b/w two beautiful women that she cares about and one betrayed her w/ a man while the other may just see her as a conquest. I don’t who Bette should pick but right now it looks like she is definiely getting steamy w/ helena. Don’ keep us waiting so long this time for an update Nesha. Thanks!
Don’t really know what to say, you silenced me, except maybe that even after two months it wasn’t necessary for me to read the Last Chapter Summary. I know what it’s like to have feelings for 2 persons, you have the one that you were trying to build a future with, the one who knocked you off your feet years ago, you love her truly because you don’t have no choice anymore, because she lives under your skin. Than you have the other one, the one you feel so alive with, you think of her with unbridled passion, you have no past with her, no ballast at all, only the here and now. I loved this chapter very much it drained me, set my mind on fire, it won’t leave me today, thanks for making me feel this way.
yeah Great reading. I held my breath the entire time. Where is alpha Helena go fight for your woman. Bring out the all out cat fight.Whew I have to read that again
‘allo, Nesha! No worrie! Posting again is enough to appease most of us!! I like how Bette takes quick showers–water conservation! :D but poor girl…just when she’s about ready to move on, forced into choosing to leave through Helena’s door and enter back in through Tina’s..creepy Tina’s…waiting outside the bathroom door Tina’s *cough* Keeping my emotions an arm’s length away ’cause I’m not sure where you might take us next. Gotta be prepared ;) Post any time you want, but I think most prefer soon :p
(oh, and I’m one of the ones who prefers soon :D :P )
Great chapter Nesha.I look forward to the next chapter =)