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QUE SERA SERA- Chapter 25
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“No…I don’t.” Bette answered solemnly closing the gap between them in two steps and stopping directly in front of her before she could move away.
Silence.
“Ok. Fine, so tell me then? What’s the answer to my question?” Helena asked, taking a step backwards to lean on the door. She crossed her arms and summoned all the courage she could muster.
“Look at me…” Bette answered softly, taking another step forwards and leaning closer to press her palms against the door over Helena’s shoulders.
Helena’s heartbeat quickened, even faster that it’d been thumping since she first heard Bette’s voice on the phone just moments ago.
And, as if hypnotised, she obeyed, bravely drawing her eyes to see what she’d been afraid to face since last night.
“What’s the answer to my question Bette?” she insisted firmly. She needed the answer now. She knew she wouldn’t last much longer before desire took over. It was probably already too late.
She inhaled Bette’s extraordinarily distinctive scent that had mingled in perfectly with her perfume. Her hair looked so soft and her eyes were so beautiful…she just wanted to drown in them. Her body was tingling all over from being so close to her…knowing that all she had to do was just reach out and touch. She felt the hidden desire throb to life between her legs and turned her face to look away, knowing that it was indeed already too late.
“Your answer is the same as it was last night you amazing creature…” Bette whispered moving her cheek closer to Helena’s.
“And what answer was that?” Helena whispered back powerlessly.
Searching her eyes, Bette smiled softly and answered, “I’m here aren’t I?”
Helena blinked uncontrollably and smiled with relief at Bette before bringing her arms up to hold her, “Really?” she asked Bette.
“Really…God you’re so fucking beautiful…” Bette answered raspily and unexpectedly pushed her body into Helena’s against the wall.
Leaning forwards, she pressed her lips hungrily against Helena’s, pushing her tongue forwards and demanding entrance. Her controlled desire broke free and the hunger between her legs rippled to be satiated.
Her impatient hands hastened to tug Helena’s blouse free from her skirt before eagerly making their way under her bra to her hot silky breasts, cupping and kneading them erotically.
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VERY NICE UPDATE…BUTT BETTE DIDNT MAKE A MISTAKE WITH TINA AND YES BETTE GO HOME AND TO TINA….NOW P.P.S.
Life got in my way of a lot of things. Sometimes I want Bette to get back with Tina but she has done so many thing to Bette that it hurt everyone.Yet will go back for more. Helena,I dont know how it will work with Her and Bette. but i must say It was hot Hot Hot. Yes my dear got all the Ice Crean you want to each. I’m a Blue Bell fan. and Braums Vanilla and black walnut. If you are ever in Texas the freezers are full. thanks
I think the is eat not each thanks
To quote your Helena- ‘fuck that was bloody amazing!’ :D i still stand by what I said about your writing being powerful (and especially when you don’t edit too much. Don’t question yourself too much, I say, just go with it). I think you have exceptional flair for writing lovemaking scenes too. Although, I didn’t like it when Bette asked Helena about the ‘eating out of her palm’ comment at THAT moment… it implies too much imbalance of power and vulnerability, I think, and it doesn’t sit well with me. Those one-sided phone conversations were brilliantly done. Really! I can’t get over that! This is the 2nd time I’ve read that sort of conversation in fanfic and i think i think it takes considerable talent to pull it off and you did it amazingly! You made it flow and yet kept the intrigue, you answered some questions for us and yet you made us think of more! Brilliant indeed. So lemme see if I’ve got this right- Tina is playing Bette, or at least collaborating with someone to break up H/B? For a second there, I thought Tina and *Bette* were doing it to hurt Helena! (tell me I’m wrong about THAT one!) Or is Tina scheming with *Helena* to get back at something? (I hope not!) Can you TELL that this story is making me think?! Heheheh. Thanks Nesh, hope you don’t keep us waiting too long
nesha, no i didnt like this chapter. i didnt like it 1 bit. i LOVED LOVED LOVED it! sooooooo hotttttt! i didnt realize how much i missed ur steamy chapters till i read this 1 now there was some belena lovin i think i will b readin this again lol as for bette? what has she done! she didnt do the dirty with tina did she? god. i hope no. poor helena and is tina up to no good? but at least bette know what she wants and she dedided she wanted helena but the thing is will helena forgive her when she finds out OMG what if tina tells her? i’m on the edge here girl i’m all hot and bothered her with the steamy sex and the drama of this story my girlfriend will wonder whats wrong with me lol write soon.
way to go Bette…tell them u want to date…they are both so desperate to have u, they’ll put up, until u decide…to go back to alice becuz she’s funny and less complicated than either of these 2….sorry, but could just see the funny side of this story…go for it, i love that she’s got both Tina and Hel on a string…about bloody time…more
mmmm babes this was one HOT chapter you wrote there. And please let Bette get rid of Tina or move in with Helena cuz when those two stay together Bette will never know who to choose although I would know LOL. PPS
Liked it? Babe i loved it!! OMBG how hot was that?!?! That trophy remains firmly in your quarter :D Also congrats on the quick post… very impressive! Can’t wait for the next one, thank you!
Ahem….ah…ok…ummm….good grief!! Well as not to create a perpetual echo. Let me just say: I understand the turmoil for all of them particularly B and H. The situation is extremely complex, but please keep fleshing this out and bring Bette some clarity, quickly. I don’t know what’s up with T or this stalker. I do hope you continue to feel inspired. PPS
Is Bette absolutely sure Helena isn’t playing her? Was that answer established? I am confused and I am hurt Nesha…you have my emotions all over the place…Bette & Tina…Bette & Helena…Tina…Helena…T…Hell…oh damn! More please.
OK…you are EVIL! More evil than Helena, Bette, Tina, mystery person, and/or Ruth >_> so which one(s) is it? You can tell me :D ohyeah, the nc17 was aiight… ‘__’ ah, who am I kidding! it was hot!! talk about getting your circulation going…and going and going…I’m gone x_x
First of all in your author’s notes you stated: You make me feel like a world famous author girl! LOL. I can only say that you’re indeed among the best around here otherwise I wouldn’t have nominated your story. I don’t do such things lightly, that’s not my style at all. What this chapter concerns you’ve made me speechless, first I didn’t expect it that soon and second it overwhelmed me. You catched those feelings Bette is going through with great accuracy. Bette knows she has to choose, but she can’t let go off neither of them. She’s tormented and completely out of balance and yet she knows she has to make a decision real soon. You can feel the insecurity of both Tina and Helena too…they both know Bette has to make the ultimate choice between the two of them, and they can only wait on the verdict. The lovemaking was…WOW!!! I can only say it’s still lingering on me *blush*. Luv you did a mighty job here I’m gonna treasure what I’ve read now the whole day long. Thanks so much for that.
Ok, I lost touch with this story somewhere in… May? But, I’m all caught up, realizing the error of my ways, and it’s been a “page turner” post after post! I don’t know what the hell to make of Tina, except I know I want to slap her (there seems to be a lot of that going around lately)… at this point, I just want to see Helena and Bette happy together and screw Tina… only not literally. She’s got Henry for that. Shudder. Anyway, this is great, babe, and I hope you put more up soon!
Whatever will be will be. Sometimes it’s easier to hold on to something that you are familar with no matter how unhealthy it maybe. But lets just hope that Bette can break the cycle of a toxic relationship and start to live again. I am rooting for Helena though, I believe she is the rigth choice but whatever you decide I’ll read it faithfully. Thanks for the undate,your skills of writing on the complexities of the human emotions are outstanding.
(And since I’m a self-proclaimed Tibetter, you must realize how hard it is for me to get behind this couple, right?) :)
DAMNNNNNN….i asked for passionate, but sh**, that was soaking wet!!! OMG, okay, I can breath now. That was good. You’re teasing right, “last night” meaning, tina barging in like that and Bette consoling her can never happen again, right…don’t hurt H like that…oh my, can’t wait for the next post…you keep doing your thang girl…Cheers!
nice one ;) can’t wait for the other one and i hope the ending will be a Belena nooooooot a Tibette (I used to be a TIbetter at my very beginnings but now I think I’m allergic to Tina :lol: )
Yes Bette, what have you done? So….when is Tina moving out..
Yes, This was nice to wake up to and ao quickly….Yeah Nesha… I did like this update.. I rushed through it all hot and bothered, so now I will go back and savor in it a little
Wow, you write amazing sex scenes… Tina who??
Uh oh Bette! What have you done. The mistake was getting down w/ Tina but at least she realized and it went back to Helena. Now the question is how will she explain to Helena that she only realized she wanted to be w/ her after fucking her ex wife??? UH OH!!! Will helena understand that Bette just made a little slip but real wants to be with her? And who was Tina talking to on the phone and what is she plotting. I sure hope that Bette and Helena can work things out but how much trouble Tina causes will be a big factor in determining that. post soon Nesha……you’ve got me wrapped around your little fan fic finger so to speak (LOL).
Wow, Bette, you’re in trouble, girl ! But you must be in so much inner turmoil…So about your last chapter, Nesha… Well, I’m glad that I could “read” you so well then ( LOL ! ). Thruth is I just reeeeaaally like this story. God, you’re talented !I’m going to pretty much echo Vvith’s comment though, since I was quite shocked that Bette had the nerve ( for a lack of a better word ) to ask Helena about what she had said during their … well… you know…in that particular moment ( even if it was quite amusing and she probably wasn’t asking for a real answer. In fact, I’m now pretty sure that Bette is now well aware that Helena’s comment was totally taken out of context by Tina ).Anyway, as much as I love this drama and can feel Bette’s torment, she’s going to have to find a way to make up her mind and make a firm and clear decision at some point. This situation is definitely not fair to Helena, nor to Tina actually. Mind you, Tina has a lot to explain too. Really, what’s up with her ? Did she really break up with Henry and if so, why ? For some reason, I highly doubt they broke up on a mutual agreement. Did she come to her senses ? Does she have an agenda ?… Probably, huh ?… And WAS SHE THE STALKER ? Anyway, as you may have understood, I enjoyed this chapter as well. Very much so. How thrilling ! Oh, and thank you so much for not torturing us with the waiting this time. Please keep posting…
uhhh.. sorry for the thousand word comment up there ^^ just feeling chatty and had a lot to say!
Thanks for updating so soon Nesha.Another really good chapter. =)