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I refocused my attention on the road. The solitary highway was completely empty except for the animals lurking in the forests, and the wrecked car on the side of the road. Some people should just obey speed limits.
The young boy stepped out of the car as a bloody mess dragging himself out of the car. I closed my eyes and let my power surge within me, my telepathy detected him. He was scared. He had run away from home after he accidentally stabbed his father who was hitting his mom. I wonder which one of my people answered that guy’s question: ‘will I be murdered by my son?’
The boy’s name was Robert ‘Bobby’ Lorenzo. Oh the horrors that happen in this God forsaken country of Venezuela. Only 16. I’m sorry to have to answer your question kid, I really am. You’ll thank me later, I’m saving you from a life or psychiatric help and prison.
I raised my hands in the air and hot black orbs enveloped them. I faintly heard the milagroso screaming for me to stop. I felt her power hit me, but she wasn’t strong enough to even tousle a hair on my head. The only way to kill any immortal is by using each others powers, but we have natural shields making it impossible to know each other’s weakness. The most we could do is serious damage, but I’m not worried about this Milagroso.
Without hesitation I released the black orbs from my hands right before the Milagroso released her white orbs. Mine were not only stronger but also faster.
"No!" I heard the Milagroso cry as the boy, little Bobby Lorenzo stopped crawling and slowly died. I walked over to him slowly as the Milagroso sobbed. His eyes were wide open and his body was broken, but he had the most peaceful expression on his face. Like all the pain and sorrow just went away.
I leaned down and closed his sky blue eyes slowly. I caressed his cheek and whispered, "rest in peace Bobby."
"You fucking hypocrite!" The milagroso cried throwing an orb at me. I reacted instantly dodging without even turning to look. She gasped in surprise.
"I think it’s wise for you leave now, you can’t win them all, and no one can beat me," I said standing up slowly, showing her that I posed no further threat.
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very intresting. i should be packing look what you’ve done, i’m reading your storties again! I’m gonna get in so much trouble!
LMAO, this is gonna be soo much fun, PPS!
This is interesting and like it. Please post more, thanks!
such an intriguing plot. PPS cheers!
I LOVE IT WHEN YOUR STORY IS SET IN SOME “MAGICAL PLACE!” .. [but how about “No Boundaries?”..:( pps.]
ohhh im so ready ..bring on the fun
Interesting start.Thank you.PPS
This is funny stuff!!! I love it!!! I wonder what will happen… PPS!