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Random scenes from Season 3
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Dana: Hey Al.
(Cut to Alice, who is standing with Bette and Angelica. Alice is smiling at the phone, after seeing the call is from Dana.)
Alice: Hey!
Dana: I’m at The Planet…where are you?
Alice: I’m at Bette and Tina’s. I wanted to see the baby.
(Dana is annoyed with this answer.)
Dana: Oh
(Dana sees Lara walking in to the caf.)
Dana: So, do you want me to wait here for you?
Alice: If you want. I should be there in about a half an hour.
Dana: A half an hour? I thought we were supposed to…
(Alice then hears a voice on the other end of the phone. Switch to Dana)
(Lara has walked up to Dana, and interrupts her.)
Lara: Good morning Dana.
(She points at her outfit.)
Lara: Cute shorts!
(Cut back to Alice)
Alice: Huh…You know what Dana, Bette is putting Angelica down for a bit. I’m going to leave now. I’ll see you in about five minutes.
(We see Dana rolling her eyes. She knows Alice overheard Lara.)
Dana: Ok…fine. See you.
Alice: Ok..
(Alice looks at her phone, realizing Dana already hung up. She and Bette look at each other. There is a moment of silence.)
Alice: I…uh…have to go. I forgot, I’m supposed to meet Dana. She’s waiting.
(We can tell Bette is concerned about Alice…knows something is wrong.)
Bette: Al…are you…
(Alice interrupts her.)
Alice: I’m good…really. Look, I’ve got to go.
(She turns quickly, heading out the door, waving)
Alice: I’ll check in with you later!! Tell T I said hi.
(Bette stands at the door for a moment, with a look of concerned confusion on her face…looking out at the driveway as Alice jumps in her car. And at the same time, she is rocking the baby, whispering in her ear.)
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Scene III
Location: The Planet
(Dana and Alice are sitting at a small table talking, while Alice, who is clearly uncomfortable, keeps looking around for Lara.)
Dana: What do you mean you are going out for dinner with Helena? How could you even think of doing that after what she did to Bette and Tina?
Alice: Well….she seemed nice enough to me. Besides, Tina sure seemed to ENJOY her company. So she must have some redeeming qualities.
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Great story, I hope you continue with it when you have time. Love it.
Hey Seahurst I’m still catching up Whoa! I Love it I’m still reading LOL! Please continue post soon Thanks.
Excellent as ever Sea! hope to see more of season 3 through your eyes….
Hey Sea, always room for one more here in sunny California. Take your coat off and stay awhile!
Nice scenes. These all rang true to the characters if you ask me. From your pen to IC’s pages. Your creative juices have not run dry…they are just on a hiatus with your other stories, I guess.
I will send positive messages out to the fan fic gods that you find your muse or that you are able to find the wrecking ball that will take down your writer’s block!
Looking forward to ANY posts from you!
Bravo, Sea! I was so excited to see that you had posted. I like this start and am hoping for more. My fingers are crossed. Wish I could make it to NY… but alas, I’ll be in a wedding
If only the writers on the show could be as creative. Thanks!
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome Sea! Awesome as always. I’d love to see you continue this. :D Pretty please.
just great Sea… I wish I could be at NY too… ~sad face~ but who knows?… glad you posted!!!!
Please continue Sea! This is great!
Sea – of course anythng you write is awesome…way to go. I am sorry that I am going to miss you in NY, I wish I could go. I just keep missing you huh…moved from Seattle….live in OR…you moved from AZ and I move to AZ….geez..you think I was following you….I would love to follow you and meet you but the gods are not willing. You are awesome..best of luck in Cali….
Hey Sea, I’m glad to hear your move went well. I hope you find housing soon! You’re coming to New York?! Stupid classes!!! Grrr!
Great start with these scenes. They’re very believable to the show. Thanks for sharing them with us! *Leaves you some gloves to help fight against the writer’s block*
This is ineteresting and good start, let see what’s next, thanks!
Nice story Sea.I am glad to see any story by you. I will be seeing you in NY.Amamda sorry that you won’t be there.Sea I hope you continue with this story.Will you be updating the story about the girls daughter having sex with a women for the first time?
you are also going to new york on aug. 30… i am so pissed… i live in new york and i’ll be in LAS VEGAS that week… of all weeks in the year to have this… i hope my luck in vegas is better…
Welcome to California Sea – we’re happy to have you!
Thanks for posting – love what you have so far.
You must continue this!…….Hope you find a place soon…..Looking forward to you next.
Would love to see this in S3We all need to remember in S2 Tina really hated Bette and was very hurt. Maybe Tina didn’t see what Helena was doing or really didn’t care.. Hope you find a place soon. we [ME] miss your stories. Good Luck
it must be raining women. ;) yes im that happy that you have posted. you could rewrite the phone book and it would be way more interesting than what i saw on my screen last season. this was a special treat. yes it would have been nice to see interesting dialogue, thoughts and lots of details. i sure get that from how and what you write. oh well. i think we know what we got last season. you can post anytime about anything you want and ill be happy. thank you this was great.
Sea wonderful as always!!! You always leave us wanting more!!!
Good luck in CA I’m sure you will find what you are looking for!!!
Post again when you can.
we’ll miss your stories. i suppose, Tina at that point hurt and she wanted to see Bette hurt back but by the time she also got hurt, it was a little late.
A very interesting chapter. Thank you
It is great to hear from you Sea….I hope Tina dna Bette actually talk about all of the craziness at the ean of Season1 and all of S2! Ilene left so many unanswered questions! It is just like Bette to ask Tina about her relationship with Helena while there are so many things Tina has to discuss with Bette concerning Candace!….the best defense is a strong offense!
Hope you get settled soon into something youlove!…..thanks, Paula
Wow I like what you have started here. I am so happy about the NYC visit and can’t wait to meet you. This is going to be such a blast.
Yea! You are back and it is wonderful. Thank you
Nice story Sea. good luck finding a place in CA. I wish i was going to NY.
Great story Sea! Glad to see you back, and we’ll wait for you to get settled, no matter what you write we’ll read. thanks
Well I guess I´m missing out on the big party in NY, but living across the alantic dosent help a bit. But do have a nice one. Your story is excellent and we all whish this is going to happen in S3.
Wow, I just popped in to see if any new post. I went back to reading your, “If It’s Meant To Be….”, and was pleasantly surprised to see that you had posted. At first, I thought maybe I hadn’t clicked back to the present, when I saw your name. But, broke into a gigantic delirious smile, when I realized it was really a new post. All the best in CA, and loads of fun, in NYC. When you get a chance, continue any story you wish, I’m happy with anything, you post, but you know which is my favorite favorite, right?!!! (smile)
Hey Seahurst, great to have you back!
I agree with all other comments here: I WANNA SEE THAT NEXT SEASON! I hope you are doing fine in California, can´t wait to get there myself! Awesome scenes, and please continue! And to all the lucky ladies out there who are going to be in NY on Aug. 30th am wishing you a blast! Enjoy it! Yours, BlueEyes
Hey Seahourse, am I asking too much, I can’t get enough of your writing, more please (consider developing a long story like old time).
Hey Sea – great to see a post from you. These are great scenes and they beg (or maybe I beg) to be continued.
Good luck finding housing,etc. and wrestling with the beast of block. I am confident that you will win. :}
What’s Aug. 30th?
welcome back- hope you continue this!
Scene I would love to see, scene 4 breaks my heart!