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    Razor Sharp Part II

    Story written on July 12, 2005 by +Alice_Pieszecki+.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55372
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    Dana feels like its her fault.


    Dana sat in the wooden chair that was at the end of the row, positioned in the grass. She was still- she couldn’t even speak or think. She held six red roses in her lap, and stared down at them.

    Tina, face red from crying, knelt down in front of Dana. “Dana, sweetie.. you can go up now.”

    Dana looked sympathetically at Tina, and slowly arose. She walked with her head down, and the roses in her arms against her chest. She walked up next to Shane and Carmen. Shane touched Dana’s shoulder, and her and Carmen walked away. Dana placed the roses on the casket in front of her. It was closed with a large bouquet of flowers in the middle, on the top. She rested her head on the casket, and sobbed. “Alice…”

    Bette and Tina walked up behind Dana. Tina buried her face in Bette’s shoulder, then looked at Dana. They both went up to Dana, and gently pulled her away and helped her sit down.

    Dana felt nothing but like she betrayed her love as she watched her casket lower into the ground.

    ***********

    Why is everything so blindingly white? Alice thought. She looked around, and saw the heart rate monitor. I’m in the hospital.. what the ***** happened?

    “Hey Al, its about time you wake up,” she heard a familiar voice say.

    Alice looked over and saw Shane. Then the door caught her attention as Tina, Bette and Kit walked in.. but she never saw Dana.

    “Look who’s back to the world of living,” Bette said, placing her hand on Alice’s arm.

    Kit sat down on the other side of Alice’s bed. “Girl, don’t you ever scare us like that!”

    Alice laughed a little, remembering what happened. “I’m sorry.. but I didn’t mean to try to commit suicide, I didn’t. And Tina, I’m sorry about your bathroom,” Alice said, remembering seeing all the blood before she passed out.

    “Its okay, babe. Just make sure it doesn’t happen again,” Tina replied with a sad smile.

    “Hey, where’s Angelica?” Alice asked.

    “She’s with Jenny and Dana. By the way.. Dana is really worried about you,” Bette said.

    Alice smiled softly.

    ***********

    *Three days later*

    Bette opened the door for Alice and helped her out of the car. They were at Alice’s apartment, and Bette was dropping her off.

    “Alice.. please don’t hurt yourself. You can go to any of us if you are upset. Here, call me at work if you need anything, okay? Keep yourself safe, Alice.”

    “I will,” Alice nodded. They hugged, and Bette got back into her car and drove away. Alice walked into her apartment, seeing the clothes strewn all over the place. She also saw a new message on her machine, and pressed play.

    “Al.. its me. I know you are coming home today, and I wanted to see you, but I have a Subaru campaign later and I won’t get out until late. I wanted you to know that just because we broke up doesn’t mean that I don’t love you anymore. I care about you so much and I love you more than I can explain. And.. I’m not with Lara anymore. I told her that she’s not you. That my love for you is stronger than my love for her. And I wanted to know… I wanted to know.. if I could have a second chance.” Beep.

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    1. wow! that’s all i could think to say, you really freaked me out in the beginning i swear i was about to cry! your story is really good and i really think you should continue to write. post soon it’s coming along greatly!

    4. I was going to say you have a lot of cajones killing Alice off in the second chapter in your story–but that is what makes it great, you kept me, as the reader, wanting to know more. I like what you are doing with this!

    7. Hey guys.. listen I’m sorry about not posting Part III yet, I’ll have it up as soon as I can. I have been really busy this week and any time I get to write, I am totally confused on what to write- so you guys really have to send me some ideas, I will be really greatful. +A_P+

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