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“Oh my God,” I uttered, almost inaudibly. She always looks…good enough to eat.
Bette grinned, and turned to look at me, setting down the book she was reading as she reclined on the lounge chair by the pool.
“How was your day?” Bette asked.
“Much better now,” I replied. “Traffic was hectic, the meeting was completely unproductive, and I feel like I wasted the better part of a Saturday that I could have been spending with you.”
“Why don’t you go change into your bathing suit and we can relax for a while before getting ready to go out for dinner.”
“That’s by far the best offer I’ve had today,” I replied, trying to shift gears out of work mode and into a more enlightened state of mind. “I’ll be back shortly.”
I slipped my suit jacket off as I approached the patio doors. It felt as though I was stripping away frustration as the uniform of corporate greed was removed from me.
I stopped in to look at Angelica, fast asleep, before continuing on to the master bedroom. I love the smells in this house. It feels like home to me. Being here allows me to forget any thing negative going on in my life. It’s just right to be here. I walked over to the dresser and pulled out my black bikini, setting it on the bed before entering the ensuite to rinse off the remnants of the day.
I turned the shower on to get the hot water flowing through the taps while I continued to remove what was left of my clothing. I stepped into the shower, revelling in the sensation of the water as it ran down my back. I filled my palm with lavender body wash, rubbed my hands together and started massaging it into my stomach and over my breasts. I saw the shadow through the frosted glass shower door before I heard the latch release, soon followed by the mellow tones of a clearly aroused voice.
“Is it okay if I join you?” Bette asked quietly.
“I’d love it if you did.”
Bette quickly took off her bikini and almost immediately took over soaping me up. I just closed my eyes and enjoyed feeling her hands wander over me. Fuck she knows how I enjoy being touched. My hands reached to touch her in exactly the same way she was touching me. Slowly, sensuously, we explored each other. I couldn’t distinguish whether it was her breath I was feeling on my shoulders, or the steam rising from the heated water as it beat down up on us.
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F*CK WHAT NITEMARE!GGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRR!
That was great. I was completely fooled until I read that Tina hadn’t had an orgasm as powerful in a year. Bette would never let that happen. LOL. But still didn’t expect Henry. PP when you can.
Reality sucks!!!!(LOL)
Oh, wow… I love when I’m completely surprised as I was just now… even when the surprise is being interrupted by the horror that is Henry. Your writing is just beyond words – I know it seems like an oximoron, but when you think about it, it really isn’t. Thank you.
Damn, I thought it was Bette and Tina. If she feels this way she needs to get out of that bed of rocks. Go and see if she can reclaim her woman. thanks
… Oh shit, reality does strike. From the uber-sexy to the very much unsexy, Tina must have had a heart attack.
Good one, JKS… and btw I loved these words too “I have stories brewing…” Thanks!
This is a great beginning to a story, if only you would continue. pretty please!!
I am so happy to have found your post today – your writing is always so great – as much or as little as you have time for I’ll read it all. Thank you.
She’s done alright. Bye, Henry. Nice one, jks.
Who turned on the cold water? I was on cruise then someone threw my transmission into reverse. I’ve never switched gears so fast! JKS, you had me going there, then you dropped me! Thanks for the daydream!
That was awesome JKS…you almost feel sorry for her but she made the choice and if she hurries up she can try to fix it cause looks like someone else is gonna be turning Bette’s head soon.
I’m with techgal on this one. If I was a teenage boy, I’d feel like I had just been caught mid-fap by my mom. Shrinkage, man. Pure shrinkage. But the year thing sort of gave it away too. PPS!
God it was so hot, then… just sad. Wow, tremendous job!
why is henry even there? tina, get back with bette, it’s an order
This is my first comment ever. And I just wanted to tell you that that was fucking excellent.
fabulous!
O my !? You may need to help them out here Swim, i think Tina is in need …….! Wicked as usual, thank you for your time in posting.
oh you naughty woman!?! that was delicious. thanks.
Oh fuck…you had me until the words about a year ago, LOL good one Swimmie. Glad to hear you’ve some new stuff brewing, can’t wait :o)) Thanks for this one.
You got me JKS! I didn’t see that one cumming (LOL) at all……
Damn it hendick!
ooooo you are a teaser! I hope that the part with henry will be the nightmare!LOL
He JKS, A new post from you is always a cause to celebrate and this one was the prefect short story. It was full of heat and lust and then the unpleaseant taste of reality. Can’t wait to read whatever you manage to post. Know that there is a legion of fans waiting for every word. Breathtakingly brilliant. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
GODDAMN HENRY!…Always lurking, still in places where he isnt wanted!……and just when you think its safe to go back into the water eh!!!lol….Love your writing!
Well, fuck. Or not.
WOW!!!! THat felt like Tina was really with Bette. But to wake from that must have really sucked. To here Henry in the bathroom damn. Tina you maid your bed now live with it. Thanks Great Chapter PPS
OMG! That was awesome jks!