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Rebuilding Chapter 5 – Finale
“T, I’m being serious.”
“I know babe. I just couldn’t deny my feelings for you any more. I was afraid you moved on, and I would never be able to get you back. Every time I spent any time with you, I realized that you were still everything I ever wanted and needed. No one else could make me feel like you do just by walking in a room. And, you are such a great mom to Angie, how could I not want you back?”
“So, suddenly because I was seeing someone else, you wanted me back?”
“No, the only thing I want is for you to be happy. I thought that I could hide my feelings knowing you were happy, but I couldn’t. This, us, isn’t just because you were seeing Jodi. It’s because you are the love of my life, and will always be the love of my life.”
“But why now? I’m not sure I understand what changed.”
“Well, it took me a while to finally figure things out. After we both hurt one another, I wasn’t sure if there was anything that we could salvage. I knew we would always be parents to Angelica, but I wasn’t sure what we would be, even if we could be friends. This may not make sense, but I have always loved you. There were times that you may have infuriated me and I wasn’t necessarily in love with you, but I have always loved you. I don’t know that I could ever stop loving you.”
“I love you too, T. Why did you wait though, if you’ve felt like this for so long?”
“Because I wasn’t sure that you felt the same way. I didn’t know if you would take another chance with me after everything, especially since you were now dating Jodi. You seemed happy. I didn’t want to complicate that.”
“T, Jodi was the first person that I felt a connection with since you. We had things in common, like art, and she challenged me. It felt so good to have someone to go home with and wake up with again. But, there were problems. She didn’t like children, and there were no gray areas in her world. She was very opinionated, and let her opinions known, which didn’t always make things easy for me at work. There are times that a bit of diplomacy can go a long way.”
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(40 votes, average: 3.85 out of 5)
Interest was waning? Oh dear, I just found this story. Thank you for writing, I really enjoyed this story and your alternate ending for 509. I look forward to reading your epilogue and future stories!
“Interest was waning?” I disagree. Looking at the view counts you had strong numbers. I really liked this story, and thought that a solid foundation had been established in order for this story to continue and thrive. I hate to hear that you are ending it. Hopefully, you will reconsider and continue on with it.
this story was great. I like your take on season 5. I agree it was good in Ilene’s version but yours is great. Especially for a first timer. keep it up!
GREAT!
Hmm, obviously I’m on someone else’s computer. Oh well, I’m pretty sure you know who I am. Third day in and it’s going really well! Anyway…back to the story. Thanks for providing an alternate ending. Bette waffling on telling Jodi just didn’t make any sense. I hope you find the time to write more stories soon.
Well QL, I certainly enjoyed the story. I hope you do write an epilogue or perhaps a sequel! Nice NC-17 for a first go!
I loved it too! Really great! thanks!
Perfect
Oh bummer, do you really have to end this story? I was really getting into it. Please continue or consider writing another story.
My interest wasn’t waning I promise, just this pesky thing called work got in the way of timely reading! Thanks for such a beautiful ending, hopefully you will bring us a sequel or another story (maybe you already have and I just have to find it).
What a Great story!!!! I so hope you writ more. Thank you PPS
thank u, lovely story and ending. look 4ward to more.
Interest was waning? I don’t think so, it takes a little time or a few chapters sometimes for a story to catch on. There are so many excellent stories on this site, and this one is one of many and just starting. Please give it a chance, really don’t think you should end it now. Just my opinion. Thanks for posting.
My interest certainly hadn’t waned. This was a really good story, adn I hope you find time to write again soon. Thanks, QL.
Loved it! I could read a happy story about these 2 all day long!! Can’t wait for the next!
i love it and im looking forward to read lots of ur storyes in the furure
Really liked your story! Hope more will folllow….soon!
I just found your story and read all 5 chapters. Really enjoyed it. Hope there is an epilogue or a sequel. Looking forward to more.
That was awesome and hot as ever!