CARMEN

I start to leave and she grabs my wrist and turns me around

Shane: can we talk about us!?

She blurts out quickly I glare at her

Carmen: There is no us. Us was Destroyed the second you chose not to show up at our wedding!

I’m surprised at the coldness of my voice, I see her face cringe in shock and recognize the pain in her eyes. So I simply walk out.

SHANE

I can’t say anything, I watch the only woman I ever loved, walk out of my office and I stand there frozen in terror.

I feel like smiling because I saw her crying because she left, angry for leaving her, and I feel like killing myself because she doesn’t love me….

I quickly get done preparing everything for the party and call Alice

Alice: YO!

 I try hard for my voice not to break

Shane: hey Alice, can you bring Shay to the party, I uh I have an emergency and I can’t bring him

Alice: but you worked so hard—

Shane: I know but I…can’t bring him…Please?

Alice: alright I’ll take him

CARMEN

It’s seven thirty, apparently this was a party for the little black haired boy. His name is Shay, I don’t know why he has a party, apparently its not his birthday, its a great party, she planned this whole thing…but she hasn’t shown up

DANA

I show up at WAX after practice and everyone’s already there

Dana: Alice!

I get to her hug her from behind and kiss her cheek

Alice: hey

She gives me a quick peck on the lips

Dana: where’s Shane?

Alice: I dunno, but I know why she’d not here

She points up at the DJ booth and we see Carmen being worshiped by a bunch of 12 year olds

SHANE

I’m sitting in the backyard taking vodka shots. When Bette shows up

Bette: hey why aren’t you with Shay?

Shane: well….she’s….she’s the DJ

Bette sits down next to me

Bette: and you don’t wanna see her?

Shane: no, she doesn’t wanna see me

There’s an awkward silence until I laugh, Bette gives a slight smile

Bette: what is it?

I felt so vulnerable for the first time I opened up….to Bette

Shane: I don’t- I don’t even know how I feel, I feel useless, stupid, I can’t think, she’s all I have in my head and its killing me! And yet I can’t help but love it because it won’t let me forget her it won’t let me stop loving her….and I just don’t know what to do

Bette hugged me tight

Bette: go get her

It’s 8:30 and I’m driving frantically as fast as I can until I pull up to WAX see her car is still there and I quickly went inside and I see her putting away her equipment, she walks into the DJ office to get another box.

I burst through the door and kiss her.

I feel her soft lips on mine, smell her sent again, her hands are messing up my hair as I hold her head in my hands, caressing her neck, surprised to feel the tears flow down my cheeks.

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 so what do you guys think?? 

 so I’m thinking up a story where they’re teenagers….what do you think about that?