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Reprisal Reprised- Chapter 14
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Lee looked at her, wondering what had just happened. She knew Bette well enough though to realize when to let something go, and this appeared to be one of those times.
“You sure?” she softly said as she reached over and brushed some hair back from her face.
“Definitely” smiled Bette as she picked up the bottle of wine that Lee had placed on the table. “Chinese ok?” she asked as she made her way to the kitchen.
“Yeah” she answered as she began to follow Bette. “Perfect” she whispered as she simply shook her head in wonderment.
“So, why did you decide not to go to
“Just a really long day” sighed Bette.
“What was so long about it? I thought that you were really looking forward to going tonight.”
“I was” said Bette as she loaded her chopsticks with a bite of noodles. “But, I didn’t really sleep well last night which made today interminably long and knew that I wouldn’t be much company.”
“Well, I’m with you and you’re company enough.”
Bette just shrugged her shoulders and took the bite of food that she had been holding over the container.
Lee continued to watch Bette and finally rested her chopsticks down into another container.
“Do you want to tell me now or later?” asked Lee.
“Tell you what?” asked Bette as she swallowed her bite.
“What’s going on.”
Bette looked over at Lee and knew that she was going to have to tell her at some point, so now seemed to be as good a time as any.
Resting her own chopsticks in a container, Bette reached for the glass of wine that was in front of her. Taking a deep sip, she returned it to the table and rested back against the sofa.
Turning to look over at Lee, she said “Do you remember Tina?”
“As in ex-wife Tina?”
“Yes, as in ex-wife Tina.”
“Well, I certainly never met her but I know who she was to you. Why?”
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Oh the drama and the angst! Great chapter!
bette porter dose not rn so stop it!!!!!!!!!!! go and see tina like yesterday post soon!
bye bye Lee ..you will be around so long..lol..B&t need to talk and ask all of the question they have inside their hearts..amazing chapter..cant wait for more thanks :o)
Another great chapter Skip. Love this story and can’t wait for another chapter. please….soon.
Honestly? For a moment I was thinking that when Bette asked “Bedroom?” Lee was going to say “too far”, and send Bette panicking. I just love where you’re taking this.
I didn’t know I was holding my breath until I finished reading this. Skip, how do you do that to me. I don’t know who to feel worse for…Bette or Tina or maybe even Lee, because she will most definetly be a casualty if Tina has her way. Great chapter!
Lee will be on her way soon enough.Thanks Skip.
thanks for making my blood run cold skip. god she can be so stubborn. god the pain. thanks skip. im trusting you, havent steered me wrong yet. be nice. thanks
This story is yummy! I’m a sucker for the fall guy…poor Lee, she seems so nice, too bad she’s going to be the one that gets hurt! I was thinking that Tina was going to go over to Bette’s when she said she wasn’t coming…I sure hope she doesn’t go over now!
such drama…i think it will be better if bette will let lee go, it will be hard on her, and they are not that strong anyway…bette needs to talk to tina first before making any decisions…i hope B&T will be together soon
Smooth as french silk pie! I’m liking Lee. Bette is struggling against the Tina current, but I think she’s gonna go down. When that happens, can I have dibs on Lee?Thanks!
You know what, everybody? There are a legion of decent, perfectly acceptable women who get left in the T&B wake. Lee, Sara (soon not to be of this world), and I’m sure there are many others. Let’s have a lottery, shall we, to see who gets B&T’s leftovers.
Hey Skipton that was so great but I’m just crack me up with techgal hey that was so funny I don’t think I can’t think to have Bette leftover HA HA HA Whoa! OK! hey techgal that was funny Please continue post soon Thanks Skip!!
What can I say? Always a pleasure to read your writing. I look forward to more whenever you’re able to update.
This is the first time that I’m leaving a comment on your posting but I just want to let you know that I love your writing and that I really appreciate what you’ve been sharing with us readers. I haven’t read this chapter yet but I’m working hard on trying to catch up. Now, back to my reading and will leave more comments once I’m all caught up.
Kick Lee to the curb, no offence Lee but our girls belong together. Another awesome chapter Skip, please post soon
hmm bette seems pretty deep in her disliking of tina rite now..lets c where u take them skip
“I just sometimes wonder if I’ll ever be able to make her understand.” Yeah, me too. On another note, Lee’s right, her relationship with Bette will change (is changing…i.e. their conversation & the outpouring of emotion from Bette). It’s good that she recognizes this upfront so she can start preparing herself for, well… so she can start preparing herself period. And Skip, I’ll have you know that I will not ‘skip’ this story even if you don’t honor my request. Okay, the whole Bette backing over T with her car was a bit harsh but I was all riled up after reading that previous chapter. *shakes head in shame* It took me forever to calm down. I even cringed when I saw this post from you. I’ll play fair from now on. Please forgive me. I like Tina. I like a healthy Tina. Repeat 100 times. Your writing is so dynamic yet delicate. What a balance. What an undeniable talent you have. Whew.
Lee and Bette’s relationship has shifted, Lee is so right…Tina has got a hell of a job on her hands to get Bette back, I don’t think Lee is going to give up so easily. Thank you.
i am always bowled over by your incredible talent! your writing is always so satifying no matter the level of angst! Thank you for sharing.
amazing as always……..!!!!!!!!
Apparently I have some catching up to do…13 chapters or so – that’s making me a very happy camper because your work is an absolute pleasure to read. Thanks for writing.
Another chapter very well thought out and well executed. Thank you for writing.