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    Reprisal Reprised- Chapter 15

    Story written on November 11, 2005 by Skipton.
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    “But you’re not saying no, Bette” she smiled as she felt the subtle shift in Bette’s position.

     

    “I really do have to go, Al” said Bette.

     

    “Just think about what I said Bette, that’s all I’m asking.”

     

    “I’ll talk to you later” she said, promising nothing.

     

    Closing her phone, Alice stayed where she was for just a minute, hoping she was doing the right thing for her friend.  Bette had never been the same since Tina walked out on her and it was her hope that their eventual reconciliation would bring both of them, Bette and Tina alike, back to a place of happiness in their lives because as they all knew, neither Bette nor Tina was 100% complete without the other.

     

    “Here we go” said Alice as she pushed herself off of the counter to make her way back to the living room where Tina was waiting.

     

     

     

     

    “Having fun?” Shane asked Alice.

     

    “Never a better time to be had” she smiled in return, raising her glass in toast.  Surveying the room, she saw that everyone seemed to be enjoying themselves.

     

    Looking at her watch, she saw that it was 7:10 and no appearance by Bette.

     

    Turning towards the kitchen, she saw Tina taking furtive glances in the direction of the door, willing Bette to appear.

     

    “Gotta be somewhere?” Shane asked her.

     

    “Nope, nowhere” she said as she looked back at Shane.

     

    “You think she’ll show?”

     

    “Who the ***** knows?” said Alice.

     

    “Know what I think?” she asked.

     

    “No, what do you think, Shane?” asked Alice as she turned away from the door to look at Shane.

     

    “I think that she’ll show up” she smiled at the exact same moment that Bette walked through the front door.

     

    Turning to see who had walked in, Alice turned back towards Shane and said incredulously, “What the fu-”

     

    Shane just smiled at her, but remained quiet.

     

    “You really are Yoda” she said in amazement as she turned to welcome Bette.

     

    Watching Alice walk over to where Bette was, Shane just chuckled and said, “Yoda who happened to just see her car pulling up.”

     

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    4. Yipppee twice in the one day. How do you manage to do it, I could see them walking out to the car, I could feel the tension, feel the pain, see the tears. You are a genius please continue. If you had to write a book about B&T I would read it & read it & read it. In fact i have the 6 month chapter which i have printed off and take with me where ever I go, that I dont have a PC to check Fanfiction. By-the way miss 6 months chapter loved it was my favourite of B&T getting back together. You are the best Skip. xx

    5. OMG..im glad Tina is finally breaking the ice..and Bette is leting her to do this..i hope they will talk soon im curious too..lol..cant want for more thanks ;o)

    7. hey skip – i only have 10 finger nails and 10 toe nails. if i give them all to you now, after i pull them out myself will the pain be easier of going through what you are so elegantly going to put us through?in the words of alice, “here we go”

    8. This story is so strange for me, here you have two people hurting for different reasons. Tina’s hurt is based on the fact that she is finally at that place where she feels able to love and be with Bette but it’s not quite possible. While Bette is hurting cause her being is shrouded in the remnants of losing the woman she loves. This is having the weirdest effect on me. Here I am smiling and having fuzzy feelings while simultaneously experiencing a strong sense of hurt and despair. I can only attribute this to the wicked strokes you are carefully applying to this masterpiece Skippy.

    9. thank you so much for writing, the stories you write are so real and honest. Thankyou for not rushing them, too many good stories are rushed and then over…and thankyou for posting so soon….

    11. My heart was in my throat the entire time reading this! I don’tknow how many more of these angst ridden chapters I can take, skip! Can u just fast-forward get them together for that talk already! Geez! (thank you)

    18. Skip, loved it! I love that your reading is so real and true to the characters. I’m glad that they’ll talk and hopefully the gift is something that won’t hurt Tina or make her regret the past more, they need to move forward!

    20. wow, i was holding my breath the whole time, it’s so intense…at least we are moving forward and bette agreed to talk…oh, she better listen to tina and see her reasons…thanks

    24. Excellent, as usual, and maybe even better. My Tina-meter just went from zero to 2. I remain stony-hearted and skeptical, however. I am holding out for an explanation to rival Deborah Kerr’s in ‘An Affair to Remember’ “I was looking up, it was the closest thing to heaven…” Thanks!

    25. skip… i just caught up..love this story… and i’m glad that bette is willing to at least talk with tina… now i have faith…so please be careful with my bette and tina heart…

    27. *Pumps fist into the air* Yes!! Thank you soo much for giving Bette the grace to be the bigger person and for allowing Tina the chance to explain things to Bette. Love this story, Skip! Thank you!!!

    28. Wow! That’s all I can say. Love the drama, love the angst, love the pace, love that Bette is giving a chance to hear Tina out even though she’s not promising anything. Oh, how your words keep us wanting more each time despite the heartahce…. Thank you.

    35. Wknds are my only chance now to catch up on the 50+ stories I started reading 2 months ago…..Lee is very bright; she knows that life as she once knew it is going to definitely change. I just wouldnt have her packing her bags just yet though; I dont want this to be too easy for Tina since she is the one that slithered out in the middle of the night…..As always, thank you for another great chapter……until next wknd I remain……

    36. skippy..you are trying to drive us nuts aren’t you. GOd..please have them talk, have some drama, then start working on their relationship..oh and please get rid of Lee. please post really soon.

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