LesFan

Lesbian Fan Social Network

    Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, November 9, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    Reprisal Reprised- Chapter 19

    Story written on January 8, 2006 by Skipton.
     Login to add story to favorites
     Login to add author to favorites
    30 votes, average: 4.30 out of 530 votes, average: 4.30 out of 530 votes, average: 4.30 out of 530 votes, average: 4.30 out of 530 votes, average: 4.30 out of 5 (30 votes, average: 4.30 out of 5)
    You need to be a registered member to rate this post.     Loading ... Loading ...
    Genre(s):
    Rating:
    fanfiction(s):
    Character(s): ,
    Number of Comments: 39
    Words: 12664
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=58899
    Author Notes:

    N/A

     

    “How long are you going to be here?” asked Bette.

     

    “I can leave whenever” said Tina, searching Bette for any sign as to what was going through her mind.  “I’m sitting over there with Al” she said as she nodded her head in the direction of her table.  “Why don’t you just come find me when you’re done with Kit?”

     

    “Ok” said Bette as she started to back away.  “I shouldn’t be too long.”

     

    “Ok” smiled Tina as she watched Bette backing away.  “Bette?” she said just as Bette turned away.

     

    “Yeah?” she said looking back over her shoulder at Tina.

     

    “It’s good to see you” she said with a smile and a wink of her eye.

     

    “Thanks” smiled Bette shyly, “you too.”

     

    Returning to her table, Tina couldn’t help the smile that was on her face.  Just seeing Bette and knowing that she was back in town had somehow made everything seem alright, or at least more right than things had been with her gone.

     

    “Don’t you look like the cat with a belly full of canary?” teased Alice as Tina took her seat back at the table.

     

    “Hardly” sighed Tina with a roll of her eyes.  “It’s just really good to see her.”

     

    “Do you think that I have ever made anyone smile like that before, the way that you are right now?”

     

    “I’m sure you have, Al” chuckled Tina.  “You make people smile all the time.”

     

    “Like who?” she pressed.  “I wanna hear names and dates if you have ‘em.”

     

    “Al” she pleaded but knew that she was not going to get out of this conversation.  It didn’t matter though, because regardless of their topic of discussion, she was only barely paying attention as her real focus was on the closed door that led into Kit’s office.

     

    35 minutes later, Tina saw the door that she had been so vigilantly watching, open up.

     

    “Finally!” she exclaimed.

     

    “What?” asked Alice.  “Finally what?”

     

    “Uh, nothing” Tina quickly said, not realizing that she had said that out loud.

     

    “Have you heard anything that I’ve been saying at all?” she asked in amazement.

     

    “Of course I have” she said as she watched Bette hugging Kit goodbye.

    Page 6 of 8« First‹ Previous45678Next ›Last »
    «
    FF Main Page
    »

    Comments

    1. I think you should post another chapter in a few more hrs. lol.Like this story and impatient to read next chapters.Nice to see that Bette is not the grovelling one

    7. skip, gonna break our hearts arent ya? Or are you gonna make this fan fiction site more exciting with Bette & Tina back where they belong than what Season3 is going to give us. I Wonder?

    8. Cat Tee vs Canary Be, hoho. What will Bette do in the next few hours? I hope it’s dumping Lee… We really didn’t see her around a lot, rite? haha

    15. skip, as always, thank you. I’m like a gazillion miles away (in the far east), S3 Ep1 is being aired as I write this. I definitely prefer your story to what is supposedly being written by IC for bette and Tina this season. Please post like…..now would be really great! Okay, as soon as you can. We’re dying for the conversation.

    16. I don’t have Showtime, so I have to rely on Fan Fiction to get me through. Please allow Bette and Tina to reconnect. It can be slow, just let Bette tell Tina that she wants to work things out.

    19. skip, Great chapter. Please let Bette and Tina get back together soon and make it slow and both of them taking there time with each other. I think Bette will dump Lee. PLEASE POST SOON!!!

    22. I feel were in for a let down, but I am hoping so very much that I am wrong. Please let them get back togther. Maybe Bette is jus setting up something to surprise Tina, I can dream can’t I.

    23. I’m waiting for the other shoes to fall,don’t believe it will be in Tina favor. You sort of get tired of being kick when you are down. you get up on your knees and wham,you get kicked again thanks

    24. Always a treat to see a chapter from you. You did a wonderful job of conveying that uneasy feeling of not knowing what’s going on. First with Tina’s conversation with Shelly and then when Bette returned. We take any bit of information, no matter how tiny and cling to it like a life preserver desperate that it will be what helps us to stay afloat in uncertain waters. It was best that Tina didn’t remember about Shutters, what ever decision that Bette comes to it needs to be by her own will. Not because she feels guilty or because Tina forces her hand, that way if she does decide to return to Tina there will be no doubt that it was an act of free will. Hmmm, do one of the things that Bette needs to take care of before she and Tina talk to let Lee down easy? Can’t wait for your next installment.

    25. Skip….read the chapter early this a.m., but did not have time to comment then. Wanted to say great chapter. Bette has a lot of stuff to process and needed space. As much as I like Alice, she just gets on my nerves sometimes….whether she belongs to IC or you. Pls carry on with your literary skills.

    26. A few more hours feels like a lifetime – that’s what it is! Excellent story. Hope Bette can see the love for Tina in her heart like the speck of light at the end of the tunnel, and follow it home.

    28. Skipton,Beautiful as always.I love the way that you carefully crafted this tender tale.Bette’ aloofness and Tina nervousness shout out from the page. I can’t wait to read what Bette has to sort out; Lee perhaps.You have to be true to yourself as Tina has finally realized now just to get Bette to the same place.I know that it will be messy. I now that it will be painful. I now that there will be tears; both of joy and of sorrow. And I know how well written it will be.Please continue soon as I will be on tender hooks until then.Many thanks,Your Loyal Fan.

    29. Bette is playing it close to the vest. You are so good at this stuff. I started out hating this Tina for the pain she caused Bette and me, lol. But now, I am cheering her on and hoping she and I get what we want…the two of them back together.

    31. I really love your story, your writing and your spot-on dialogue. Please post another excellent chapter very soon! Thanks so very much for writing and sharing.

    35. Skip…I know what you’re doing! You want Bette to get her personal life cleaned up so that she be free to go back to Tina right? Awesome post again Skip!!

    37. Be still my beating heart! Bette is back and I’m not feeling a connection!!Skip please be careful my life is in your hands!:) Shelly called Tina? hmmmm..

    38. ”And maybe Skip’s unpredicatbleness ain’t such a bad thing.” (as Alice would say). As much as I wonder where you’re taking this, I’m trying to remain settled because we’re in good hands, right? I’m also trying to remind myself that I like Tina even though she’s being quite pushy at the moment. I understand she’s anxious, but please give Bette some time before bugging the hell out of her. I’m pretty riled up right now, so I guess I’ll practice my breathing in attempt to calm down. Loved it…

    39. Ah the torturous, delightful suspense of waiting to see what Bette will say and do. She seems very cool and in control. Tina, on the other hand, is wearing her desperation like a billboard, stopping just short of clingy. I think Alice is right, Tina better keep her expectations in check.Nicely done chapter, Skipton. Love this story.

    Leave a Reply