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    Reprisal Reprised- Chapter 9

    Story written on September 27, 2005 by Skipton.
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    “How many bottles of wine do you have?” asked Alice.

     

    “I don’t know, Al” chuckled Bette.  “I’ve never really taken the time to stop and count ‘em.”

     

    “Most people need to stop and smell the roses.  You, my friend, need to stop and count the bottles” she giggled.

     

    Reaching for the bottle of wine that was on the table between their two lounge chairs, Bette held it up to see how much of this bottle had made its way into Alice‘s glass.

     

    “Nice work, Al” said Bette as she placed the bottle back on to the table.

     

    “What?” she asked.  “It’s been a long day.”

     

    “Really?” smiled Bette.  “Tell me what’s happened to you today?  Make me feel a little better about mine.”

     

    “Your what?”

     

    “Day” said Bette as she stared at the light of the moon reflecting off of the pool.

     

    “Well” she began.  “One of my best friends in the world had some disturbing news.”

     

    “Oh yeah?” asked Bette as she continued to stare at the pool.

     

    “Yeah.”

     

    “And what was that?” she asked, turning towards Alice.

     

    “Her ex is back in town and she’s not all that psyched about it.”

     

    “Sounds a little familiar” said Bette as she turned her attention back towards the pool.

     

    “So” said Alice as she watched Bette staring at the pool.  “What are we going to do?”

     

    “Do?” asked Bette as she looked at Alice.  “I don’t plan on doing anything.”

     

    “Bette” she said in explanation.  “A.) Tina is back in town.  B.) She told you that she is still in love with you, actually, strike that.  She told you that she never stopped loving you and finally, 3.) She said that she never wanted to divorce you.”

     

    Alice looked at Bette and patiently awaited her response.

     

    “That last item on your list should have been C” said Bette.

     

    “What?” asked Alice.

     

    “You said A, B and then 3 when you were listing things.  It should either be 1, 2, and 3 or A, B and C.  Not a combination of.”

     

    Alice looked at Bette as if she had two heads.  “Bette” she sputtered.  “Who gives a *****?  You are missing the point here.”

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    2. im glad Alice is there for Tina..again..when she really need somebody..it must be really sad be all by herself..Bette still look after her too and she must talk to Tina and ask what the hell happened…and i hope you explain why Tina left soon.. i´m an anxious person..lol..another amazing chapter cant wait for more

    15. wonderful perspective on Bette and Alice – now what’s the skinny on Tina don’t make us wait too long – it’s too intriquing. As always your writing is so so fine.

    16. I love your version of Bette! I’m glad that she’s learned a few things over the years. Al’s a good friend. Bette and Tina are lucky to have her around. Great chapter, skip! Definitely worth the wait. :)

    17. skippy, just dont playing us, k. bette sooo loves her some tina still. sending over al spot on. al will be the messenger that she was sent to be for bette. thanks. and soon please.

    18. Okay, I’m getting a warm fuzzy since one Bette Porter has such a big heart. I’m still wary of Tina though. Enjoyed the dialogue between Alice & Bette. Most endearing. Great chapter Skip!

    20. Thanks so much for this update. I loved the exchange between Alice and Bette, and you captured the electric tension between Alice and Tina, and their subsequent ease with each other so very well. This is a fabulous story–can’t wait to see where you take us with it.

    21. Boones Farm Select Oh the memory of a many of Boones Farm from my youth, I was laughing hard at the at one. Wonderful pace and sentiment in this one. Thanks so much for the story.

    23. Wow that was great and Bette does have a big heart for her to understand what it felt like to be alone and to know how hard that would be for Tina..Can’t wait to find out what kept Tina away..Please post soon and Good Luck with your Katrina survivor..You have a big heart also.

    24. Two great scenes between friends make this an excellent chapter. Bette has a surprising amount of empathy for Tina. I, too, am waiting to see how Tina will explain herself and how you will write it all in your superlative way. Thanks so much! Good luck with your new pet.

    25. Another wonderful chapter Skip. The dialogue in both scenes was perfect. Its nice to see that Bette still wants Tina to have support, even after she left her and went to NY.

    26. I glad that Bette asked Alice to go see Tina she has been there and knows how it feels. If yow need a friend,guess Alice and Shane would be it. Guess you will tell us why she left. thanks

    27. Tina has a ton of fences to mend, and I can’t wait to hear what she’s been up to.

      It was neat of you and your family to open your home to a pet left homeless by the hurricane. We all know that you and your inspiration have biggie sized talents, nice to know you have biggie sized hearts to match.

    31. Skipton,

      Another wondrous addition to this superb story.

      It is comforting to see that the support system is still in place for all of the gals.
      Even though they have all been through tough times the love, understanding and generosity is constant. These things are the measure of true friendship and bonding.
      It may be years since they last saw each other; the separation was sudden but the old habits like a pair of comfy slippers they just slip on and you soon forget you are wearing any.

      This has been poignantly crafted in this brilliant installment. It is a testament to the high quality and standard of your writing that so many fans are devoted to this fabulous fan fiction.

      These are intense and emotive times but through persistence and persuasion the rewards of reconnection are worth all of the short term turmoil and upheaval.

      I will be constant in my desire to follow this tale and will be here waiting and watching.
      Your Loyal Fan

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