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They sat and talked while they waited for the fish to bake. "So, I noticed you don’t wear a ring but is there a frantic boyfriend out there back home waiting for you?" Bette asked curiously.
"Boyfriend? No," Tina laughed. "There was a girlfriend though up to recently, until I found her in bed with my mother," she muttered under her breath.
"What?" Bette asked shocked.
Tina shrugged, "I was seeing a woman for about a year, Kate, and about two months ago I went to visit my mother and found them in bed together. It’s one thing to share clothes with your Mom but I don’t share bed partners," Tina grimaced. "I was really upset for a while but Jenny took me away on this mini vacation and I finally admitted to myself that the relationship hadn’t been working for a long time anyway. I was just too lazy to do anything about it. Luckily, dear old Mom, took care of that problem for me. I think they are still together. I bet you’re sorry you asked," Tina said chuckling.
"Wow! I didn’t see that one coming," Bette admitted, "but at least I know why you were checking me out at the lagoon," she smirked.
"Don’t let it go to your head Porter," Tina laughed serving the fish and they ate them in companionable silence.
"The fish was wonderful Tina, I was wondering if you wanted to peruse the dessert menu before the waiter gets back?" Bette joked with a twinkle in her eye.
"Hmmm, is this like my choice of fish or fish?" Tina guessed with a light laugh.
"How did you know?" Bette smiled producing a pile of bananas. She peeled one and passed it to Tina. "We’re lucky, there seems to be an abundance of fruit and as long as we have fresh water and an occasional fish we can hold out here for quite awhile," she said watching Tina’s lips closing over the banana, gasping at the sensual way she approached the fruit. Bette shook her head to clear it of the arousing images that suddenly popped into her head.
Tina munched on her banana and noticed Bette hadn’t eaten one yet? "Don’t like bananas?" she asked innocently. She closed her lips over the top of another one to bite the stem, breaking it easily so she could peel it back before offering it to Bette whose jaw dropped immediately.
"Uhhh, uhhh yeah," Bette stammered trying to recover her equilibrium. She took the offering from Tina and a slight shock passed through her hand where Tina’s fingers brushed hers. She raised the banana to her lips and Tina watched her closely.
Tina felt a shiver pass through her body as she watched Bette devour her fruit in record time. Her eyes followed Bette’s tongue when it snaked out to swipe at a piece of fruit stuck on her lip and she was suddenly jealous of the lip.
She got up abruptly and headed over to their cozy enclosure to prepare for bed. Bette had done a wonderful job with it. They had a makeshift roof and they slept on the raft she had turned upside down, to keep them up off the ground. She carefully swept the area each night with a branch to remove any unwanted friends that may have found their way in during the day, mostly an occasional sand crab or spider. She had just finished when Bette brought her a bottle of water. They had ran out of water after the first couple of days, but Bette replenished their bottles each day from the fresh water in the lagoon.
"Thanks!" Tina said reaching for the bottle. She took a long drink and passed it back to Bette. Their eyes locked and she watched Bette slowly place her lips over the same bottle rim and drink. Tina couldn’t help but lick her lips and Bette’s eyes flared with passion. It was going to be a long night!
tbc by "aandy" and proofed by BnTPorter
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Hmmm…I wonder who will write the first NC17? It seems that they are getting close now. Great update Cls…over to you aandy!
What no mangos? Ahhh c’mon CLS…I think the ladies need a little more juice in their…ahh…fruit. Although I gotta say that was one damn hot banana. I’m waiting for the clothing is no longer necessary chapter so here’s hoping Bette doesn’t find a suitcase. Oh, and why didn’t they just burn Jodie’s corpse — ewww, she’ll probably come back as a zombie or some other creature from the undead. Andy, please post very soon!
Not as long as having to wait for the next post. This is an awesome tale of two women plane wrecked on a deserted island.
How sexy can anyone be just eat a banana. Jealous of the lip. Lets see if Andy can do as well as you. Tina mom doing her g/f how freaky is that. thanks
i will be loking at bananas differently… well i think maybe its time a wild pig made an appearence… just think how much fun it would be to watch bette try and catch it… and then tina cooking it… and ok whats this about jodie… is she going to haunt them… let her rot in piece…
Kate and Tina’s mom….eeeeeww that’s gross! I do like this story though. Since you two are sharing the workload, that means you guys can post twice as much, twice as fast, right?
Things are heating up in this little island paradise so there shouldn’t be any need for Bette to search for more clothing. :) Thanks for posting!
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that is so wonderful and exciting, I love the building tension that is growing between them, and I truly can wait for it to be a long night too. Thanks for writing this adventurous, unlike no other story, you always come with the new. Post soon. Love
I wish I were on “fantasy island” with Bette and Tina, ‘stead of a dimly lit cubicle in rainy MA…..let the daydreams commence. Great story, by the way ;)
lets see the first thought was the show lost, then gilian’s island, of course this could fantasy island as well, perhaps the blue lagoon?. totally gross tina’s mom amd her gf. bette needs to test her hunting skilling like wild boar, or polar bear like in lost,lol. i can the tension starting already with bananas of all things,lol :)PPS
Oh my….not sure if I will ever be able to look at a banana the same way…just picturing it was amazing. ; ) Keep posting…loving it and wondering what in the hell can Jodi do dead???
You really know how to mix it up cls…Tina’s mom waaahahaha…nice mix there…but I have prepared myself..I know you ladies are going to tease us..but cant wait for the journey..cause the destination is going to be so sweeet!!!!AWEOSM chpater…and as said before..LOVE THIS IDEA!!!!
i love island stories, lovers lost at sea…jb621 (LMAO LMAO, LMAO).. thanks for the update
“Just sit right back and you’ll hear a tale, a tale of a fateful trip, That started from this fanfic site, a L Word drama trip. CLS is a brilliant writing gal with Andy it will be divine, while BNT Porter -proofs every line. Proofs every line.” LOL!**I couldn’t get that damn Gilligan’s Island song out my head so I decided to make it my comment** Wonderful story. PS.
Wish I was there.
I will never be able to look at a banana again without thinking of the description. At least they are not antagonistic towards each other. OMG, if Jodi is coming back to haunt them or whatever, she is not dead, just unconscious like in the early days of this country when a person was thought to have been deceased and they really were not. That’s why wakes were started for someone to sit up with the deceased just in case they really were not gone. Hence, the phrase, “turning over in their graves.” Gruesome subject. Can hardly wait for the next chapter. PPS
Great update CLS! Now we know where they sleep and the promised tour the following day. We loved the sensual drinking of the water. Yep. For us it was meaningful. Now, back to Andy, right? Hmmm We think a description of what they see on their tour the following day is necessary. Also, some more in-depth talk would be welcome. Now, it would be Bette’s turn to say a bit more about herself. Keep the story unveiling. You are doing a wonderful job here. We are really enjoying the story. Keep the chappies coming! Hugs and kisses on both your cheeks. – Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick)
oh very erotic..more pls:D
yeah! was soon but i want more, pleeeeeaaaaassssseee, go on.I love this story and i wish I was there with Bette. :)