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Rescue Me, Chapter 14
Tina made her way through the kitchen, from the garage, and noticed the music playing, the smell of lavender scented candles and the soft lighting. “Well, Bette Porter, you certainly have set the mood,” she thought to herself. She saw the pool light from the living room and quietly made her way to the patio. As she stood in the doorway, she viewed Bette’s perfectly toned body lying face down on a floating raft. Her hands and feet were dangling over the sides in the water. She had her eyes closed and a small smile graced her face. She was wearing a black string bikini that just barely covered what was necessary for “PG13 Viewing.” Tina felt the slow burn starting within her. She eased her way on to the patio, doffing her clothing as she went. Now totally naked, she slowly and silently walked entered the water and made her way to this floating beauty. As she reached Bette’s side she was in awe of this vision before. She could not believe how fortunate she was to have found this woman. No one had ever made her feel like this woman did. She stood there in the shallow end of the pool over her love. She gently reached for the ties on Bette’s bikini top and tenderly pulled them releasing the sheer material as she kissed Bette’s shoulder lightly. Surprisingly, Bette did not startle, but her smile grew larger.
As Bette lay their in the pool, and as Tina approached, she could swear she could feel her, sense her presence, smell her scent. She felt goose bumps start to form on her skin and then as if on cue, she felt the confines of her swim suit top release and soft lips touch her skin. Bette slowly lowered herself from the raft and into the water facing Tina and realized this pristine beauty stood before her naked to the entire world. She was truly breathtaking.
Bette whispered, “Hi Baby, I missed you.”
Tina responded in a low voice, “Mmmm, me too you, now come here.” With that Tina reached out and Bette’s body to her own. She gave her a tender but ardent kiss. Bette was all too happy to return the fervor as she traced Tina’s lips with her tongue. Tina parted her lips and Bette’s tongue entered Tina’s waiting and wanting opening. Their tongues darted in and out of each other’s mouth in a well balanced dance. As Tina thrust her tongue into Bette awaiting *****, Bette sucked it hard not wanting to let go. Both women were undergoing a feverish escalation of emotion held at bay for what seems like an eternity. Their love for one another no longer had to wait. Tonight they would share it completely.
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(49 votes, average: 4.35 out of 5)
For the first time at NC-17..GOD DAMN HOT MAMA YOU GOOD..10 FABULOUS STARS FOR SOME HOT HOT LOVIN..THANKS…
Very, very good for your first time..*fans face*
That was worth the wait. Realy hot! Get going on the next chapter I love this story.
great story, i look forward to your next post
The smile is so big my face hurts. Now lets get rid of Eric. That is not going to be easy. thanks
I’m still trying to catch my breath. I’ve loved this story from the beginging and it just keeps getting better, work was so not the place to read this update. Damn, can’t wait for the encore. HOpefully Eric is not going to be to big of a pain in the ass.
I saw the post this morning and didn’t have time to read it before work. Shit..that was great mfh…now I need to shower. post soon
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, damn this is so sexy and amazing, love it. Post soon please, thanks!
Je**us…OMG OMG..whew lemme catch my breath…whew, okay DAMNNNNN that was so so very very hot. Remind me not to read this at work…DAMN DAMN!!!
WELL DONE MFH….I AM SITTING HERE NUMB. VERY TASTEFULLY DONE. YOU ROCK!!!!
I am the first for the NC-17 version….cool! Holy $#!& that was hot! Hot, hot, hot. I love it, I’ve been reading this story from the beginning without commenting for fear of jinxing a good story, but I have to let you know, you are the bomb. Thank you! Keep it coming.
i like your style, love the story and i’m now sitting here with a wide grin plastered over my face….thanks!
Bowing my head, with my hand holding yours, my lips on your forefingers: Thank you.
Now, I dont even care what U write. Anything comes from U is fantasy!
That was great i really enjoyed it hope you can post soon!!!
Wwooooooohhhhhhhooooooo! Heehee I’ve just finished reading them, I gotta put my head in the freezer just for a moment.
woooooooooo HoooOOOOooo….that was way HOT!!!!!!!!! LOL~
Okay, I’m getting in line for the cold shower!!! Great job for your first time…post soon.
medic that was HOT and SWEET at the same time. you had the right amount of anticipation from the beginning of the story until now. keep it up and post when you can.
Whoa! Whoa! very sexy finally your did a Great job WoooooHoooo! LOL! OMG! WOW! really HOT it’s about time they really getting ON LOL! Thank you Please continue post soon.
wow that was HOT. keep up the great writing and u are the best. B&T lovin at its best. post soon
shit, i just lost my ability to breath. i think i need an paramedic stat. excellent job mfh. you did an excellent job for your first time. god, girl that was good. post when you can. nd be safe out there.
I think it is a hoot that people equate Bette’s feelings to that of her car; if she left you drive it, she must be sprung!
Touché MFH….Touché!!!!! Not only did you explain it in your author’s note, but I liked your attention to detail when you italicized “their” bed! Now, there is no more bed of confusion…..pun intended!! *_*
NC-17 ~ Damn MFH, are you trying to send me into cardiac arrest? (thinking) For your first, this was absolutely fuckin’ INCREDIBLE!! (bumping my way to the front of the shower line) Move out the way *pushing* girl drummer! oops….didnt mean to make you fall.
woooooow..if is that only the first God help us with the others chapters..lol..so FUCKING HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!
K
That was totally hot. Excellent chapter, love this story.
Amazing!! HOTTTTTTTTTTTT!!