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Rescue Me, Chapter 17
“Hey babe, you’re finally home,” she says with a smile as she reaches up, not looking away from her book. He hand feels the bristle of five o’ clock shadow.
“What the *****. Eric what are you doing here,” she asks angrily.
“I came home early and wanted to see you,” says Eric.
“I can’t imagine why. Did you not here me tell you we are through,” says Tina.
“Oh come on Tina, you know you can’t survive without me. It’s just your hormones or something. I’m sure what ever is making you act this way will go away soon,” laughs Eric.
“I certainly hope so, Eric, because YOU are what is making me feel this way.”
Eric is now glaring at Tina. “Who the ***** do you think you are to talk to me like that Tina?”
Tina shouts, “I’m the woman you supposedly loved, but now I know that wasn’t so. You just treated me like a possession; something you would pull out to impress your friends.. You don’t care what I feel, you don’t care what I think, you only care about what you want. I’ve had enough Eric.”
Eric is now furious. “I’ll tell you when you’ve had enough, you ***** *****,” he screams. He moves toward Tina. She sees the rage in his eyes and starts to back up. She falls over the coffee table and lands between it and the sofa.
Eric is now towering over her screaming, “You stupid *****, you are nothing more than a useless piece of fluff. You’ll do what I tell you, when I tell you. Do you understand?” He draws his right arm back across his chest and backhands her across the face. She fall back to the floor.
Meanwhile
Bette is humming to herself as she makes her way up to the front door of Tina’s condo. She can’t wait to get inside and show Tina how much she loves her. As she reaches for the door ***** she hears shouting coming from inside the condo. She opens the door and enters to find a man standing over Tina. He raises his arm and strikes her across the face.
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(49 votes, average: 3.96 out of 5)
1st……..brb
OFFICER SHANE THATS FUNNY…Thanks for the great chapter…
Medic,
Lovin this story – crackin me up through the whole thing…”the Shane McCutcheon wrist twist” … uh-huh! HA HA HA Ha Ha Ha ha ha ha ha
OK, first of all, this is my first post with you. I kept seeing your story pop up, so I had to catch up. LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!! Second, I love your screen name! Crazy name, but you sure seem to know your business. But what I’d like to say is, there are sooo many talented writers on this site, but you, hands down, describe the art of kissing better than ANYONE. A lot of writers have great sex scenes, as well as yourself, (which I couldn’t even imagine writing–so kudos to all of you) but your kissing scenes are incredible. You always make me reread those lines and make me want to be a better kisser with my wife! Great job, I love the story. Looking forward to more.
Awesome, Bette you go girl, I probably would have done worse then just bent back his wrist. Gotta love Shane, he accidentaly trips, haha. Love these two, love the story, on with celebrating the one week anniversary of there first kiss.
that was great..as long as he stays away…oh by the way..thanks for posting..
Damn first Bette and Tina are so romantic and beautiful. And then Eric return with being kick ass by Bette that was awesome and a surprise handcuff by Officer Shane McCtucheon was so cool, love it. Ok now let see what Bette and Tina doing next. Post soon please, thanks!
Excellent chapter, go Bette. Love it.
snQQpy – i heart ya.
finally someone gets to beat erics ass. i love the paramedic porter on line one line. you are so cracking me up. i love this story. they are so fucking cute together. cant wait for more.
awww yay eric got his ass kick whooo hoo and shane a cop hahah greeeaaat lol bette the best i want her to kick someones ass for me!! lol amazing please post soon thanx byeness<338973598723
Eric the freakin asshole slapped Tina??!?!?!?! WTF? yeah..kick arse time,Bette!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOL~ way to go…
hey medic, that was great. Bette is such a sweet devil. my appetite for your story is insatiable. keep these 2 cumming for as long as you like! seriously though I love these characters. you have adjusted their personalities from the show, but in a very good way.
hey medic enjoyed this story very much . love how bette handled eric
Bette should have kicked his ass some more!!!!!!!! shane a cop love that!!!!!!!!!!! eric is not going to go quietly is he not?
She lowers herself into the bath and thinks about the past few days…She leans back in the tub, puts her head back and closes her eyes…She starts to relax and then doses off…Tina wakes when the bath water cools enough to give her a chill…She gets out of the tub and dries off.
So when did she actually wash?
Tina goes back to her book; she becomes so engrossed she doesn’t hear the key in the door.
I was sitting here scratching my head wondering when B & T exchanged keys; then my head started hurting when “Her hand feels the bristle of five o’ clock shadow.”
Now, although I am not a fan of any type of abuse, but I applaud Bette flippin’ the script on Eric………..WooooooooooHoooooooooo and coming to her woman’s rescue.
Post again soon MFH!!
I’m the Bitch that is going to kick your ass. Poor Eric tripped over something and busted his nose Poor stupid bastard. thanks
Man, No X-rays. Eric so needed hsi ass kicked.
you go Bette..lol..great chapter post soon