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Resolutions- Chapter 4
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Tina nudged her. “Al, you okay? You look pretty intense.”
Alice shook her head as if to clear her vision. “Sorry. I just….well, I just had this strange feeling is all.”
Jenny piped in, “Perhaps the stars are out of alignment in your solar system.”
Helena added, “ Here, try this. If this doesn’t make everything right in your universe, I don’t know what will.” She extended a truffle.
Alice grinned. “Helena, you have chocolate all over your chin.”
Papi smiled slyly, “Let me get that.”
Helena held up a hand. “Not so fast, lover. I’m storing it there to enjoy later.”
The next few moments were punctuated with the sound of women in ecstasy as they made their selections and sampled their decadence. Smiling at the clerk they left the store.
Just as the door was about to shut, Alice laughed at Helena’s sated expression. “Oh my God, you look like you just had a dozen orgasms!” She laughed loudly when Helena simply closed her eyes and smiled.
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As Maureen led Lara up the stairs from the cellar, she could hear the sound of laughter. “Sounds like business is heating up,” she remarked as she turned to shut the door behind Lara.
“Lara?”
Lara was frozen on the top step, her expression one of intense concentration.
“Lara? Are you alright?” Maureen snapped her fingers to get Lara’s attention.
“What?” Lara focused on Maureen. “I’m sorry. It’s just something was so familiar about that laugh.” She moved towards the front.
“All set?”
Lara nodded as she looked around. “Were there some customers just here?”
Faye nodded. “A group of about six or so, I guess. They just left.”
Lara started towards the door.
“Hold on, Lara. You’re forgetting your truffles and your wine!”
Inwardly groaning with frustration, Lara turned back to the counter, signed her credit card slip, gathered her purchases and headed for the door once again. Finally out on the street she looked both ways searching intently for the person she had heard laughing.
After a moment she shook her head and started for her jeep. “Just a coincidence,” she muttered. For all the world, she’d thought that laugh belonged to Alice. Setting her packages in the floor board she chided herself. “Alice is thousands of miles from here…and it doesn’t even matter. She’s moved on…and so have you Lara!” Climbing into the driver’s seat she continued her self-lecture. “And you should be focused on Sandy tonight—not some fantasy that’s never going to come true.” She shifted the jeep into first gear and headed towards home.
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I just caught up with the last few chapters, this is so great (and it’s making me miss Lara). I can’t wait to see what’s next!
And it just keeps getting better! I’ll be waiting for the next chapter.
Yup, caught this in time, wow, thanks;) I’m enjoying your regional flavoring of the tale as well, nicely done. And I could totally picture the scenes of Alice and Lara barely missing each other, sexcellent descriptions and placements of everyone/thing! Plus hello, quality wine and chocolate, what’s not to love. The stage is set indeed–love it! By the way, what do you say to having Sandy wear a t-shirt saying “Drama Enhancer”? I chuckled at your comment about her. And goodness can you imagine Lara really coming back on the show and riding off into the sunset with Alice? I guess Tasha is OK but I aint seeing any sparks in that Lace way. Not that I’m a show addict or anything, yikes. OK, looking forward to the next installment, keep up the deliciousness!
Another fantastic chapter, and very well-timed to boot (I was in desperate need of a distraction from work today)! I too loved the scenes of Alice and Lara just missing each other, but “sensing” each other’s presence. It was a really nice, subtle way to show that they are still completely hung up on each other, even though it’s been months since they last saw each other. Speaking of months, I think your time line has worked really well – I would never have guessed that you’d written yourself into a corner! :) And, I agree that it would be fun to see what would unravel Bette’s world, other than dramatic table placements… maybe snakes or some other creepy-crawly critter? That’s why I love this story idea – it creates so many opportunities to reveal interesting aspects of the characters that we wouldn’t normally see. I suppose that’s why people think of camp as a “character-building” experience… sorry, that was a terrible joke. :) Anyway, thanks for another great update… as always, I look forward to reading more!
i love this chapter! you were builging pictures in my head, so this was more a new episode as a chapter. i could see it ;-) the scene in that little store chcolat fetish was so funny, i could smell all the different chocolate flavours. loveing helena for being a chocoholic ;-)so what could i say to our little lace part? i agree with min and blue, that was great! they could feel eachothers presence after all the month, they didn´t see or talk…i´m sure there is someone for sandy,maybe max? if she is bi… lol, i always want to couple…thanks for that fast update, can´t wait to read more! hug, naren
Ack, the near misses! Loved the line about the Taurus, the Scorpio, and the wormhole… actually, that sounds like the beginning of a rather lewd joke. Dark chocolate and cayenne truffles? Does Lara just have a thing for chilies and chocolate? Excellent Gold, I’m so enjoying the story. Can’t wait for the next installment and Al & Lara’s eventual meeting. Thanks
cant wait till lara actually meet alice…..
btw, im having my ap eng language exam tmr…. however im here…. datz how much i luv this story… pls update asap =)