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Reunion
Story written on October 26, 2012 by justkeepswimming.
"I’m not done just yet, you know – I still want to hear the response that tells me you’re satisfied." I begin on her again, this time with a little more focus and a little less teasing. I hear the crescendo of her voice building up as her back arches and she presses herself further toward me. She lifts her body off the surface of the couch when one last stroke brings the release I wanted for her. Her hands have reached up over her head, gripping the couch, trying to steady herself as she comes in almost violent bursts. Her body shakes down to her toes as she moves against me. Her movements gradually slow and I am able to finish tasting her. I take her in my arms and hold her, kissing her gently while letting my fingertips trail down the length of her body. I would be quite content falling asleep here together, but I feel her hand traveling up my thigh and I know it’s my turn now.
"I want to taste you for the rest of the day," she whispers in my ear as her tongue runs down my neck.
The conductor’s voice edges into my subconscious. I hear the name of a stop called out, and I realize I’m almost at my destination. I open my eyes to the dim surroundings of the subway car once again. I guess I will have to wait until the day’s work is done before this little fantasy can play itself out in my mind’s eye.
I pull a business card from my purse and make my way over to the woman who looked so familiar to me as my morning commute began. Because of course, I now recall who she is.
"Tina, I didn’t recognize you at first," Bette said. "The next stop is mine, but I wanted to make sure we could get in touch again."
"Wow…Bette," Tina started, taking the card that was offered. "Out of context, I couldn’t bring to mind how I knew you."
"Call me at the office this morning if you have time," Bette said as the train slowed. "I’d love to see you again. Catch up."
"I definitely will," Tina offered with a genuine smile, glancing down at the information on the card.
I grab my umbrella from where I had been seated, give her a wink across the few rows that now separate us, and depart with just a bit more of a spring in my step than when the day started.
(tbc)
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Okay JK did u hv a subway ride like this because I wish I had one. 20 yrs gone by would love to see the past and the further
I was thinking, do things like this encounter really happen except in a Hollywood movie? Hot damn. Wishing it was true. Do we need some backstory on their college years?
That was awesome and please continue, thanks!
Yes!!!! Please continue.
Very nice, Tina’s thoughts on the train ride at the very least would be much appreciated. PPS
Bette said. “The next stop is mine, but I wanted to make sure we could get in touch again.” – great :)
Oh we definitely need more….
My stars, you had me going with them being together after 20 yrs, then the daydream ended at the end of pg. 3. You can not imagine what I said upon discovering it was a dream. That was fabulous. Really, you can’t end it now, we need to know what Tina was thinking while Bette was having her dream. Please don’t end it now, we need MORE!!! lol Thanks. Just awesome.
You definitely need to continue. Soon it will be stormy outside on the East Coast so you need to get Bette and Tina hot steamy together pronto!
Please continue, You had me in a good spot. How could they ever forget each other? Please continue. thanks
Omg intense!! In a good way tho
Interesting start, swimmy!
I am very intrigued by a sequel to this chapter. You have to continue.
🐠 Oh hell yeah ✊😮 thank you 💜💚❤💗💖💓💞💕💌
Lol what a tease. Yes please continue. I’d like to see if they will actually reunite :)
“Medic! Medic! I need a medic here. Teegirl fell off her chair and struck her head after reading the hotness that Swimmie posted.” I would like to give you a standing “O”. Seriously, that was so hot!
Yes, oh yes!!!
WoW,this is some start,please continue.P.S. I love all of your stories,I `m just rewriting “It`s only lunch”.
I would be very interested to read about what was going through Tina’s mind during Bette’s daydream. Was she having a daydream of her own?? Hmmm. Greats stuff JKS! More please!
That was seriously some good stuff!! Hope there is more!
Sorry,JKS I mean I`m re-reading and not re-writing your stories.
Interesting beginning. Does Tina make contact later in the day. What has she been up to in the 20 years that have passed?
Hey I hope that you continue with this one I like it a lot
What’s the past connection? Where do they go from here?
Definitively intrigued.
Thank you for that little bit of intrigue. Yes, I would like to see where you go with this as it didn’t hit me that they were very serious 20 years ago, maybe Tina was straight and still is. Maybe they were good friends. who knows as it is in your mind and for you to make up. I look forward to the journey you take us on.
Great job
Please do contunue with this. Looking forward to seeing where you take this one
You must continue please. Thank love it already