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    Revelations Chapter 3 Part A

    Story written on October 7, 2008 by cls.
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    Bette watches helplessly while Tina expends her final breath

    "Beep, Beep, Beep.."

    The Doctor removed his stethoscope and shook his head slowly, "I’m sorry Miss Porter there just isn’t anything more we can do, except make her as comfortable as possible. It’s just a matter of time now…" he said signalling the nurses.

    Bette watched the failing rhythm of the heart monitor as the technicians removed all the tubes and IV’s from her love’s body, "No there must be something else you can do!" she cried pitifully in denial of the inevitable. She grabbed hold of Tina’s hand and pressed it to her lips, "I can’t lose you, Please Tina stay with me" she said kissing it fervently.

    Tina, unconcious for the last few days opened her eyes at the sound of Bette in distress. Her throat was raw from the tubes that been recently removed but she managed to croak out "Bette?"

    Bette, shocked by the sound, dropped down beside her on the bed so she could hear her love’s weak voice. She gripped her frail hand tightly. "T, I’m here babe, I’m here." she said trying helplessly to smile through her tears brushing the hair back gently from Tina’s pale face.

    Tina made a valiant attempt to smile but her body was rapidly failing. "Don’t cry Bette. I’m sorry love but I just can’t hold on any longer," she managed to whisper to Bette sadly. Tina knew she was dying and leaving her love alone but there just wasn’t any fight left in her. "Please don’t cry. I need you to be brave now. I’m not scared any more Bette, know that I’ll carry your love with me.. forever. We will meet…againn" she said struggling for breath. "Always remember …that I ….love… youuu" Tina sighed on her final breath and the heart monitor gave off a steady beeeeeeeeeeeep.

    "NO please, Tina, don’t leave me," Bette wailed holding Tina’s lifeless body close to her, willing her to breathe. Somebody help me please, Tina, TINA, TINNAAAA!!!!!!!" Bette screamed….

     

     

     

    "Bette, Bette wake up! Bette, I’m here love, Everything’s alright!" Tina said wrapping her arms tightly around her love trying to wake her from the nightmare wracking her body..

    Bette could feel the very real tears coursing down her cheeks and she felt like she’d been kicked in the stomach but the body holding hers was very much alive. "Tina! Oh my God, Tina." she said raining kisses over Tina’s face. She cupped her beloved’s face holding Tina’s mouth to her’s. "You’re alive, don’t leave me," Bette panted between sobs.

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    2. Cls, what is up with that, you must be some kind of twisted sister, first we’re all scared shitless thinking something happened to Tina and we missed it, then we had to wonder what was up with the whole Janice vs the friends and lover issue, then you fix everything and leave us hanging mid stream, TEASE. Thank you, Md

    3. Youch! I’m in real pain here! Why’d you have to stop there??? I hope this means you will be posting the rest of the chapter SOON! I was really nervous that you were going to end my favorite couples fun way too early on the first page…thank goodness it was merely a nightmare. I loved that you included some of Tina’s fear in this chapter. I wonder if she will feel as brave when she ends up being the object of gossip at work? PPVS!!!

    4. I am glad that Tina took that final step to let others know (her co-worker) that Bette is her lover/girlfriend. You had me really scared with the hospital scene.

    5. I thought I’d missed a few chapters the way this one started. I’m glad it was only a nightmare. You did stop in a rather unfortunate place though. Thanks for posting!

    8. woman are u trying to kill me?????????? i dodnt understand what have i miss, im so fucking happy its just a dream and tina is so cute how she calms bette. btw i can understan her fear and coming out, come on bette its not that easy give her a break but at the and with the dance….ho gad

    11. Are you trying to give me a heart attack? The first page, I’m saying WTF! Then the end of the update I’m looking for page 6 that must have been lost while submitting, because I know that you wouldn’t be that mean especially after what you did on page 1. Great story! PPVS!!!

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