This is for Every Dark Breath. :]
And a thankyou for Huntresss Music Video: Review My Kisses by Leann Rimes; for the inspiring video. I own naddaoh yeah..rated NC-17for ***** scene? Andwhat else..this is another first-timer for me..neva eva wrote a D n L fic before..so yeah..


It was pouring out, icy cold pouring rain.


Dana couldnt find a damn parking space, it was pissing her off and yet she was pissed off a lot lately. One due to the rain and another major thing she was royally pissed off with herself and for what has happened in the past few weeks. She growled at finally finding a parking spot all the way out in the end of the parking lot that was ACROSS from the main parking lot.

Goddamnitscrew the ***** rainscrew it all.. Dana swore shutting her car down and not even bothering to grab her jacket. She didnt feel like running for some odd reason she didnt give a flying ***** either she was soaked.


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Dana could hear country music blasting from the apartment. Hasnt changed.. Dana said with a small sigh.

She was at the door, the door of her ex-girlfriends house, the one she told her not to touch her, because Conrad scared the ***** out of her.

*****.. Dana hissed still mentally debating on knocking.


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Inside the apartment Lara was just laying out on the couch listening to Leann Rimes and watching as the rain fell outside.


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*****..fuckfuck..***** *****.. Dana ranted softly as she continued to pace outside Laras door.



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I’m only happy when I’m with youI only feel good when I’m talking to you.I’m a mess when you don’t call me.Call me at night.Where did you go? Where did you go? And did you think of me?
~~~


Lara sighed out softly listening to rain fall from the CD player as Review My Kisses came on.

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Dana just stood in front of the door listening, breathing softly and she raised her hand upward knocking on the door softly.

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Lara wondered who could that be, and she got up making her way to the door. Yes? She spoke softly.


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It’s hard to breathe and my heart is sinking.I’m slipping fast and I’m reaching for you.It’s gonna hurt cause
.I have been there before..
~~~


Laraits me Dana said shivering, she for she walked from her car to Laras door in the pouring rain.

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Lara blinked a few times, wondering what her ex girlfriend wanted, she sighed taking a deep breath opening the door, she saw her ex-lover soaking wet and shivering. Dana? She questioned.


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Can’t take much moreCan’t take another night..without you beside me
~~~


Dana stepped into Laras apartment shivering she looked at her ex-lover. Hi Dana said with a shudder. Im not going to stay longI just want you to know something Dana began.


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I want to review my kisses, on every inch of your body. I want to reveal my secrets..that only you should know..I feel all this pain inside of me.That only your lips can make better..I wanna review my kissesSo you won’t forget that you are mine..
~~~


Lara just looked at her. At least let me get you a towel.. She stated softly and Dana just nodded and Lara went off and got her a towel; she came back within a short matter of minutes. Here..

Thank you.. Dana said drying her face then wrapping the towel around her shoulders, still shivering.


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Don’t wanna care more than you do.Don’t wanna be the one whos out in the rainDon’t wanna get that.
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Umm..listen Lara.I want to say Im sorry. Dana started then grunted. Sounded better in my head..fucklistenyou were rightConrad scared the ***** out me..he said something I rather not repeatand it scared me shitless..


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Call where you sound so cold.So far away,So far away.Like the distant roll of thunder..
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andI didnt mean to say.dont touch mecos goddamnitall I wanted was you touching me and loving..but I ***** blew it Dana spoke looking at Lara with tears in her eyes.

Lara just stood there looking at her ex-lover. I.. Lara tried to form words. y-y-you Lara stuttered slightly.

Dana looked her with her with tearstained cheeks and she gulped at was going to happen next.

you didnt blow itgod Lara stated with a small smile.

Im.. Dana was about to say she was sorry again, yet was cut off by Laras mouth shoving her tongue into Danas mouth.


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.I want to review my kisses, on every inch of your body.
~~~


Dana fell back onto the bed with Lara on top of her kissing her.


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.I want to reveal my secrets..that only you should know..
~~~


Both womens clothes manage to be striped away within the moment of spoken song from the speakers. Lara kissed over Danas cool wet neck earning a low moan of approval. Dana moved Lara head away from her neck, kissing her passionately.


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..I feel all this pain inside of me.That only your lips can make better..
~~~


Hands found soft mounds of flesh being massaged my talented hands and hips being pushed together.


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..I wanna review my kissesSo you won’t forget that you are mine..
~~~


Lara groaned into Dana mouth while Dana moaned into Laras, they both broke apart for a moment, looking at each other, looking for approval and want.


~~~
..I wanna review my kissesSo you won’t forget that you are mine..
~~~

Dana and Lara both enter each other at the same time with a both women moaning out.

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It’s a cave in the darkness..And I’m lost inside youDon’t go..
~~~

Both Dana and Lara were moving in and out each other with the same pace as the music while kissing each other.

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I want to review my kisses.On every inch of your body..I want to reveal my secretsThat only you should know.I feel like a childless mother..Longing to hold her baby.
~~~

Open your eyes Panting Lara manage to speak.

Dana opened her eyes looking at her lover. I want to see you when you *****..and I want you to see me.. Lara manage to gasp out as felt both her and Dana reaching their peak. Both had each other eyes on each as they both came at the same time, both leaning into each other kissing.

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If I could review my kissesThen you won’t forget that you are mine.
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THE END