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Riders Ch.11
Then I turned on the two women stood beside me.
“What the fuck is going on he is a baby what the hell were you all thinking. I mean I know, myself included, that we are possibly the least responsible group of human beings in existence. But come on, Baby, horse, four foot fence, you can’t tell me that those facts raised absolutely no alarm bells in any of you heads?”
“Tina just calm down if anything were going to happen it would have done by now. She has been down here for hours and has exercised all three horses that are fit and sat him in Apache’s box while she changed his poultice and cleaned him out. All of her horses are as smitten with that boy as they are with Bette they love her and would do nothing to harm her. And as for the sweatshirts if you think about it, they are not a bad idea and he looks pretty snug in there to me.”
I could feel myself doing it again, the fish mouth thing but it was unstoppable. So instead of replying to Dana’s attempt to calm me down I turned and marched over to the gate that Bette was now headed for to say my piece. Then as I waited she hopped down of Lightning’s back and fished Chris out of his makeshift harness and turned him to face her giving him an Eskimo kiss as he giggled in her arms. I felt my heart jump in my chest and I could no longer catch my breath, Oh god am I having a heart attack.
—————————————–Bette———————————
As I turned to climb out of the arena with the giggling Chris in my arms I caught sight of Tina. I don’t know how I missed it at first as I stood there babbling about how great of a morning me and her nephew had been having. But she was as white as a ghost and seemed to be more than just slightly less impressed with the tale than I was, in fact she looked like she was going to puke up at any minute.
Oh god I had made her angry, that was it I knew I shouldn’t have taken the baby and before I could stop my stupid self I started to stutter out an explanation, anything to stop her looking like that.
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(24 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
1st brb
LOL@fish expression! =O I really hope you continue with this. It’s something different and it’s great. =)
Oh goodie! You’ve added another chapter! I wondered if you would continue. Please do! Oh please, oh please, oh please!
What a terrific surprise to see another “Riders” chapter posted! I was so disappointed because I thought you had given up! Glad to see you are back at it, and hope you will post again soon. I’d love to see more of the Bette/Tina personality dynamic you were showing before with Tina as the worldly wise and Bette standing up to her a little. I still have to ask the same question: Who won the bet??? Thanks for continuing!
Please, Please, Please continue. I love this story. Thanks Lamentamini for getting her to write.
YES U HAVE BEEN MISSED!!!! Just love the intensity of Bette and Tina. How they struggle to get to each other. Treat to see Bette and the vulnerable one, BUT really looking forward to when she COMES INTO her OWN. Loved that Tina read to her and hopefully together she will read to Tina. THANKS! THANKS! Could we PLEASE have a post of DESIGNER SUITS that is also my favorite by U.
Welcome back! I was hoping you would continue with this story. Just love the shy Bette and Tina being so tuff on the outside. You must continue..don’t leave us hanging with this one. It’s a great story…can’t wait to see where you go next.
Welcome and thanks to the one who talk you into this. This is so different from the other and very refreshing thanks
Sweet!! So glad you are continuing with this story! Thanks!
Wow, so good to read this story again. I love this shy, scared Bette in that she struggles with her disabilities but does not let it stop her dreams. Bette really is trying to please Tina and it looks like Tina is realizing that they do have a very special bond to each other.
Yes yes yes!!!! you are back so glad to see you. I really hope you will continue… PLEASE… We need more of this great story:o)cya soon right ;o)
Nice chapter there!. I hope you continue your other story too i miss reading about Andy and Rachel besides B&T and the gang. Thanks!.
Thank you for posting again and thanks to Lament for pestering you. I hope you continue to write and post it. Nice and refreshing. PPS
and the winner is……lamentamini for pushing you to write LOL…thanks for bringing this story back
Well done, takes me back to my teen years and learning to jump horses
Thank you for continuing this story 8-)
Good chapter and please continue soon, thanks!