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Riders Ch.9
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So now the floor was very quickly being submerged in water that was less than totally clear.
——————————————–Alice———————————–
As Dana scrambled to her feet I could feel my uncontrollable laughter threatening to resurface as the baby I still held in my arm was giggling in delight at what was going on around him, I could not help but join him in seeing the funny side. I looked into his eyes and made some funny faces and noticed then that I was looking into exact replicas of Tina’s eyes, no doubt this handsome little man would grow into a heart breaker like his aunt.
Dana came back into the bathroom and stood behind me also looking at the smiling face of the first man to get our attention in some years, she had called maintenance and they would be up shortly. The unfortunate thing of it all was at the moment our mothering instincts had kicked in we had become so distracted by the baby that we did not hear all the commotion in the hallway and the first wee knew of it was when the door to the suite burst open.
So there we were all fine and happy apart from the flood and the still unchanged baby when Cooper burst in like a bull in a china shop followed by Grant, Justin and Warren. Before we had a chance to even try and think up and explanation Cooper rushed towards the bathroom.
“Alice, Dana. Where the hell is Bette I have…”
He never got a chance to finish as his foot landed on the discarded diaper from earlier and his foot sot out from under him landing him on his back in the water as all we could do is watch as the diaper flew from his foot and through the air before landing on his face.
As if that weren’t bad enough at that moment Chris seemed to have the undying urge to pee and just let it out spraying an already pissed of Cooper with Pee. What could i do but laigh? and it seemed the others even grant found this just as funny as me.
The Eiffel Tower.
—————————————-Tina———————————
I had never realised that being open and vulnerable was the way to get me what I wanted, but I knew that it was what Bette needed, she needed protecting and looking after but she needed to see who I was before she would even consider letting me in.
I watched from a distance as her face lit up with child like glee as she took in the view from the top of the famous landmark. I would wait for as long as she needed, but at least I knew we were on the right path.
We walked back to the hotel and I listened as she chattered about how much fun she had had. We strolled through the lobby and into the elevator where she once again took my hand. I wish we could of stayed there as when we stepped out onto our floor our bubble was broken as she dropped my hand and waited for the approaching and very angry group of people to reach the spot where we stood.
Please god let her not get spooked, we can get there, please let her not go back just because he is here. And what the hell IS he doing here? and why the hell did he look and smell like he had been swimming in a bog before we arrived?
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hey! glad to see this chapter. Congrats on the new job!
I laughed like a loon. This was so great.
Excellent chapter Ellie! I’ve heard the term “shit hit the fan” but I think “shit hit the bidet” fits this one! Sounds like Cooper got what’s been due to him for some time. Great post! I’ll be patiently waiting again!
glad to see your post…I miss this story. thank.s
maybe cooper is fed up and leaving…any chance to get rid of him forever?
Some one needs to take Cooper and shove him out the door or send him back in the plane. If he gets to bad just open the plane’s door and shove him out of it. Bette is opening up to Tina and allowing her heart to guide her. Tina is also opening up. I can’t wait to see how things are going to work out for them. I hope that you will enjoy your new job. Thanks for the post.
I don’t know how, but somehow I missed the last several chapters of this story. I am so glad to have now caught up, because this is hilarious…and so very sweet at the same time. Thank you!!!
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! okokok! I am writing TBOF as we speak LOL okokok I just took a short break to read this! But Im on it now1 Promise! As fast as I can! Thanks for this chapter!!!!!!!
Hahaha thats funny adn hope this will kick cooper out of the picture and let Bette and Tina be together. OK post soon please, thanks!
Great post, please don’t let us wait that long again, but congrats on the new job :o)). I really liked the way you “treated” Cooper, he is an ass LOL, but what is he doing there and what are B&T going to do??? Looking forward to the next one…
I believe “oh shit” is an understatement here. I’ve been waiting for a chapter from this story. I’m ashamed to admit it but I couldn’t remember what happened in the previous chapter so I had to read the recap. =/ Cooper needs to go bye-bye and Tina needs to rememeber not to scare off Bette. I would’ve loved to see a bidet moment like that on the actual show. lol
1st! *moons any and all referees*
I was so pleased to check in and see your next chapter. Sorry work has kept you so busy… 24 whole days was a long time to keep us in suspense as to how our favorite “Riders” are doing! I’m not sure I really get the whole baby thing, but it has brought an interesting dynamic within Tina’s family. Also, it has given more emotional connection to B/T. I’m looking forward to see how all the girls will handle the surprise reemergence of Cooper. Doesn’t sound like a very nice guy! Welcome back and thanks for writing!
I laugh and laugh as I read this when I read Dana I hear Baxter Black’s voice and it just cracks me up even more. This is so outstanding. Thanks for writing it.
Also please to see post and glad about new job. Is there a possiblity of a post for Designer Suits?