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Roadtrip to L.A. Part 2
Sue tries to calm down to tell Shane her story.
Sue: ‘I’m from
Shane: ‘*****, and now what you’re going to do? Do you know anyone around here? Do you have family around?’
Sue: ‘No I just came her to go to the university and I was suppose to stay with this guy from school but I’m sure I’ll be alright I can look after myself.’
Sue was really hurt but she was fighting so badly she didn’t even noticed it before.
Now that she sits down she can feel the pain in her head and arm more than ever.
Shane: ‘You don’t even look in a shape to get up yourself so I cant let you go’
Sue: ‘Sure I can’
Sue gets up slowly everything starts to spin
‘Told ya’ she says before the world turns black before her eyes.
Sue faints and Shane’s reflexes are quick enough to catch her before she hits the floor.
Shane lays her on the ground softly and reaches for her phone, she dials
Shane: ‘Yeah Al, it’s me Shane I’m in the bathroom right now and I could use some help, ok thanks’
In about a minute time Alice,
Tina: ‘What happened?’
Shane: ‘She tried to get up and passed out and now I can’t wake her’
Shane: ‘Good idea,
Shane: ‘Ok, help me out here’
With the help of her friends Shane carries Sue out The Planet and into her car.
They drive to the hospital and there they try to explain what happened as far as they know
*Summer-L.A.-Hospital-Afternoon*
Doctor: ‘Do you know nothing of this girl? Just that ‘something’ happened to her and she’s from
Shane: ‘Jup, that’s all we know’
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very interesting story. looking forward to the next post . shane is such a sweetheart.
All the words I want to say are doing battle with each other inside my head. I just had the opportunity to read chapter 1 and its hard to say great, terrific or any of the other words we use to compliment the writer.
Although I have never been raped, it did something to me that no sooner than arriving to the U.S., this is what Sue will always remember….rape! How come her arrival couldnt have been met with a fond experience?
No money, phone, or friends…hopefully she has found one in Shane.
More interesting. British girl and Shane? Awesome!!
WOW…unique..im glad she can find a friend in Shane..maybe Shane can open her up a little and help her out more so..Post sOON!!!
yeah im sorry i used the US to reflect what happens here in Holland *cause this DOES happen.* I tried to combine the fantasy world of the L word with the hard life some gay men and woman can have in the world. Its not that i think the US is evil or something its just that the L word is US so thats the scene its more symbolic