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Roadtrip to L.A. Part 3
Sue: ‘No I don’t but I think I have enough money to pay for a hotel a night, and after than I’ll see’
Sue: ‘Thank you very much’
The group was silent, they all wanted to know what really happened to Sue but no one dared to ask.
Sue: ‘I’m going for a little walk is it ok if I leave my stuff here?’
Sue: ‘Yes sure’
Girls: ‘Bye’
Sue walked out of the planet, and wandered around town a little while.
When she found this little park she sat down and stared at the sky.
*Summer-L.A.Parc-Afternoon*
What will I do now? Go home? Try to get a plane back to
Talk to the police? Or should I just jump of this building, It all doesn’t matter anymore
She lied there for an hour just thinking when she heard footsteps stopping at the place she lies.
She looks up and a tall young woman looks her in the face.
Woman: ‘Hey, are you okay? If been worried you know that’
Sue didn’t have to ask who she was, she recognized this face right away.
Sue: ‘You’re Shane right?’
Shane: ‘Yeah, how did you know my name?’
Sue: ‘
Shane sat down next to Sue and started picking some grass.
Shane: ‘Hey, wanna tell me what happened’
Sue shook her hair out her face
Sue: ‘I don’t know’
Shane: ‘It will do you good’
Sue actually didn’t want to talk about it because if she didn’t it didn’t really hurt her.
But she knew Shane was right so she started to talk.
She told her everything about Faye and the boys from school.
She noticed a tear falling down her face, she quickly wiped it away but as she continues more tears keep coming.
She fights them but she can’t hold them.
Shane starts to hug Sue, first Sue resists to her but she gives up and surrenders in to Shane’s arms.
Shane: ‘It’s ok, I’ve got you’
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(28 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
Nice that the girls have gathered around to help a stranger.
Post soon
EXCELLENT Thnx 4 writing..Im so happy the family is taking her in & helping out a stranger girl in need…PLEASE Post sOOn!!
oo i really like this but for some reason i can’t find part 2. lol anyway, i can’t wait for part 4…please post soon.