Fan Fiction
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Roadtrip to L.A.
Eddy sees Sues face and answers her unspoken question:
Eddy: ‘You are our business’
Together with Randy they grab her arms and drag her out of the car, Sue starts to scream but there’s no one around who can hear her.
Mark stands in front of her with his arms in his side.
Mark: ‘What did you think Sue? When you called me the other day and told me you had a girlfriend? I just thought you knew me better than this, you know I’m a religious man like my folks are, and people like you just aren’t allowed to walk the streets freely, they should lock you up, at least do something but they always escape us. Those dirty lesbians stick together in clubs and caf’s so we can’t take one of them out but this was an opportunity we just couldn’t pass.
Its frustrating seeing them go around spreading they’re disease into the world and we can do nothing but watch powerless. So when you called me I was surprised but I knew I had to do something I couldn’t let you walk away.’
While Eddy and Randy hold Sue, Mark and Eric have they’re little aggression party they have been waiting for so long.
They hit her with broken bottles they kick her, rip off her clothes throw her bags around and rape her while yelling ‘don’t you like this you filthy *****? You better do like it’
That’s the moment when Sue passes out and dreams haunted dreams.
*Summer –
When she comes around the daylight shines pale through the leaves of the trees.
When Sue tries to lift up her head she sees the world spin around and so does her stomach so she throws up.
Where am I? She thinks.
She gets up and inspects herself her head is bleeding and so is her nose her left arm is hurt really bad and she hardly wears any clothes just some pieces of ripped cloth.
She looks around trying to find her handbag but it’s gone, and so is her money and phone.
She starts to get her stuff together because everything is lying around.
She dresses herself again and puts everything she’ll need in one bag so she walks back to the main road where Mark took the right turn and tries to get a ride to the city which isn’t easy because all her clothes are dirty and with the dried blood on her face she doesn’t look really appealing.
An old man offers her a ride to
And of course she takes it.
Truck driver: ‘What happened to you?’
Sue: ‘I’ve been seeing the wrong friends’
Truck driver: ‘Is that so, well you should always be careful with people’
They’re conversation stopped and Sue was happy that it did she didn’t feel the need to tell this stranger about what happened.
Truck driver: ‘Here we are, Is it okay I leave you here so I can go back to the main road?’
Sue: ‘Yes this is fine thank you’
Truck driver: ‘Are you sure you don’t need anything?’
Sue: ‘
Truck driver: ‘Do you have any money?’
Sue: ‘No I go robbed’
Truck driver: ‘Here’
He hands her a 50 dollar bill
Sue: ‘I can’t take that’
Truck driver: ‘Sure you can, get a night rest in a motel take a shower and think your plans through’
Sue: ‘That’s really kind of you’
Truck driver: ‘Don’t mention it, now take care of yourself I need to go’
Sue: ‘I will, goodbye’
She gets out of the truck and closes the portal.
*Summer-L.A.-City*
I need to find a place where I can call Faye She thinks
I could try a caf.
She walks around a little while, and a lot of people stare at her.
She walks in to a caf where the door says ‘The Planet’
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interesting! keep going, please!!
lol – faye buckley? and the look a like B a.k.a sue – but what a bummer that she got rape and beaten up – not so very nice afterall
i was already hoping that no one made that link:P but someone did. belive me it gets better from here;)
good start, please post soon
I Liked it..Trajic she was raped..Hopefully thingz will get better & she will meet the right kinda people..(Possibly get revenge)..PLEASE continue this..Keep it up..Post sOON!!!
nice start. i hope she finds some friends and presses charges against those boys.