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Round n Round We Go (Ch.13)
Aunt Victoria was one pale, exhausted woman with her health deteriorating very quickly. She looked thinner than the last time Bette visited them in Connecticut. But her eyes were that usual blue like the reflection of the sky in ocean. She smiled weakly at Bette.
The smile struck the brunette. She suddenly looked sad. Yes, aunt Victoria was too much alike her mother. And her illness… Two fine women of the same destiny. Bette sighed slightly but was able to pull herself together.
Marcus sensed the change of mood in his favorite cousin. He decided to change the topic. “Guess what I’m giving you as wedding present?”
“What? A new motor?” The sad brown eyes brightened.
Marcus wriggled his index finger and gestured to a trailer dragging a car covered in protecting cloth. “Why don’t you go see for yourself.”
The three of them took a little time greeting Marcus’s family and ventured to the car. Bette pulled off the black cloth and jumped in excitement. “A limited edition of ’65 Pontiac Grand Prix?! Oh my god she’s so dreamy!”
Tina watched the scene a little dumbfounded, but happy for Bette’s happiness.
“Babe, this is a restyled model of first generation Vista Cruiser.” The brunette explained as she touched the shiny spray paint of the hood. “I saw one on a convention three years ago with Marcus. I can’t believe you remember!” She brought the big man to another hug.
“What you can’t believe is the transmission when I got it! Poor thing barely stick up together. But I hooked some wire. Now this baby carries the 3-speed automatic. And here’s the icing on the cake, I found a 403 in’ Rocket v8.” Marcus patted the car as well.
Bette squealed in joy again. “Thank you, thank you, thank you. God you’re good to me!”
“Well, I’m not ready to give up my Chevrolet Monte Carlo yet. So, ta-da!” Marcus laughed his easy laugh and turned to the slightly confused blonde. “And you, girl, I got you something as well.”
“Oh, Marcus… You shouldn’t have. I got everything I can think of.” Tina smiled shyly and blushed.
“It’s your wedding, girl! And I bet it’s gonna blow your mind.” He traveled to the back of his car and retrieved a canvass, also covered in a blanket. “Yo, Liz, remember your primary school summer camp back in Connecticut?”
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Ok, this is the final chapter before all ugliness.
I hope you enjoyed this one. And please brace yourselves when the truth gets revealed.
And as I always said, drama is good! Give it sometime, give me sometime to develop the characters. I promise to fix things up.
Thank you for reading, and I welcome your reviews.
Peace
Ok,now I am preparing for the storm!
And the storm you get! Please go on reading and tell me what you think.
Thanks, enjoyed it. Sam is a dirty dog. Hope the girls weather the nastiness
Yes, he is, and he will continue to be one until he sabotages everything.
Please continue reading. And thank you for the review!
Also preparing for the storm, oké i’m ready; )
And the storm it is! Hope that’s what you’ve prepared for…
Please continue reading and reviewing, thank you very much.
Maryanne how the hell you’re not gonna let Melvin walk Bette down the aisle she must been crazy…making Marcus Allenwood the cousin awesome…they really went through with it I was so sure Tina would tell her and the wedding would be off but I like this better so now when she tells her OMG WHATS GONNA HAPPEN? I also agree that children is a lil too soon for them they just graduated so good they’re waiting. Oh poor Bette she always gets hurt in these stories
Well, you gotta understand that Maryanne is a very old school rich woman. When someone’s filthy rich, she automatically categorizes people and treats them differently.
I know, Marcus is great. I hope I have a cousin like that!
And what’s gonna happen? Well, please continue to read, and you’ll find out! :)
Thanks for commenting!
Poor Bette.Thank you for the update,PPS
And there’s more.
Thank you for commenting!
This is so good and love them, hope somebody stop Sam before he doing something that’s hurting Bette and Tina. Please post more, thanks
Thank you, you’re very nice.
But Sam, ol’ little Sam, he just has to destroy everything good for himself. Please continue to read.
I don’t car if Sam is Tina’s father, he should be thrown in prison! Hopefully, Tina has a hand in turning the key to prove to Bette that she wanted none of his dirty scheme as soon as she got to know her. PPS!
Yes, I agree, what Sam did is unforgivable.
But Tina also had her share, even if she thought it was the right thing to do.
So, here comes the fall-out!
Please continue to read, and thanks for the comment!