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    Round n Round We Go (Ch.17)

    When we arrived at grandmother’s garage, I saw him stuck a cigarette on the bear’s ear. It suddenly panicked me. I should have left the cigarette package at home. It was a mistake to let small child have the idea of smoking.

    “Michelangelo, why do you put a cigarette behind his ear?” I tried to ask him very gently.

    He answered that lots of manly figures on the television do it all the time. He just wanted his buddy to look cool.

    Without Tina, I suddenly had no solution for this. But I got to correct this. “Son, listen, it’s a bad thing to smoke, you know that?”

    “Yes, the teachers told us a lot of people die from smoking every year. It’s scary actually.”

    “Right, it’s very scary. Now, why do you give the cigarette to your teddy bear? He must be scared too.” I took the bear out of the bag and picked the cylinder out of his fur. And I stole the bag of cigarette up in my sleeve.

    He considered it for a while and reached for the bear. Then he whispered to its fluffy ear.

    I asked what he said to him.

    “I was apologizing to him. I shouldn’t have given him that.” And he held the toy to his eye level, sincerely looked into the lifeless black stone eyes, educating it.“It’s a bad thing. We can’t do it again.”

    “You know what would seem cool on your buddy?” I took off the sunglasses hanging in front of my shirt and handed it over to him. “Isn’t this better?”

    “Yeah! He’s so handsome!” He stuck the sunglasses to its head and played with it all the way into the giant house.

    Seeing his innocent face, I realized that whatever I did could be a major influence on him. And I must consider quitting around him.

    He jumped around the place and dragged me after him to say hello to grandmother and aunt Victoria. The whole day, he never left my side, asking about my job, about my life in all the other countries, and some strange, out-of-the-blue kind of questions that kids always thought about. I did good, under the assistance from the housekeepers, I managed to keep up with the kid.

    He just had so much energy.

    Comments

    1. Alright, folks, you see the tension, and Tina’s still at Bette’s place. You can guess where I’m heading to from now on.
      Wait till you see the next chapter!
      And I’ve always promised to fix things.
      Thank you for reading, and please I welcome your comments.
      Peace

    2. RT,

      God bless you on your visa application.

      I’m glad to read your new chapter. I understand Bette’s feelings but Tina truly loved her and still loves her. So I hope that B will be able to accept Tina again.

      Did Tina committed suicide? I hope that B will discover this so that she will know that Tina suffered too.

      Will be waiting for your next chap :)

      Scribe

      • Thank you very much. The application went well. I’m waiting for the result and I’m certain that it was successful.
        Your guess is very accurate. But it has not been divulged in the story yet. I’m going to discuss on it in later chapters and you’ll find out how I manage it.
        Hope you like the next chapter. :)

    3. Oh boy, there is for sure a lot of tension and anger.

      The road for happiness will be long and with a few bumps.

      Sounds like Bette is jeaulous, thats good, she can’t have expected that Tina remained single.

      Good luck with getting your visa.

      • Yes, anger and tension. It’s gonna be pretty disastrous when it gets released all at once.
        The road is not easy, otherwise, happiness is just cheap. I intend to let them have a few bumps down the road. And when they finally realize how much they love each other after all, it’s all gonna be worthy.
        Thank you. You are very kind. I was lucky with my visa application.
        Please continue to read my stories, and review.

    4. I didn’t read your story in a while, but I’m glad to finally find the time to do it because I like it a lot ! My god … Bette can be such a b….
      Anyway, post soon ;-)

      • Bette can be a little bit clueless. I know, because that’s who she is.
        But she also has suffered much. It’s been eating her. Her life is a mess.
        Thank you for catching up with my story and reviewing. I hope you’ll like the next chapter.

    5. Im completely on Bette side in this. ..and just out of curiosity is this Yolanda the same as the one in therapy session on the show, Candice ex?

      • It is Yolanda Watkins. But I’m not including Candice in this chapter.
        Don’t worry about her. She’s a teeny tiny little character in the story, and she’s not even going to have a line. :P

    6. Bette seems like the loneliest person in the world, looks like walking dead from your description AND has some illness hanging over her, lol. Tina, on the other hand, has it quite good – she has her friends, Bette’s friends, Bette’s family, her douchebag father is still in her life, she has a kid AND, as we found out from the last page, she even had a girlfriend all this time (lol, not that heartbroken after all). She really messed up Bette’s life big time.

      • Hmmm, I see your point. But Tina’s story and suffering have not been exposed entirely, and I believe that it’s not as good as you think right now.
        Both of the parts suffered. And they will have to work extra hard to mend their broken hearts, and find a new way to get along.
        I will continue with exploring the truth, and fixing things up for them.
        Thank you for commenting and please read more.

    7. I hope Bette and Tina can have another honest conversation. No one can blame Bette for her anger, but she still doesn’t know exaclty what happened and how Tina never really betrayed her. After all, she never did anything to harm her or acted with ill intentions once she got to know her. Amazing story, I’ll be looking forward to the next post!

      • Thank you very much for the support.
        Bette, poor Bette, she just couldn’t move on. She is stubborn, and that stubbornness is causing her trouble, her suffering. It’s a mistake on her part. And she is going to make more mistakes.
        But eventually, eventually, Bette could always get around. Just hope that when she does, it wouldn’t be too late for them to start anew.
        I wish you can continue to enjoy my story. :)

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