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Round n Round We Go (Ch.17)
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I threw my hands in the air, showing her the oyster mud all over my fingers.
What she did next was beyond both of our expectations. Naturally, she brought the snack to my lips, and naturally, I opened my mouth.
I didn’t know if her finger tip touched my lip, or it was the food, but the radiating heat was too great to ignore. When we came to our senses and realized what we did, she retrieved her hand and leaned on the counter, I hid my eyes behind my hair and pretended to focus on the oysters. But the heat must have traveled from her hand to my face. I could feel myself burning up, all the way down to my neck.
For ten whole long minutes, all I could hear was the bubbles of happiness in my stomach and her rhythmic breathing not to far away. I didn’t know what I was happy about, but I just was. If only we could stay this way forever. There was nothing more I wanted, just to stay this way, quiet, shy, and happy. For me, it was magic. I knew very loud and clear that my heart craved for her, and this just woke up all those teenage memories when we enjoyed each other company so much, sought comfort in the time we spent together, and thought our love would last forever and beyond. Silly, romantic, unrealistic, but very very happy.
I finished cleaning the sea food and started chopping the vegetables under her surveillance. The carrots, which Angelo hated, were cut into long thin slices, and engraved with patterns, folded into a small flower.
She saw me managing the vegetable. “Wow, how do you do that?”
“It’s not so difficult, actually, like the waitress folds the napkins into swans. It’s my trick to get Angelo eat his vegetable.” I smiled and made a face to myself.
She stalked over and picked up a carrot flower.
“You wanna give it a try?” I teased her and gave her a slice.
Suddenly, she became very despondent. “Oh, no, I don’t think I can handle cooking utensils very well.”
Sometimes she acted like an insecure child. It was very endearing. “You don’t have to use the knife. It’s just like origami. You’re an artist, I’m sure it’s pretty easy for you.”
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Alright, folks, you see the tension, and Tina’s still at Bette’s place. You can guess where I’m heading to from now on.
Wait till you see the next chapter!
And I’ve always promised to fix things.
Thank you for reading, and please I welcome your comments.
Peace
Have a nice trip and thank you for the update.
Thank you, I was indeed very lucky with my visa application.
RT,
God bless you on your visa application.
I’m glad to read your new chapter. I understand Bette’s feelings but Tina truly loved her and still loves her. So I hope that B will be able to accept Tina again.
Did Tina committed suicide? I hope that B will discover this so that she will know that Tina suffered too.
Will be waiting for your next chap :)
Scribe
Thank you very much. The application went well. I’m waiting for the result and I’m certain that it was successful.
Your guess is very accurate. But it has not been divulged in the story yet. I’m going to discuss on it in later chapters and you’ll find out how I manage it.
Hope you like the next chapter. :)
Oh boy, there is for sure a lot of tension and anger.
The road for happiness will be long and with a few bumps.
Sounds like Bette is jeaulous, thats good, she can’t have expected that Tina remained single.
Good luck with getting your visa.
Yes, anger and tension. It’s gonna be pretty disastrous when it gets released all at once.
The road is not easy, otherwise, happiness is just cheap. I intend to let them have a few bumps down the road. And when they finally realize how much they love each other after all, it’s all gonna be worthy.
Thank you. You are very kind. I was lucky with my visa application.
Please continue to read my stories, and review.
Bette and Tina need to talk and work thing out, sad to see them like this
It’s sad. And unfortunately, I probably made it sadder in the next chapter.
But they’ll work it out. Have some faith! :)
I didn’t read your story in a while, but I’m glad to finally find the time to do it because I like it a lot ! My god … Bette can be such a b….
Anyway, post soon ;-)
Bette can be a little bit clueless. I know, because that’s who she is.
But she also has suffered much. It’s been eating her. Her life is a mess.
Thank you for catching up with my story and reviewing. I hope you’ll like the next chapter.
Im completely on Bette side in this. ..and just out of curiosity is this Yolanda the same as the one in therapy session on the show, Candice ex?
It is Yolanda Watkins. But I’m not including Candice in this chapter.
Don’t worry about her. She’s a teeny tiny little character in the story, and she’s not even going to have a line. :P
Bette seems like the loneliest person in the world, looks like walking dead from your description AND has some illness hanging over her, lol. Tina, on the other hand, has it quite good – she has her friends, Bette’s friends, Bette’s family, her douchebag father is still in her life, she has a kid AND, as we found out from the last page, she even had a girlfriend all this time (lol, not that heartbroken after all). She really messed up Bette’s life big time.
Hmmm, I see your point. But Tina’s story and suffering have not been exposed entirely, and I believe that it’s not as good as you think right now.
Both of the parts suffered. And they will have to work extra hard to mend their broken hearts, and find a new way to get along.
I will continue with exploring the truth, and fixing things up for them.
Thank you for commenting and please read more.
I hope Bette and Tina can have another honest conversation. No one can blame Bette for her anger, but she still doesn’t know exaclty what happened and how Tina never really betrayed her. After all, she never did anything to harm her or acted with ill intentions once she got to know her. Amazing story, I’ll be looking forward to the next post!
Thank you very much for the support.
Bette, poor Bette, she just couldn’t move on. She is stubborn, and that stubbornness is causing her trouble, her suffering. It’s a mistake on her part. And she is going to make more mistakes.
But eventually, eventually, Bette could always get around. Just hope that when she does, it wouldn’t be too late for them to start anew.
I wish you can continue to enjoy my story. :)