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Round n Round We Go (Ch.17)
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Out on the corridor, some other sets of stumping slowly came anear. I could tell the voice of Steven and James talking about something, and the girl, Elisa too. My family had arrived.
Then the whole bunch passed the kitchen on their way to the main dining hall. First Steven supporting old Sue, then Elisa and her brother, and their mother.
Bette greeted each of them.
Then she saw the last person in the back of the team. Sam.
I felt a sudden change in her eyes. They almost instantly went cold, brutal, merciless, and even hateful.
James caught the change very quickly as well.
She spoke, in a voice that told me she was on the verge to emotionally slaughter someone. “What the hell is he doing here?”
“Angelo, come and say hello to your nana and grandma Victoria.” James said to my son at the exact same time. He quickly walked over and took the boy by his hand.
By the confused look on Angelo’s face, he probably missed his mama B’s words. Yet even he sensed the tension so he readily obeyed and walked out of the kitchen with James. Sue quickly understood the situation. She tugged at Steven’s elbow and gestured him to keep moving.
My father froze, timidly stood there under her cruel scrutinizing.
“I asked, what the hell are you doing here.” She spoke again, but this time she managed to keep her voice down.
Sam was quivering. He looked at her, terror in his light hazel eyes. “I… Mrs… Mrs. Porter invittttted me…”
“Bette,” I wanted to cut in.
She immediately gave me the knifing look. “You didn’t tell me.”
“That’s not fair, Bette. You didn’t ask.”
“I fucking did, Tina.” She snarled from the back of her throat. And very defensively, she crossed her arms in front of her chest, strode in the kitchen with ferocity. “What are you and your father planning now, huh? You get your little fancy ass in my house, and in my gallery anyway. What, do I have to call my accountant check if you’re embezzling from the gallery too?”
She became purposefully hurtful, every single word came out with such maliciousness.
I looked at her, tried really hard not to give away my vulnerability. But in spite of my effort in hiding the panicky feeling, tears still silently welled in my eyes. She said that she had been angry, and I knew she was holding it in this whole time for Angelo’s sake. My father was not the source of her outburst, but a trigger. She had the right to be.
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Alright, folks, you see the tension, and Tina’s still at Bette’s place. You can guess where I’m heading to from now on.
Wait till you see the next chapter!
And I’ve always promised to fix things.
Thank you for reading, and please I welcome your comments.
Peace
Have a nice trip and thank you for the update.
Thank you, I was indeed very lucky with my visa application.
RT,
God bless you on your visa application.
I’m glad to read your new chapter. I understand Bette’s feelings but Tina truly loved her and still loves her. So I hope that B will be able to accept Tina again.
Did Tina committed suicide? I hope that B will discover this so that she will know that Tina suffered too.
Will be waiting for your next chap :)
Scribe
Thank you very much. The application went well. I’m waiting for the result and I’m certain that it was successful.
Your guess is very accurate. But it has not been divulged in the story yet. I’m going to discuss on it in later chapters and you’ll find out how I manage it.
Hope you like the next chapter. :)
Oh boy, there is for sure a lot of tension and anger.
The road for happiness will be long and with a few bumps.
Sounds like Bette is jeaulous, thats good, she can’t have expected that Tina remained single.
Good luck with getting your visa.
Yes, anger and tension. It’s gonna be pretty disastrous when it gets released all at once.
The road is not easy, otherwise, happiness is just cheap. I intend to let them have a few bumps down the road. And when they finally realize how much they love each other after all, it’s all gonna be worthy.
Thank you. You are very kind. I was lucky with my visa application.
Please continue to read my stories, and review.
Bette and Tina need to talk and work thing out, sad to see them like this
It’s sad. And unfortunately, I probably made it sadder in the next chapter.
But they’ll work it out. Have some faith! :)
I didn’t read your story in a while, but I’m glad to finally find the time to do it because I like it a lot ! My god … Bette can be such a b….
Anyway, post soon ;-)
Bette can be a little bit clueless. I know, because that’s who she is.
But she also has suffered much. It’s been eating her. Her life is a mess.
Thank you for catching up with my story and reviewing. I hope you’ll like the next chapter.
Im completely on Bette side in this. ..and just out of curiosity is this Yolanda the same as the one in therapy session on the show, Candice ex?
It is Yolanda Watkins. But I’m not including Candice in this chapter.
Don’t worry about her. She’s a teeny tiny little character in the story, and she’s not even going to have a line. :P
Bette seems like the loneliest person in the world, looks like walking dead from your description AND has some illness hanging over her, lol. Tina, on the other hand, has it quite good – she has her friends, Bette’s friends, Bette’s family, her douchebag father is still in her life, she has a kid AND, as we found out from the last page, she even had a girlfriend all this time (lol, not that heartbroken after all). She really messed up Bette’s life big time.
Hmmm, I see your point. But Tina’s story and suffering have not been exposed entirely, and I believe that it’s not as good as you think right now.
Both of the parts suffered. And they will have to work extra hard to mend their broken hearts, and find a new way to get along.
I will continue with exploring the truth, and fixing things up for them.
Thank you for commenting and please read more.
I hope Bette and Tina can have another honest conversation. No one can blame Bette for her anger, but she still doesn’t know exaclty what happened and how Tina never really betrayed her. After all, she never did anything to harm her or acted with ill intentions once she got to know her. Amazing story, I’ll be looking forward to the next post!
Thank you very much for the support.
Bette, poor Bette, she just couldn’t move on. She is stubborn, and that stubbornness is causing her trouble, her suffering. It’s a mistake on her part. And she is going to make more mistakes.
But eventually, eventually, Bette could always get around. Just hope that when she does, it wouldn’t be too late for them to start anew.
I wish you can continue to enjoy my story. :)