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    Round n Round We Go (Ch.18)

    Story written on June 6, 2014 by robyntibetter.
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    She was warm as ever. We were only inches away. She caught a strand of my hair and lifted it gently. Her eyes darkened even more at the exposed bruise on my neck. Her breath was warm. Her lips were beside my cheek. I heard her sigh. We could kiss if I just crane my

    She was warm as ever. We were only inches away. She caught a strand of my hair and lifted it gently. Her eyes darkened even more at the exposed bruise on my neck.

    Her breath was warm. Her lips were beside my cheek. I heard her sigh. We could kiss if I just crane my neck, or turn slightly toward her.

    We didn’t kiss. I shun a little, she pulled back some, and we just stared into each other’s eyes.

    Her eyes were warm, they were of the warmest chocolate color, the warmest I had seen ever since she was back. Her eyes, they broke my heart, for I saw into them, I saw that she was sorry, and if I was not mistaken, I saw love.

    I didn’t understand. She was leaving, again. But I thought I saw love.

    “Say something, Bette. Say something.” I pleaded through my eyes. The world was crumbling on top of me. My resolve completely melted down, and I knew, at the second, that I would always be in love with her. “Say you forgive me, and I’ll fight for you. Say you’re sorry, and I’ll kiss you. Say you love me… Say something. Anything.”

    But she said nothing, for a whole, long while. She darted her eyes away and just stood close to me, as if she was savoring the moment.

    I closed my eyes. The strand of my hair fell down on my shoulder. I felt cold. She backed. I reached out, trying to capture her hand. But when the enveloping warmth disappeared, the last ounce of my strength was sucked out, and my arm fell to my side.

    Standing by the door, she gave me one last long look, and said, “Goodbye.”

     

    cue: Say Something

    “Say something, I’m giving up on you.

    I’ll be the one, if you want me to.

    Anywhere I would’ve followed you.

    ……

    And I will swallow my pride.

    You’re the one that I love.

    And I’m saying goodbye.

    Say something, I’m giving up on you.

    And I’m sorry that I couldn’t get to you.

    Anywhere I would’ve followed you.

    Say something, I’m giving up on you.

    Say something…”

     

     

     

    part five

    Beijing was a scary city, a gigantic business megapolis, with over twenty million people, and nine million bicycles running around. The residents here had little fun. In between silent neighborhoods and business centers, skyscrapers and compressed apartment buildings, people like me, broken and overworked, lonely, with no one, they gather in Sanlitun Village, the only place that provided liquor and an escape from the reality.

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    1. Author:
      This is the final chapter in the second part of my story.
      It didn’t end up very nicely, I am aware.
      But you know, there’s drama first, then better things will happen.
      I am so ready to get started on the next part.
      Have some faith. I will fix things in later chapters.
      Thank you for reading and I look forward to your reviews.
      And question: if I say that I am going back to write in third person perspective, what do you think?

    2. I have faith in you, that things will be better.

      That was a very powerful chapter, the hurt they both have, but there is still so much love.

      I dont mind if you’re gonna write in third person.

      I’m still worried about Bette’s illness, maybe it’s good she met that doctor.

      Waiting patiently for the next update.

      • Thanks! I know this chapter is bittersweet, well more bitter than sweet. But thank you for having faith in me!
        And I have posted another chapter. Hope you like the direction the story is going. It’s healing on its own.

    3. Robyn,

      Just another overwhelming chapter but it was so sad that they have to be apart again. The NC17 part took me back again to the most powerful scene in TLW – it was bitter sweet. I am sure that you’ll find a way to bring them back together.

      Btw, the last part was intriguing.. will that woman heal Bette not just physically but emotionally as well? i want Bette to move on from pain but not move on from Tina.

      Thanks for the update.

      Scribe

      • Yes, it was a powerful sex scene, the most powerful one I have to say, in the entire show.
        Haha, you’ll find out how that Asian woman is.
        Bette will be moving on from her grudge and pain. But she will definitely continue to struggle with her love for Tina.
        Thank you for reviewing! Please continue to read my story! :)

    4. Wow! So powerful, emotionally charged, sad, hurting. I shed a tear for them when they where last in Tina’s office. They need to grieve. They need to forgive not only each other but themselves. Can’t wait for the next part. Please bring back some happiness soon. Thank you for your gift of story to us!!!!

      • Thank you for commenting!
        They are grieving, and they will get a hang of it. And there will be some incident that brings them back together and grieve together.
        Hope you’ll continue to enjoy the story.

      • Yes you are right. There is hope. And I hope that you will like how it eventually turns out for them.
        Thank you for taking the time reading and commenting.

      • I’m not so sure Tina is going to fly to Beijing. She has obligations as a full time mother, plus her spirit is crushed when Bette says nothing and leaves. I think the brunette now holds the autonomy in this relationship.

      • You’ll see how this new girl is like for Bette. And for Tina, hmmm, I doubt she will even bother to tell Yolanda about Bette. What she has with Yolanda doesn’t really compare to what she had with Bette, I believe.
        Anyway, thank you for reviewing and I’ll keep it up.

    11. This was powerful beyond measures, very intense and you could literally feel the tension by just reading the words. This sex scene brings you back to season 1 but way more intense. I had tears reading this chapter the office scene was very sad, hopefully they get it together for their sons, and wow who would of thought Tina and Yolanda very odd but I understand how that could make Bette even more jealous, despite the racial slur..I dont mind you writing in third person but hopefully a happy ending is coming soon but you right the drama has to build first and it did a hell of a job…poor Bette her heart always gets broken, ALWAYS no matter who story you reading smh

      • Oh thank you for saying so! I was counting on that when I wrote the sex scene. Maybe for some people it’s a bit too violent or intense, I don’t know. But I’m glad that also a lot of my readers liked it.
        And about a happy ending, you know how it is! Happiness always comes last. And I know, Bette always gets hurt. That’s just very sad but I think big sad puppy eyes fit her just well lol.
        Thank you for your support as always. And I’ll continue to fix things up for them.

      • Hahaha I’m glad that you find it lovable.
        I will manage to post regularly but seems it’s been some days.
        Anyway, I hope you continue to enjoy and continue to review.

    13. for me, this is the super best chapter ever! this story tells about the quote “love and hate are two horns on the same goat”. you love and you hurt so much and u never get enough. this story was so powerful, breath taking and painful. i love the way you described B&T’s POV that sometimes we can’t controlled our feeling.

      Please post new chapter, Robyn. Thank you for amazing story.

      • Wow, you’re very kind. I was hoping for this kind of reaction when I wrote the story.
        It is true that most of the times we tell ourselves what we should feel about certain things, but truth is, our heart won’t always listen.
        Thank you for reading and reviewing. It means a lot that my readers sympathize with the characters and with me.

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