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Round n Round We Go (Ch.19)
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A thin, tall shadow came around the corner of the door and paused there.
The owner of the shadow squinted to the figure shuddering in the corner. She couldn’t see the woman clearly because of her worsened eye sight. But the soft sobbing, the lithe body build, the shiny golden hair, all of that broke her heart. From her thin lips, a calling, ever so gentle, traveled through the dense depressed air. “T…”
Tina visibly jumped at the soft calling. “Bette?” Bette was here! Bette! She wiped the droplets on her face violently with the back of her hand and panicked more as the shadow approached her. Bette shouldn’t be here so soon. She shouldn’t see her like this. “No! No… I…” She pushed one hand at the tall woman and hid her face in her hair.
Bette ignored her avoiding gesture and stepped beside the blonde. She opened her arms. “Come here.” Seeing no movement in the other woman, she came nearer and embraced her completely.
Tina was still panicking. She felt the touch on her and tried to shrink away. But the arms were just strong and warm. Then the calm, mild, low voice rang beside her ear.
“Don’t fight me. Don’t fight me… Pressure across a large area of the human body helps to reduce heart rate, metabolic rate and muscle tone. Don’t fight it.” Bette spoke softly and tightened her hold. “Shhh… feel your heart slow down. Take a deep breath.”
Miraculously, Tina’s panic attack slowly went away. She heard another heartbeat, strong and steady, beating in the brunette woman’s chest, her own heart race, just then speeding off the roof, was returning to normal and gradually was beating in sync with the strong rhythm. With the distinct aroma and the smell of cigarette enveloping her, a strong wave of sadness surged from the bottom of her heart. The sense of smell was said to be connected to memories. Long since she heard that heartbeat, felt that reassuring warmth or smelled the clean and spicy odor that she craved every single day for more than two years. Tears once again broke forth, she nudged gently in Bette’s arms, tried to restrain the urge to cry.
Bette didn’t let go. She cupped the blonde woman at the back of her head and smoothed the other hand on her spine. “Let it out… It’s okay to let it out. I’m here. I’m here for you.”
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My dear readers! Here I present you the beginning of part three.
See? I’m fixing things. And in the following chapters I’ll fix more.
I’ve heard some responses that you like third person perspective better.
Do you like me returning to this kind of narrative?
Peace.
Enjoyed it. Glad to see they are making progress. Thanks
Thank you. Hope you’ll continue to enjoy.
Awesome chapter!! Let the healing begin
Yeah! Now you see that it’s gonna be all okay. Thanks for commenting.
Thank you for posting…. Please fix them. Happy that grandma still kicks in spiritually for Bette & Tina.. Please give us another chapter soon….
Haha, grandma rocks!
Sorry about the long wait.
Hope you’ll like the next chapter.
Awww! I just love this chapter. So happy that they have reunited again but of course I am still expecting more drama comsidering that Kate is still in the picture and I am concerned with Bette’s health. I hope it is nothing serious :)
Thanks for the update.
Kate will be right outta the picture I guarantee you that!
And Bette’s health, it doesn’t look so pretty now, but it shall be fixed soon as well.
You’ve been very supportive, I really appreciate it.
Please continue to read and comment.
That’s great and sad is sue is gone and hope her dead will bring back Bette and Tina. Please post more, thanks
Yes, I am actually feeling pretty bad about letting Sue die.
Hopefully everything will be fine and they won’t disappoint the old woman.
LOL So Tina gets yet another girlfriend. Nothing makes me lose interest in a story faster than them fucking other people, while supposedly “loving” each other. That’s just ridic. This story could go so good after the last epic chapter. Meh
It’s good to read another chapter and a good one ….
Please post soon :-D
I’m glad.
Thank you for commenting. I hope you’ll enjoy more.
The dream part is very Chinese, suppose that you are quite a quirky one. So i am still following your story, i can see you put a lot in this story,looking for the next chapter, hope they would kiss and make up,and live happy after.
Well actually the dream was inspired by Grey’s Anatomy, when Meredith was struggling with her life, she met her mother, who was dying, and her mother gave her a push to go back.
R.I.P. Sue thanks for taking care b of our beloved Tina, and yes im happy Bette and Tina finally came to their senses and took the first step of acknowledging their still deep love for each other…I dont have much to say on this chapter ready for update.
Yes, rest in peace indeed. She’s been such a help along the way.
Thanks for the comment. Hope you’ll enjoy the next.
Second time reading this chapter..love it! Hopefully, they will begin again. Will we soon learn about Bette’s health. I don’t like her symptoms. PPS!
I’m glad!
And yes, I am going to deal with Bette’s health issues, as soon as the situation clear up a bit more.