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    Round n Round We Go (Ch.20)

    Story written on June 27, 2014 by robyntibetter.
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    And then there were cameras snapping, flashlights hitting, people asking questions, at the heartwarming father-daughter reunion. Melvin was trying to not show his surprise seeing his daughter at the airport, but he was, Bette could tell. As soon as the man answered most of the questions related or none-related to the newest conquer, he took

    And then there were cameras snapping, flashlights hitting, people asking questions, at the heartwarming father-daughter reunion.

    Melvin was trying to not show his surprise seeing his daughter at the airport, but he was, Bette could tell. As soon as the man answered most of the questions related or none-related to the newest conquer, he took her arm and guided her to ride with him.

    “What are you doing here? Where did you go?”

    Bette didn’t want to answer, she just pretended to be absorbed in the preparation and shrugged. But the stupid driver answered for him. “Sir, Miss Porter was visiting Los Angeles yesterday.”

    “You visited LA? When you are supposed to get ready for the meeting?”

    “Daddy…” Bette gave the driver a glare and shook her head. “I got this.” “As long as you don’t lecture me now.”

    Of course that was exactly what Melvin did. He lectured her during the whole ride to their building. She kept her head down, and shut out everything that she did not need right now.

    “And now you don’t have enough sleep. What did I tell you? Sleep is important before a very compact schedule.” The dictation seemed to not be ending any time soon, yet they had already arrived at their destination.

    The young woman quickly jumped out of the wagon and hid in her room to avoid anymore lecturing from her father. She tested the equipment that would be used in her presentation, and made some last-minute adjustment.

     

    Tina spent another night at the gallery, at Sue’s wake. James, Steven and some other young people were there as well. It was their last night with the sweet old lady before the hearse came in the morning and picked her up. After tonight, there would be six feet of distance between them forever. They had been preparing themselves, but how could you prepare for this?

    The air was getting really dense. As the dawn came nearer, people started to get unsettled. Steven sat beside the coffin and put his face in his palm. There were low conversations, and prayers in the half emptied gallery. Tina felt the dread in her stomach was making her nauseous. She went up to her office to freshen up and get a little peace of mind.

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    1. Author:
      To my readers who appreciate my work and are patient to wait for my posts, thank you very much.
      You see now, it’s all going to turn well. And I know there are still issues unresolved, like Bette’s illness, I will get to that very quickly.
      I know, I’ve been dawdling for a while. But it’s the World Cup! And I have not missed a single game, and that’s a new record. The fever is running pretty high in my country. Hope you can all enjoy the games.

    2. I have so enjoyed this story! This chapter was filled with many issues. I love that everything finally dawned on Bette. Please let them heal and grow old together. Thank you for your gift of writing!

      • The issues are resolving gradually but surely. I assure you that they will have a nice ending.
        Thank you so much for the supportive comment. I truly appreciate it.

    3. My God! it was breathtaking.
      Worth waiting all these days by this chapter, was iincrivel!
      My Congratulations, I love this story.
      Note: Actually here in Brazil we are living and breathes football, and you
      can imagine how the party in this country.
      The Brazil literally stops when our national team plays.
      I hope that your selection proceed to the next phase.
      (Excuse my English, it is not my official language.
      I’m from Brazil)

      • God I love soccer so much! And Brazil has done really well with this year’s World Cup. I almost shed tears when Neymar injured his back and was sent to the hospital. Such a shame.
        I hope you can enjoy more.
        And probably one day I’ll pay a visit to Brazil. It just seems dreamy, the beaches, the sea, the stunning girls in bikinis ;p

    4. RT,

      Football is not really big here in our country so I can’t really relate with you guys but I hope that you and mscully are really enjoying the world cup fever :)

      As for the update, I am happy about Bette’s realization. Hopefully they will be able to resolve their issues. Clearly Kate can’t match BP so it was good that she decided to leave TK.

      Thanks again for the update.

      Love love love!

      • I’m really enjoying it, and it’s seriously gotten in the way of my sleep.
        I’m real jealous of the residents in the western hemisphere now :P

        Yeah, I never thought somebody would be as good as Bette for Tina, and frankly I didn’t like Kate Arden, even in the show. She’s cool tho, as long as she keeps to a distance.

        You’ve been real supportive.
        Thanks thanks thanks!

    5. I know, not often I write a comment, but I read each chapter.
      I’m really glad that the story is out in the direction of Bette and Tina :)
      They need to discuss and solve a lot of things, but I trust in the power of love!
      Bette finally realized what happened with Tina, and she made ​​the right decision that what is really important in her life.
      I look forward to the sequel!

      • You really get me! Yes, she finally came to the realization of what is important in her life, not money, not work, definitely not her father…
        And now in the next chapter, they’re facing a crisis. So keep your belief in the power of love.
        Thank you for the comment. It means a lot.

      • Hahaha, sounds like you’re enjoying the ride! Anyway, if you can’t get enough, then I have a goal to give more, don’t I.
        Thanks for the comment.

      • Wow, all capitals, you do like the line a lot, don’t you.
        Well I’m so glad then.
        I hope you’ll enjoy more, despite how terrible a person I am to pull another cliff hanger in the next chapter :p

    11. Thanks for the update ! I wish You could write more often (a bit selfish I know !) because it’s one of my favorite ;-)
      And BTW two words : go Belgium !!!

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