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    Round n Round We Go (Ch.20)

    Story written on June 27, 2014 by robyntibetter.
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    Bette immediately glared at Shane while Tina smiled awkwardly to the chatty woman. Shane came over and poked Charlotte on her shoulder. “Uh… Charlotte…” But the girl continued to complement their “relationship” and consulted Tina with her love life problems. Bette creased her brows at her friend. First of all, this woman was just so annoying and

    Bette immediately glared at Shane while Tina smiled awkwardly to the chatty woman.

    Shane came over and poked Charlotte on her shoulder. “Uh… Charlotte…” But the girl continued to complement their “relationship” and consulted Tina with her love life problems.

    Bette creased her brows at her friend. First of all, this woman was just so annoying and second, she had a boyfriend, which seemed not to be an interfering factor for Shane whatsoever.

    “Charlotte can I see you a minute over here?” Shane dragged the young caterer directly to a corner.

    “Oh, excuse me.” The young woman left with Shane, and left the two woman in an awkward place.

    They stood there, shoulder to shoulder, and said nothing to each other for an entire minute. Bette played with her fingers and listened to the blonde’s breathing.

    “We were a great couple.” Tina suddenly tilted her head sideway and glanced at the tall brunette. “We were kids. But we were a great couple.” They bickered, they fought over small things, but they always got around. She just didn’t understand why they did not survive that one last fight. It was mostly her fault. She failed to tell the truth, and she failed to fight for her young love, she let the girl slip away. But she didn’t understand, she didn’t understand why they ended up like they did.

    Bette paused. She looked up from her hands to Tina, and she saw the glassy sparkling in those eyes, the sparkling so beautiful just like a starry night on the roof of Sue’s old apartment building. And she remembered all of the moments that she fell in love with the sparkling a little more than the night before. “Yeah, we were.”Their love seemed so solid and unbreakable, but there was one mistake, one misunderstanding, and it broke it all. Then there were more mistakes, more misunderstandings. She was a part of that. Things had been complicated, which wouldn’t be solved by a simple kiss and an apology like before, would they? It made her so sad. She felt like she was missing her life for the past ten years. She wanted to go back, and change the way she handled things, erase the history, create new ones, but now, now her hands were tied, Tina was with someone and the best thing she could possibly do, the nearest thing to an apology, was to not ruin it for the blonde. “So, uh… how is it going with Kate?” She changed the topic, pretending it was a casual, gossipy question, and went back staring at her fingers.

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    1. Author:
      To my readers who appreciate my work and are patient to wait for my posts, thank you very much.
      You see now, it’s all going to turn well. And I know there are still issues unresolved, like Bette’s illness, I will get to that very quickly.
      I know, I’ve been dawdling for a while. But it’s the World Cup! And I have not missed a single game, and that’s a new record. The fever is running pretty high in my country. Hope you can all enjoy the games.

    2. I have so enjoyed this story! This chapter was filled with many issues. I love that everything finally dawned on Bette. Please let them heal and grow old together. Thank you for your gift of writing!

      • The issues are resolving gradually but surely. I assure you that they will have a nice ending.
        Thank you so much for the supportive comment. I truly appreciate it.

    3. My God! it was breathtaking.
      Worth waiting all these days by this chapter, was iincrivel!
      My Congratulations, I love this story.
      Note: Actually here in Brazil we are living and breathes football, and you
      can imagine how the party in this country.
      The Brazil literally stops when our national team plays.
      I hope that your selection proceed to the next phase.
      (Excuse my English, it is not my official language.
      I’m from Brazil)

      • God I love soccer so much! And Brazil has done really well with this year’s World Cup. I almost shed tears when Neymar injured his back and was sent to the hospital. Such a shame.
        I hope you can enjoy more.
        And probably one day I’ll pay a visit to Brazil. It just seems dreamy, the beaches, the sea, the stunning girls in bikinis ;p

    4. RT,

      Football is not really big here in our country so I can’t really relate with you guys but I hope that you and mscully are really enjoying the world cup fever :)

      As for the update, I am happy about Bette’s realization. Hopefully they will be able to resolve their issues. Clearly Kate can’t match BP so it was good that she decided to leave TK.

      Thanks again for the update.

      Love love love!

      • I’m really enjoying it, and it’s seriously gotten in the way of my sleep.
        I’m real jealous of the residents in the western hemisphere now :P

        Yeah, I never thought somebody would be as good as Bette for Tina, and frankly I didn’t like Kate Arden, even in the show. She’s cool tho, as long as she keeps to a distance.

        You’ve been real supportive.
        Thanks thanks thanks!

    5. I know, not often I write a comment, but I read each chapter.
      I’m really glad that the story is out in the direction of Bette and Tina :)
      They need to discuss and solve a lot of things, but I trust in the power of love!
      Bette finally realized what happened with Tina, and she made ​​the right decision that what is really important in her life.
      I look forward to the sequel!

      • You really get me! Yes, she finally came to the realization of what is important in her life, not money, not work, definitely not her father…
        And now in the next chapter, they’re facing a crisis. So keep your belief in the power of love.
        Thank you for the comment. It means a lot.

      • Hahaha, sounds like you’re enjoying the ride! Anyway, if you can’t get enough, then I have a goal to give more, don’t I.
        Thanks for the comment.

      • Wow, all capitals, you do like the line a lot, don’t you.
        Well I’m so glad then.
        I hope you’ll enjoy more, despite how terrible a person I am to pull another cliff hanger in the next chapter :p

    11. Thanks for the update ! I wish You could write more often (a bit selfish I know !) because it’s one of my favorite ;-)
      And BTW two words : go Belgium !!!

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