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Round n Round We Go (Ch.21)
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“Why?” She wasn’t. The headache and dizziness was surging again, hitting harder. The room started revolving, round and round, upside down, and she started to lose her focus. Her breath picked up yet her pulse was weakening.
Tina felt the weight Bette put on her shoulder was getting heavier. “Oh gee, you’re heavy, baby.”
“Uh… sorry.” The brunette tried to straighten herself up. But it turned out to be a unsuccessful attempt. In a snap second, her legs gave in.
The weight on her suddenly dropped dead behind her. She was yet to react when Bette collapsed, nearly taking her down as well. She screamed a piercing cry. The cat on the cabinet was startled. It jumped and stumbled as it ran out of the space. “Bette!”
The tall woman lay there, still conscious, but had no strength in her to do anything. She looked at the swirling ceiling and felt the tides of sickness striking harder and harder, preventing her from getting up, or even moving a finger.
Tina saw blood coming out from a scratch on Bette’s brow ridge, dangerously near her eye. It wasn’t very deep, but quite thin and long. She couldn’t remember if she heard her bumping into something sharp, later she would find out that it was caused by the brunette’s own finger nail when she subconsciously wanted to hold her head as she dropped down.
“Oh my god!” She panicked, but kept telling herself not to panic. She ran for the emergency button lodged on the wall, and it immediately dialed 911 for her.
“911, what’s your emergency?”
“Please come quick! She fainted and fell. She could’ve hurt her head.”
“Is the address same as where you’re calling from?” The calm voice asked and repeated the address that showed on the station’s screen.
“Yes! Yes please call an ambulance.”
“The response group is on their way.” The officer assured the startled woman. They were always so scared, and panicky. “Ma’am, I need you to calm down, and check on the patient. Do not move her, but check her pulse.”
Tina rushed back to Bette’s side and held up her wrist. She held her breath, and tried to find a pulse. There was the familiar pulse at a slower and weaker rate. And in her hand, Bette’s arm twitched a little. She looked over and saw the big brown eyes at a distance, but also scared. “She’s awake.”
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I know! I know, I’m a terrible person. Just as things are going so well, Bette is ill. But I feel that it should be discussed now because the story is gradually coming to an end. I believe you can sense that.
Don’t worry, I promised a good ending and I’m going to keep that promise.
And another thing, I really appreciate my readers who enjoy my work, who express their supportive feelings through comments. You’re the reason that I keep writing during summer school.
But for three or four consecutive posts, I always got a one star ranking whereas the rest are positive. I know I should be objective about the ranking, but every time I get a little bit more upset. Don’t know if it’s some kind of joke but I don’t appreciate it. So I’m asking very nicely that either you tell me what’s wrong with my story so I can improve, or please stop reading it if you hate it that much.
Now back to the happy place. I’m delighted to find out that my readers are from all over the globe.
Brazil fans, congratulations on the game! One step closer to the finale!
I don’t have a particular favorite team since my country never made it to the first round since the 1990s. But I always enjoy a good game, even if it means that I have to stay up til 4 in the morning. :)
Oh my god Robyn! Finally arrived Saturday, and a new
update.
The scene of reconciliation bette and tina pure poetry, just beautiful!
I confess that my heart is tight in knowing that this bette
getting sick, but I trust you to make a final
Happy for them.
I love the way you conduct this story, and for me is you
five star .. Congratulations!
Note the World Cup, I was saddened by your selection does not have to last
next stage, twists too, was one of the best games of the Cup, you have
a fantastic goalkeeper. We are in another phase, and unfortunately our
best player is out of the Cup, Neymar fractured the third vertebra of the spine
and will be out for four months of football, it’s a shame, but we will fight
and we’re not going to shoot it, as our rallying cry says “The Champion
This Vollta. “Like any good Brazilian, I love Football.
(Sorry my english pessimo)
Thank you so much. And I’m sorry for your national team. I don’t think I can possibly feel the same way as your people do.
But it’s been a great World Cup. The games were so exciting. I think your country did an amazing job this year.
And it’s okay, your english is not pessimo, I can understand you perfectly. It’s absolutely my honor to write something that you find beautiful and poetic.
xoxo
Don’t let ratings get you down. Especially the 1 star ones. It already happened before, people like to give writers a hard time. I find it quiet juvenile. The best way is to ignore them.
If you can’t stand it, though, you can always disable ratings, that’s what I did. With this I’m not trying to sound vain (I’m not even a great writer), but I hate when people hide behind their computers, giving you 1 star or whatever just to bother you, and don’t speak their own minds.
With that said, I’m really enjoying this story… I was loving the first one, as well, and I’m saddened you haven’t uploaded it anymore. Anyway, I knew something wasn’t right with Bette, but you said there will be a happy endind and I will hold you to that!
Keep up the great work!
B0P
You’re right! I shouldn’t let them get to my head. And it’s just so good to know that many more people are kind and justice. So I’m trusting them and leaving the rating on.
Since you mentioned my first story The Lucky One, I’m still working on it! Just been a little distracted by this story. I only thought this one would be a side story and a fairly short one but people are liking it. As soon as I’m finished with this one, I’ll return to it.
Thank you very much for the support. I hope you’ll enjoy more.
Love the story, thanks. I’ve enjoyed this story very much. Dont worry about the rankings. Some people are just that way.
Thank you very much. I’m so glad to have so many supporters. I’ll definitely be doing my best to bring more good ones.
Uh, ranking? I don’t know how to do that, but from me you would get the highest points! !!
Your story is amazing, has everything in it and i hope it will continue longer than i think it will.
I’m glad Bette came back to Tina and that they reconnected. I hope Bette wil recover soon and i will hold you for a happy ending.
I love footbal and will cheering for the Netherlands, my country.
Hope you will have a good night.
Bibi28. I’ll be rooting for the Netherlands.
Your wishes are my command :-)
The story is going to have more joy and fun in the last few chapters and no more drama haha.
Wow, Netherlands, I’ve been there once on a trip and found it a fascinating country. Sorry that your national team met a strong competition in Argentina, and I hope for a great game with Brazil!
In my country, lots of people are rooting for the Netherlands, my best friend is actually a crazy groupie of Robin Van Persie, I gave her an orange jersey with his number printed on for birthday present. ;p
I love your writing and I love this story! You make me laugh and you make me cry and that is the sign of a good storyteller. Don’t worry about Ratings!
I’m from the Country who last won the World Cup in 1966 the year my son was born!! I lost interest at the first Round!
I haven’t lost interest in this story though but please look after Bette, I so love her!
SassyGran!!! Sassy name lol
Thank you very much!
So the champion of 1966. Hmmm, England correct? Well, the hometown of modern football!
I will take care of Bette. She will be fine. So, please continue to read and enjoy my story!
Bravo! I love the reunion. Please let Bette be okay long enough for them to realize their destiny as a couple again. I love this story!! 10 stars!
Hahaha thank you very much. I’m a tease but I’m not that evil to not let them be happy together. Bette is going to be just fine, I assure you!
Please continue to read and hope you enjoy more.
I had at least read three times or more on every chapter that you had wrote… I just love it. You are a amazing writer…. Please post soon..thank you.
You’re so very kind. Wow, three times every chapter? I’m flattered! So, I hope one post a week is not too slow :p and I’ll do my best to keep up the work. xoxo
I loved the episode, thanks.
I like to see the charm Bette Porter Tina earn the trust of as they began their relationship.
Bette gave many details to Tina, Tina so irrevocably in love with Bette.
Excellent, I can not wait for the next =)
Thank you very much. Tina is absolutely devoted into this relationship. And in the next chapter, you’ll see that Bette is equally devoted too.
Hope you’ll enjoy it more. :)
Well you just like to play mind games with us huh??lol..Another great chapter and can I just express…yessssssss!!! they got back together lol…but yes really why Bette gotta be sick but I figure she would with all the headaches lets just hope all is well…I hope your last chapters are longer with more happiness and possibly more children and a wedding since we was deprived of it on the show…Love this chapter keep up the awesome and dont get discouraged!
Ditto! Please, please more chapters, happiness and more!!!
Hahaha! I’m said to be a cliff-hanging master, to tell you the truth :p
Well, don’t worry now you know me, I always have solutions for the troubles came in the way.
And thanks for your suggestion, I’m thinking adding more chapters of fun and happiness before ending this story. So, I think you’ll be very happy to hear that.
Anyway, thank you for the support and please go on reading my work!
Poor Bette. I hope her condition isn’t that serious. Their reunion is just so fucking sweet. Hehe!
As for the ratings, never mind if you get one or two. For sure sometimes they are just not able to click the stars properly.
Again you are making me ask for more so since I really love this story I will give you not just 5 Stars but I am also giving you 5 spoons and 5 knives coz you made me crave for more.
Love love love!
hahaha 5 spoons and 5 knives huh? My oh my, what am I gonna do with them…
I know! When I read my work later, I think it’s fucking sweet too! lol. Well, if it makes you smile, mission accomplished, then.
And don’t worry, I’ll take care of Bette. It’s gonna be sweeter for the two.
I love your story.10 stars for you.
Thanks a lot! Hope you’ll enjoy more.
It was really amazing!
within the first few minutes meeting of Bette and Tina at the door .. WOW!
you have a talent with words :)
when they “find each other” was a beautiful scene too! :P
very bad to know that Bette is sick, but I believe you, when you promised us “happy ending” .
Please only little drama to come, the two girls deserve happiness.
please posting soon.
That’s very nice of you to say.
I was hoping for this kind of reaction :D
Bette is not well, but you’re right, believe me that I will fix not only her health, but also her spirit for better times to come!
And no more drama, only the happiest time to come.
Robyn..Thx 4 this gr8 update. Your writing skills r amazing n your dialogue is right on! You develop your characters w/ such emotion n depth it’s hard 2 stop reading..Let’s hope Bette illness is not serious. You promised a happy ending I’m holding you up 2 it. Tibette needed that mind blowing pleasure…they’ve been deprived 2 long. Their love endures 4/ever….Now on w/ your next post…can hardly wait….I am a fan of your writing skills. That 1 star rating….opinions are like a–holes, everybody has 1…don’t let it bother you…we know better…you’re a 10 n my book!….Badabing!!!
Oh you’re so very nice and supportive! That babbling of you, just generous, made my day!
Bette and Tina always will have a happy ending. Their love is so very great, I agree.
I’m going to fulfill my promise and bring the happiness in about another two chapters. I hope you will continue to enjoy!
xoxo :)
Thank you for posting. I really like your story and look forward to future chapters. I wouldn’t worry too much about the ratings. As scribe commented, sometimes those stars get accidentally touched in the wrong place. As a mobile user, I have to admit that I have accidentally entered a low rating. My finger touched the screen in the wrong place, and once you touch it, that’s it! I think I did it on one of BenMac’s chapters and I was sick about it but there was nothing I could do. I try to be more cautious now when I’m on my mobile device. Don’t let a low rating keep you from posting. I enjoy your writing. Thank you!
Hmmm, I see. I wouldn’t get bothered by it anymore since I’ve seen how supportive my readers are.
Hahaha poor BenMac! I love that author’s work, especially the spiritual stories, and the sci-fi!
Anyway, thank you very much for commenting. I hope you’ll continue to read and like my writing.
Please let Bette be ok, no more drama. Please post more, thanks
Of course I’ll let her be ok! And I promise, no more drama. They deserve happiness after so much.
Thanks for continuing to post. Don’t be discouraged by those who feel the feel the need to be petty. You are kind enough to put ourself out here.As a devoted reader of this site, I appreciate all the time and spirit that you are writers put forth. Continue to post and give us your thoughts. Bravo
And as a devoted writer, I must say that I truly value what my readers think. Your ideas and comments are giving us the inspiration. It’s been such a great journey with so much support.
So thank you, for reading ad commenting on our work. Hope you’ll always enjoy the great stories on this site, I know I do all this time. :)