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Round n Round We Go (Ch.7)
Chapter Seven
The next morning, Tina woke up a bit later than usual because she had to stay up and finish homework.
“Why you were home so late?” Sam was absolutely not pleased as he asked his daughter. He squinted and saw some suspicious red cloud so he leant in a sniffed, getting some strange perfume and alcohol from the girl’s shirt. And suddenly, his frown spread up into a grin. “You were with Porter, weren’t you? I knew it! I knew you’d be such a good girl.”
Tina hated it that her father now knew. It was supposed to be her secret, her secret adoration in Bette, her secret falling for Bette. “Dad! We were out with some friends.” She lied.
“Never-the-less, Tina, you’re making progress, my girl. Now I’m another step to get back with that old biatch. But you keep it steady, when time’s right, I’ll tell you what to do next.” Sam stroked his imaginary beard with a wicked smile.
The blonde girl frowned uncomfortably. She was worried. Bette had been such a sweet, sweet girl, who probably seemed to be tough and arrogant, but was sure very kind. There was no way she should let her father do any harm to her. “You’re not… Bette’s not gonna get caught in your plan right? Is she gonna get hurt because of what we are doing?”
Sam regarded his daughter with inspection for a while. “Why you’re asking this? Tina, you’re not really having feelings for her, are you?”
Tina felt a hand gripping her heart as her father asked. The more time she got to spend with Bette, the less she wanted to follow their “script”, and when she figured that she was trapping, it was already too late.
Yet Sam contemplated the situation that lay before him. His daughter was clearly growing fund of the Porter kid. On the bright side, it would fool everybody when the feelings were real, wouldn’t it? After all, what kind of love could two kids have between them? So the wicked grin again appeared on the old face. “No, no, absolutely not! What does she know anyway? You just look on how I’m gonna handle the old Porter. Now let’s go to school.” He gestured her to pack her bag. And before they set their feet out the old rusty apartment door, Sam hugged Tina’s thin little shoulders. “I wish I had known you earlier, kid. Dad’s so very proud of you. I promise to make it up to the time after all of this is settled.”
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I wonder if I’m going too fast with their relationship. But there’ll be a large portion about their adult life as they graduated from Marymount and even college.
So please tell me what you think of their relationship as teenagers.
Should I slow down to write about more day-to-day details or should I speed it up so that the story can move faster to the dramas and the resolutions and their future together?
I love the story and the pace at witch it’s moving please post soon!
Thank you very much for reviewing! I have updated another chapter. Hope you’ll enjoy it.
Tough question, i kinda like both ways.
A little more of their teenage relationship and then move forward to the future.
But please not to much drama.
Okay, not too much emphasize on the drama part. Thanks for reviewing!
Thank you for the update and please- not to much drama.
Well, pain is the only way to happiness… But I know what you mean, not too much emphasize on the angst parts. I’ll try to bear that in mind. :) thanks for reviewing!
I like your story a lot and I ….. like drama too (sorry didi 1956 ;-)
I’d rather read their relation after school but you know, it’s up to you.
PPS
I’m so glad you are enjoying this story. Personally, I love drama and I love the post-drama phrase,where it’s all sweet and romantic, much much better. ;)
Sweet