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    Story written on January 13, 2011 by GrindRight.
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    POV story of Tina’s escape from an abusive relationship.

    "Please. Let me help you out in some way at least. I feel really awful just staying here," I insisted, glancing back at Angelica and then to Bette. "I won’t cause any trouble here, and I’m assuming you can see that because you’re putting a lot of trust in me. I appreciate all of this so much and I just want you to know that I’d like to help you too."

    When I took her hand in mine, I felt weird. Not a bad frightening kind of weird, but like something was washing over me. I was almost scared for a moment until I looked up into Bette’s eyes and saw that she felt a little strange herself. I couldn’t let go of her hand. Thankfully, she spoke next. "I’ll let you know if there’s anything you can do, but I think you both just need some time to breathe." What was happening to me? It was just a hand. I even thought of the possibility that her lesbianism had something to do with this, but I’d had lesbian friends before. Her voice sounded so fluid, and I could see in her eyes that she felt this too. I could only look at her, confused. "Like now." I just looked back down to our hands, when I heard her voice again. "Breathe. Like now." She was smiling and pulling her hand from mine, and I looked up to her in a small matter of shock. I nodded and took a deep breath in and out.

    "Sorry …" I felt somewhat ashamed, for having stared at her hand, and into her eyes that way. What was wrong with me? I ran both hands through my hair and smiled at her again. "I’m sorry … it must be all the stress." I walked over to the couch again and sat down on it beside Angelica. I didn’t look back up at her, but I could tell that she was a bit disappointed. In what, I didn’t know.

    She had eaten and was off to work in no time, explaining about her alarm and where Angelica and I could hide if by some strange chance he did find us so quickly. I was eternally grateful and must have looked completely depressing as I sank to my knees with my face in my hands, sobbing. I couldn’t help it – no one had ever been so selflessly kind to me in all my life. I wish I could have kept from crying. Maybe she could have arrived at work on time.

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    1. I can’t even…sigh. I love this, I really do – and the fact that I feel this tightness in my chest, an incredible sadness for Tina, yet hopefuless when I think of what she and Bette can and will share….it’s a credit to your amazing writing. This comment doesn’t make sense. I know that…but it’s beacause I am overwhelmed by your words. Looking forward to the next post!

    5. I’ve just read both chapters and love this story. I read each page with bated breath. Your versatility to write about taboo topics whether it’s physical abuse to bondage and domination is just amazing. You develop each story with such attention to character detail that it always leaves me wanting more.

    8. So beautifully written, it really feels like we’re taking this journey with them. I’m not usually a fan of POVs but you write so perfectly that I can’t help but love your story

    14. I love this story. Even though you’re writing it from Tina’s POV you let us know what Bette is thinking and feeling too. It’s amazing how you do that.Tina couldn’t have found a better place to hide and yet I find myself worrying that he’s going to find her somehow. I think at some point when she’s strong enough she needs to confront him and put an end to her fear. I’m sure Bette would support her through that.

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