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Run (6)
“At six in the morning?” I sighed jokingly, reaching my hand out to Angelica. “I’m not promising you French toast if you wake everyone up to eat it, young lady.”
“I’m sorry.” She sounded so sad, and I could hear Bette chuckling with fatigue as I walked Angelica out of her room. My hilarious child.
She also went on to ask me questions as I cooked, which wasn’t unusual, but the subject of questioning was unexpected. First she asked if Bette’s bed was for adults, and then why she couldn’t have her own bed, which she wanted. I almost laughed at how perfect it seemed when she said it that way – I wanted desperately to sleep with Bette, but felt guilty for leaving Angelica in this difficult time in our lives. It turns out I was reading too much into it, and she was much like any child her age – totally oblivious.
I had to smile when Angelica asked if Bette wanted me to sleep in ‘big bed’, as she called it – I almost laughed. I wondered what Bette might have said, or if she would have blushed, but I tried to answer my girl as honestly as I could without being inappropriate.
“You know, baby … Bette likes Mommy very much.”
She was listening intently, sitting at the table and hanging on my every word. Sometimes she could be so attentive.
“And Mommy likes Bette, too.”
As I put half of a banana in front of her to eat, she smiled up at me. “Just like Daddy?”
Oh boy. “You know that no one can ever replace Daddy, right? He’ll always be your Daddy.” He’d had his fatherly moments, and I hoped she would always remember him as he was before.
She nodded and started eating in that nonchalant way as she looked around the room. I couldn’t help but want to laugh that none of this was even remotely bothering her. She was just too young to understand all of it.
When Bette finally made her way to the table, she was mid-yawn when Angelica spoke to her again. “Mommy said she likes you.”
Her yawn was quickly interrupted with her own laughter. She had to yawn again to be satisfied before she got to her feet and shook her head at me. “You like me?”
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(46 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
Grindright, I don’t remeber if I’ve commented on your stories before, I dont think I have. But with this one, you’ve really gotten to me. Tina’s struggle to become confident and strong, Bette admitting and overcoming her insecurities, and Angelica’s childlike nature(that is so much stronger and less insecure than the adults around her)has really gotten to me. I need to see where this is going to take them.
I’m so happy that they are finding their groove with each other and it is becoming easier for them to be with each other. I didn’t think that animal would be in jail for the entire sentence. Hope Bette and the police get there quickly. Hope he gets really foolish and turns on the police so they shoot him down like crazed animal he is because people like him don’t quit. He won’t stop until he is silenced permanently. The law can’t keep him in jail long enough and they will always live in fear of him returning. Even with all the abuse and such, I’ve enjoyed reading this story and Tina finding herself and also realizing that her life didn’t have to go on in violence. Hate to see it end but at least it will end on a good note for Tina and Bette hopefully. Great update. Thanks for posting.
hopefully angie remembers to call bette like she did when ed was there
How could you leave it hanging like that? Sucha tease. Please post soon.
You can’t leave us there! You are a tease… Thanks for the post
I hope Angel thinks this is a real emergency this time and phones Bette!! I like all your writing but I must admit I prefer this more tender style. Bravo GR.
Thanks for the update, I’m glad that Tina decides to face up to her husband. I look forward to your next post.
Heartfelt and well written as always. I am glad that Tina has renewed confidence. Angie should dial 911 and Bette.
Your stories are always captivating and so well written. Love the way you’ve described Tina’s realization that she has control of her life. Disappointed that it’s coming to an end, but look forward to your next post.
Bravo Tina,be strong.Amazing story.Thank you.
Good job Tina, take your life back! But I sure hope Angie is in the house calling for help. Post soon so we can find out!
I’m so happy that Bette and Tina are in a strong secure relationship and that it has given Tina the confidence that she had lost over the years of abuse she was subjected to. I just hope she can hold him off long enough for help to get there.
OMG You such a tease and leave us like that ahahhah. Damn that was so good and hope Bette come home on time to help Tina, ok now let see Tina kick his ass. Please post more, thanks!
i agree with the others.. lets hope angie dials 911 and bette… and what a place to leave us.. would love to see tina kick his ASS…pps