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Savannah
Story written on September 19, 2011 by kins40.
"No, don’t be. I am the one who’s sorry." Tina countered. "Sorry to not see what great opportunity this is. Not very many people can boast to have slept in the savannah in the middle of all these wild animals."
The smile now etched on Tina’s face was infectious and made Bette smile just as broadly. In turn, Tina let out a small laugh and Bette followed suit with one of her own and before long they were sharing a hearty laugh which caused the hippos in the river to look over to the bank with puzzled faces.
"You hungry?" Bette asked, thinking that the day had been so busy that they had skipped lunch.
"Yeah, actually, I am." Tina replied realising also that the last meal they had had, were those Danishes and the coffee she had brought for breakfast.
"Why don’t you go and see what Augustine has packed in that huge cooler box in the back of the jeep, while I radio for some help."
A few minutes later, Tina had unpacked the cooler box atop the hood of the jeep.
"Dinner is served." She exclaimed triumphantly. "Augustine sure knows how to spoil you!"
Bette looked in amazement at the amount of food laid out. There were multicoloured salads and flat bread as well as an assortment of cold cuts and cut up fruits.
They sat up on top of the hood, resting their feet against the bull bars at the front of the jeep and started their impromptu picnic. They talked non stop as they ate.
Sitting face to face on either side of the hood, they silhouetted beautifully in the soft glow of the evening light. The sun was setting steadily dropping behind the horizon turning dusk a striking orange. The setting sunlight reflected momentarily on the white surface of a few passing clouds but finally the burning orange ball disappeared completely and the light began to fade rapidly.
The tranquility of the day was replaced by the hush of the night. As the world was falling asleep, the savannah was waking up filled with the magical sounds of the night.
They took advantage of the last of the light to tidy the remnants of their picnic and Bette set out to prepare their shelter for the night.
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absolutely amazing your writing makes me feel like im right there with them so descriptive……x
Wonderful story, just love it
All I can say is “wow”! This is one of the best stories I’ve read in awhile. Brava!
That was just so perfect, thank you.
Absolutely beautiful. Such a tender and loving scene. All is well. Thanks.
Just an awesome story!!
Excellent.Wonderful story.Thank you.PPS
Perfect Monday nite..your amazing writing.. Bette and Tina together under African stars..priceless!
yes i’ve been told that my reactions are favorable I really don’t know what that means tho lol anyways my reaction for this chapter is “YOU ARE FREAKIN BRILLIANT!!!” I love that they’re stuck together but you Ms. kins have been teasing us quite horribly if they don’t at least kiss soon I think I’m gonna die!
Wonderful Chappie! Now that I know Bette called for reinforcements to arrive by morning, I feel better. The tent on top of the jeep is a genious idea, and omg, I love head rubs too. :) PPS!!
I’m speechless. But a tad worried. Hoping they don’t become Simba’s next meal. :) Just saw this posting before I went to bed last night but I have now answered in kind with a posting of my own.
So sweet! I love the fact that they’re taking things very slowly. Just enjoying each other’s company. The only problem is that Tina is going back to New York soon. If they don’t make some kind of commitment to each other before she leaves will they just drift apart?
Wonderful
Beautiful and their safe :) THank you for a wonderfully early post. love it.
You gave me a scare there for a sec K40. cuz my comment will be ..”Run for your life, Bette and Tina”..Now all I have to say is… So, romantic…Cuddle up some more will yeah?…:))
Wow!! Thanks Kins40!! :-) such a nice surprise to see your update!! Lol.. Ok! ok! no more puppy dogs eyes and to answer your next Q is.. Enough for this time ;-) and FYI I absolutely sure that no matter what, I will be still looking forward to your posting ^^, … hmm this slow burning is so tender and sweet, blessed Augustine for packing plenty of food for them.. So does it mean they can stay longer without worry then? *winks* ;-p he3…
You M’am, have a thing for massages, don’t you?… Can’t blame you, love those as well… Right, it was so late last night when I read your chapter that I decided to postpone my comment til this morning… heu… mid-day. That was a purely wonderful chapter!!! You are so very good at this little game of setting up some incredibly sweet, slow-burning, romantic moments! Tina is having the time of her life… and not just because of the wildlife! These little snippets of them during the night was delightful, and I can easily imagine how great waking up in each other’s arms is going to feel… Anyway, amazing chapter, and I’ll just add this… Love the slow-burn, but please don’t kill us here! ;) Thanks for the post, dear! xxx
What a lovely way to end a lovely day!
Awwwww, who wouldn’t want to snuggle up next to either of these two under the moon and starlight Serengeti (sigh). I never worry for their safety Kins because they are in each others capable hands ;) I Again, I raise my pint of Guinness to you for such a wonderful story. Post when you can my friend… (PS, were my suspicions correct in my PM to you?)
thrilling and amazing chapter, I’m glad that or gals found comfort in each other company ;D I’m very happy to find an update to ur story I love it ;D