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Savannah
Story written on October 9, 2011 by kins40.
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Bette immediately sensed the subtle gyration of the blonde’s hips. A gentle and sensuous roll against her lower belly.
She froze. Heaving and panting, she suddenly pulled back. She pushed herself up and rolled off the top of Tina and dropped to the ground, trying desperately to catch her breath.
"Oh my God." Tina breathed out heavily, "I am so sorry." She silently prayed that Bette was not upset about what had just happened between them.
She sat up.
"Are you okay?" The accountant asked, looking at the vet who was still lying on the ground.
With her hand over her eyes, the brunette did not speak but simply nodded.
There was a quick moment of silence. Both women were not only emotionally charged, they were desperately wondering what the other one was thinking. Bette and Tina allowed the silence between them to slow their swirling emotions and help them gather their thoughts.
Bette sat up and in a follow up movement stood up. She kept her back to the blonde and walked a couple of steps towards the pond’s edge.
"Bette?" Tina called quietly looking up at the slender figure looking away from her.
The brunette timidly turned around and met the soft caring hazel eyes of the sitting woman.
"I am sorry." Tina reiterated "I should nev…."
"No, Tina don’t be." Bette interrupted, retracing her step back to the blonde. She knelt in front of the accountant and took her hands in hers. She turned them over and kissed their palms, the right one first, followed by the left.
"You are so beautiful, Tina." Bette said moving her hands to cup the accountant’s face. "You have no idea what you do to me….. I am the one who should be sorry…. It’s been such a long time since I’ve wanted…. Since I’ve touched…." The vet let the last part of her sentence hang. She blushed and looked down taking her hands away.
Tears welled up in Tina’s eyes at the brunette’s confession. For the first time in a long time, Bette had allowed herself to be affected by another woman. And that woman was none other than her.
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Jodi really is crazy. Wonderful update.
Fucking nutjob is a total skank.
Jodie is dangerous.
Wonderful update! Thank you so much!
Slimey Jodi..great update!
A really interesting story. This Jodie is an evil, dangerous woman. Let’s dig a hole and drop her in it.
Again…where is the lion or the snake for Jodie? THANK YOU FOR THE UPDDATE:
I will only repeat myself: Jodie does not belong in this story, please do your magic and write her out of Africa. Amazing update. Thank you so much.
Sensational writing. A very intriguing story.
Oh no! A wonderful day spoilt by that damn jodi. Please don’t let anything bad happen to Bette and Tina. wonderful writting and beautiful story. thank you.
Wonderful update. “Our girls” had such a lovely time together and I’m glad they stopped, their first time together should be very lovely and romantic. I agree with everyone above me about jl. You know what I want done with her, she is the lowest of the low. For gosh sakes don’t let her hurt either of the girls. Thanks.
I don’t need to say that I agree with everyone that Jodi is dangerous, crazy, a fucking nutjob and total skank and then my own flair a conniving murdereous son of a bitch who needs to get slapped!! GrrOther than that though, the rest of the chapter was super hot, omg if their kissing was that intense I can only imagine what it will be like when they actually make love cause I’ve read all your stories kins and your B n T never fuck.Thanks for the update my friend and I hope you find your laptop charger
Hi Kins! I’ll be back to post my comment on the story once I read them. In the meantime… well, I hope this little appreciation in return for Kins40 effort in writing this story can be enjoyed by all of the readers too.. http://i1219.photobucket.com/albums/dd422/byMerlion/Tibette/Savannah.jpg
I was wondering when the ‘conflict of interest’ situation would arise; it’s just too bad that Jodi is the one to bring it up. Great writing, Kins40, and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
I just can’t get enough of your words. They were just flowing out of your fingertip smoothly. What a talent you have. I finally realize that it’s such a wonderful thing to be an OUT reader.Why? You have to ask Kword75. I love our girls Bette&Tina. I also love you girls Ks&Kw, dare I say more?
That was perfectly lovely until Jodie slithered back into the picture. I’m envisioning all kinds of ways to get her back out of it: elephants tend to remember who’s done them wrong… hmm… And lions might be interested in her habit of skulking about in the trees on the edge of the property after dark… Or maybe Bette could loan her the dodgy Land Rover for her next trophy hunt?
The kisses were perfect….the dialogue was perfect…..everything about these two chapters was perfect, until…… Jodie f’ing Lerner……her existance chaps my ass! True buzz kill.
You never cease to amaze me with your awesome storytelling. Tension is building for that sweet release, conflict of interest aside. Hopefully Jodi will meet the same fate as Bette’s father and be charged by the target elephant, then mauled by those warthogs who like to make an appearance around the estate! LOL! Guess I better get to posting…
I was going to read this last night but was too tired from a very long day so decided to wait until this morning. Glad I did. Gulp! That’s some kissing our gals enjoyed. I’m glad they were able to stop before things got too “steamy”. There are just too many better places they could be for a truly romantic encounter. And I just loved that moment with Augustine and Tina. Can’t say the same for Jodie – might you have provided some foreshadowing as to her demise with Bette’s story of the collaring exercise Kins? Please oh please make it so :) Wonderful update! Looking forward to MORE as always! x iHH — PS I love the devotion of your fan base to this story. Merlion, your book cover ROCKS!
You have to continue floating on those clouds if you are going to post chapters like this. Cloud 9 is still comfy. I saw you drift by on your cloud, you were looking a little preoccupied. :)
Well well, what do we have here? Have you missed me? I have to apologise I’ve been out of the loop way too long. Can you believe I had to catch up on 12 chapters all done in one night mind you, I was that determined to not let another pass without reading this story. I have to say I think with every story you write I begin to love the new one a little more if that’s even possible. I love the protective Bette who is careful to guard her heart, but then when it comes to Tina she finds a way of breaking down all that hard exterior. All 12 of the chapters I’ve caught up on are beautifully written, but I never expected anything less. Love always C x
So Bette and Tina went out on an actual date. Someone or something needs to take Jodi Out of her misery.
Hate Jodi bitch
She has beauty, grace and class unlike you!
Every new chapter of this story is like opening a gift. Thank you. I was concerned of their budding relationship and the conflict of interest to say nothing of the fact that Tina hasn’t spent much time working. Even if Tina can be objective she’s already jepordized her position. Not surprising that Jodi would exploit it, but I have a feeling she’s going to come out on the losing end regardless. PPS
OMG … Jodi can be that rich but I wonder does she has any money to buy a mirror?! Huh! She reminds me of the hyena in the lion king. Luckily the previous pages you gave us overshadow the last page Kins! :-) … Again, who is this Alex?! Will you bring her back also to add more uncertainties in the savannah?! I’ll be stay tune for sure ;-) PPS?! Thanks! :-)
K40 so sweet and soo? ..the longing is almost painful…And had a suggestion? what to do to Jodie?….. Let the Elephants decide! .>
Beautiful update! Tibette’s love is so wonderful and sweet and they don’t need a mean snake in their paradise.
Hey there! First, I am sorry I didn’t comment on your previous chapter (and what a chapter!). As you know, I was out of town, and technologically slightly deprived… Anyway, I of course loved those last two chapters! God, so beautiful… If I am happy with the kissing?… I adoooored the kissing! Especially when it’s such a long session like the one you gave us. But they both needed it I guess. Good job Tina pushing Bette down onto the ground!… Good job Bette pushing Tina against the car door!… Hehehe, seems that passion is about to unleash, isn’t it? And you K, of all, know how to put it into words!… I love that you’re using this auditor/client/conflict of interest thing into the story. That makes it more realistic and will fuel the dramatic dimension. Oh, and as a huge romatic at heart, I love the fact that you’re making Jodie a threat to Tina. No that I want Tina hurt of course, but that will make Bette really really really… angry! And who doesn’t love a pissed off and protective Bette Porter?!… Certainly not “moi”! The lion might be the king of animals, but you my friend are the queen of the Savannah!!… xxx Kw… Oh, and did I mention that we beat England on Saturday?… Just saying… ;)
Beautiful chapter, very loving and tender. Hope Jodi will get hers in the end. PPS!!
Jodi is insane
Jodie spells trouble already! Hope her plans fall short. Great update!
WOW THIS IS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER..THE WAY HOW YOU DESCRIBE THE PLACE,THE SITUATIONS,THE FEELINGS INCREASING BETWEEN BETTE AND TINA IS A PLEASURE TO READ! I LOOK FORWARD TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER
Thanks for the update. What is Jodie planning to do to Tina? She is crazy enough to do serious harm. I hope whatever she does ends up backfiring on her.
more!!!!!! GREAT STORY!!! PPS!! TY