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    Savannah

    Story written on October 18, 2011 by kins40.
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    Chapter 16

     
    She relished the warm water spending a lengthy amount of time letting the warm spray awaken her tired body and kick start her senses.
     
    An hour later, clad in a pair of jeans and a t-shirt, her hair still wet, Bette was parking her car in front of the Peabody Estate. A smile graced her full lips as she stepped out and took the direction of Tina’s private cottage.
    She walked through the building and out onto the open patio situated outside the bar lounge where some of the patrons were enjoying an evening drink.  
    A large and attractive cast iron fire bowl stood in the middle of the elegant paved area setting a stunning scene amongst the natural foliage and flowers which surrounded the terrace.
    Despite the cooling temperature of the African nights, the large logs burning in the striking hand wrought cast iron centrepiece, brought a charming glow and welcome warmth as the guests relaxed and delighted themselves into private conversations. 
    One woman in particular sat aside from everybody else. Her sombre mood and unsocial behaviour instantly shifted as she spotted the arresting brunette.
    “Bette!” was the sharp call which came from the solitary woman.
    The call interrupted the vet’s purposeful walk and she turned her body to check where and from whom the call had come from.
    Jodie Lerner had stood up from her sulking spot and was gesturing for her to come over.
    Seeing that her loud voice had momentarily interrupted the interactions of the lodge’s guests, Bette felt compelled to approach the trophy hunter. Her mind screamed for her to get away as far as possible from the irritating woman, but politeness and a strong desire to not cause a scene, forced her feet to head in the direction of the diminutive blonde.
    “Bette, how lovely to see you. Please take a seat.” Jodie offered with the broadest smile.
    Ordinarily such a welcome would have brought the same kind of smile possibly laced with gratitude from anyone. But Bette could not refrain from frowning slightly at the complete change of demeanour in the woman in front of her. Since when was Jodie Lerner pleasant?
    “Jodie.” Bette uttered simply in lieu of a normal greeting, as she sat down very reluctantly, a slight hint of coldness in her voice.  Around them the low murmur of private conversation resumed.
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    4. Wow… I surely didn’t expect that!!! Here I thought there wouldn’t be any tibette interaction in this chapter, and BAM! What an entry…! I loooove it! So glad Tina saw the scene and the way that F***ing JL behaved with Bette. 2 against 1, baby! Now step off, b**ch! So she wants to quit huh? I thought the email was already her company asking her for an explanation, but I guess not, since J was hoping to “buy” Bette with that threat… No, it seems that Tina is much MUCH clever than JL and had of course anticipated the conflict of interest. Good for you, Tina! Oh, and so scary that thought of Bette under the claws and teeth of that leopard! But o so much more pleasant that description of her in jeans, t-shirt, and… wet hair!!! Do you really want to kill me, K?… Anyway, brillant ending to this chapter, and so looking forward to the next! And by the way… I knew you’d rock my friend, you are awesome! Remember that if you ever meet one of those writer’s blocks again! (Oh, et merci pour le clin d’oeil…) Thanks buddy! xxx Kw

    8. Great update. What a way to take the starch out of the little evil bitch. Way to go Tina. That’s my girl!!! She saw that there is a huge conflict of interest and submitted her resignation before anything came up. Integrity plus. Great job Kins!!! Is the next chapter ready? Thanks.

    9. Excellent. It’s what I hoped Tina would do. Didn’t want to see Bette hurt again by Tina opening her heart to love only to leave her when the job was over or threaten the foundation with a compromised audit. Jodi is just an annoyance but she does add a little spice to the story. Glad you are over the writers block.

    12. Thanks for the update. I wonder what was in Tina’s “URGENT” email. I hope whatever it is Jodi didn’t have anything to do with it.Please post soon!

    13. What is the chance of a drunken Jodie toppling into that cast-iron fire bowl?? Although it may disrupt the beautiful setting and delightful ambiance, it would be a fitting end to the menace that is JL. Loved Tina trumping Jodie’s dastardly plan….touche’. Can’t wait for Bette’s reaction…..and perhaps more kisses….

    16. Hi Kins! When I reached the end of page 3… My mind already telling me to mentally prepared that there won’t be any Tibette moment in this chapter but JL JL JL JL >_< ugh! *You were killing me softly here* then suddenly T made an impressive entry!! Woohoo!! ... But alas, it's such a short celebration as there is no more pages aka frustrated hanging in the air. Dang! Anyway Kins thanks for the update, I hope there won't be anymore blocking for you ;-) and one more thing... I LOVE how you make T so MUCH smarter than JL :-) it's such a thrilled to read ;-)

    17. Yea, a new chapter! Sorry to hear you’ve been battling the dreaded writers block :S But it appears you’ve found a way to break through because this update rocked! Sooooo Tina quit eh? Was it because of the email she received or the one she sent? Few things are ever as “simple” as they seem and I get the feeling this could be the case? Hopefully she talks with Bette about it someplace safe away from where Jodie can overhear them (but we can – nudge, nudge, wink, wink…). Ya know, I never really had a problem with the JL character on TLW but I have to say I find _your_ JL is most reprehensible! Maybe she should personally experience “green” hunting so she can see how “safe” it really is (Ha!). BTW, I appreciate how you’ve integrated issues of wildlife preservation in your story. Having to euthanize any creature especially when it’s due to greed and carelessness takes a bigger emotional toll than most people realize. Thanks again for sharing such an awesome story Kins! Looking forward to your next post :) x iHH

    18. Okay so this is the first chapter that i’ve read of this story and oh how i loved it! But can you please do me a favor and that is if its not too much to ask.. Can u please add me, phacey as a character on the next chapter as someone who will BITCH SLAP that mad woman from hell jodie lerner! It will certainly add more spice to your freakinly awesome story hahaha!! PPS!8-)

    21. Just caught up. Your stories are always a treat! Love the scenery for this story. This coconut-like Bette (hard outside soft inside) and honest-soft -caring Tina is a great combination. The nature describing parts give this story film quality and the kisses match the mid day temperatures.. Thankful that you share your stories with us!

    26. Great one, Tina. I hope she finds a more fulfilling new job soon. Or maybe she’d want to try a different career? Thank you kins for always imagining exciting new worlds for our favorite couple. The way you write them we feel like we’re really there. :)

    27. Well, that is a blast in Jodie’s face, LOL. As usual you keep us hooked to ur words to the last one then leave us hanging there until ur next post. please please don’t keep us waiting too long ;D

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