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Savannah
Story written on October 23, 2011 by kins40.
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"You are right, it is getting late. I’d better be on my way." Tina said trying really hard to hide the hint of disappointment in her voice.
"Oh." Bette said in surprise looking at the blonde who was trying to extricate herself from her lying down position. "I was thinking that it may be wiser…" she hesitated almost shyly, "If you ….. that you… Uh …. I think … you should really spend the night here ….." She finally managed to say.
The brunette’s gaze darted above Tina’s shoulder finding comfort in the neutrality of the blank wall behind her.
"It may be better ….." Bette continued to explain, turning her eyes back towards Tina, "If we put some space between us and that…." she chose her words carefully, "Uh….crazy woman."
Tina noticed a distinct blush over the cheeks of the brunette in front of her. Had her heart not been already thumping so hard in her chest at the brunette’s shy request, the sudden glow which graced the vet’s features would have been enough to create the same reaction.
She sucked in a breath. "Oh…. Uhh…. I guess, you could be right." It was almost a superhuman effort to control the joy in her voice. But it was too late. The smile on her face had betrayed her and Bette was already responding with an equally bright grin.
A quick shower later, Tina emerged from the bathroom refreshed and ready for bed.
"Thank you for the new toothbrush and the lend of clothes" The accountant had said as she let herself be led to the guest bedroom.
"No problems. That’s what they’re here for. Just in case someone stays over unexpectedly."
"Oh… right …… sure." Tina replied wondering how many people had stayed ‘unexpectedly’. A slight pang of jealousy hit her.
Noting the look of unsettled curiosity on the accountant’s face and the fact that her words may have had an all together different meaning to the blonde, Bette hurriedly offered an explanation bringing a slight blush to her cheeks again as she did so.
"Not that anyone really ever stays….. unexpectedly! Shane usually brings her things with her when she stays over." Bette explained realising that her last set of words did nothing to help her case.
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Wonderful story. Love it and love they way you tell this story.
Okay, I confirm: Exactly what I needed tonight, buddy!!! Don’t know where to start… First of all, so does “Simba” mean lion in Swahili then?… Now, although the whole kissing (and a bit more) scene was both hot and beautiful, you know what my favorite part was? The short part where Bette crouches down beside her and tells her she’s beautiful too. You have that amazing je-ne-sais-quoi that makes you write this kind of moments just wonderfully. I loved the whole kissing part (by the way, I’ll have to try that “Do I get a kiss goodnight?” line next time, looks like it can work magic), but I just melted on spot at this sweet ending… Oh, and I just looooved the end: From one second… “running a light finger over her lips, where she could still feel the softness of the blonde’s”… to the next… “She opened a cupboard which contained her riffle collection…”!! Sweet and tough Bette, Rrrrr…! (supposed to be the sound of purring). Go, Porter!! Is JL behind this again? Brrrr…! (supposed to be the sound of trembling). Anyway, can’t wait for Bette to get back under that mosquito net… And K, you should never… and I mean NEVER!… doubt your capabilities, you hear me? You are one of the (few) best writers on this site, and that will never change, whatever writer’s block you may encounter. And I will try to find a chinese proverb to illustrate what I just said, I promise! ;) Thanks for the update and for the cheering up!! ‘nite, Kw
Make sure to aim at the spot in between Jodie’s eyes Bette. One shot, one kill! I can feel the inclination of the story, I think it’s going to be steep. OMG please be gentle with us! Thanks for the awesome update, and feel free to join us in the forum.
Aww..back to Africa..such a great story!!
well, what can i say,,,,,ditto to Kword75, i know cop out,thats why i`m a reader and you`s lovely ladies are the writers,you both have a wonderful way with words,,,,more soon please…x…………..Em, hopefully the gun bette took finds its target in Hodie…….again.xx
Copy Kword75 – you are a truly amazing writer and this story is just awesome.
See, you’re writing your way through the writer’s block! And wonderfully, I might add. So CLEARLY a quick follow-up is the best medicine. :-) Because we can’t leave Bette wondering for long what it would be like to sleep next to Tina.
Wow Kins! … After reading this chapter, it came to my mind… I guess your writer block is a necessary step to bring your writing skills to a higher level. ;-) the loving sweet tender moment you wrote is definitely blow me away! And lol what a funny way of T’s thinking on hoping it wasn’t a discussion of a Disney character! Ya.. Frustration tends to bend some logic :-P oh.. and while reading… Dang how much I dislike J! It stands for you know.. Jenny Jodi… And I started to dislike L too… Lion (interruption!) and *sigh* Lerner! … *shake my head in disdain* ugh I hope, if drunk JL is the cause of this then hopefully it will backfire on her! who knows the lions will enjoy drunken JL more than anything..
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Wonderful story. I have a feeling that Jodi has something to do with the lions being at the compound. We waited for the kiss, we can wait for the next step of love making.
Damn stupid lions and Jodi
It was embarrassing to read about the kiss. I felt like I have been watching it hidden behind large leaved plants!
And I used to love Semba! but damn they were close!U know ur funny, don’t u? I loved ur update, and try another therapist maybe he/she can solve ur teasing problems, lol ;D
Beautiful story.Thank you for the update.PPS
What another excellent and simply gorgeous update. Thank you I so love this story and your writing is just absolutely superb. Thank you.
Thanks for the update. The scene between Tina and Bette under the mosquito net was amazing. Loved it. I was kind of hoping that Tina would ask Bette if she could go with her to check on the babies. I’m worried about Bette being out there alone. Like every one else, I’m thinking that somehow Jodie is behind this and she’s out to get her revenge. Please post again soon.
Oh my, please have another writer’s block if you are going to write hot smouldering chapters like that. You’re the best Kins.
You’re always a pleasure to read kins40. Write the story at your most comfortable pace; we will patiently wait. And I’m happy that you’ve been to the forum. You’re always welcome to join us. :)
I agree with Kword, you are one of the few great writers on this site. Hated that B&T were interrupted and hope that Bette isn’t in danger. PPS!!
Let me say again how much I hate Jo and how Bette and Tina were so rudely interrupted! I hope you know that your writing is brilliant! PPS
[Sorry wrong button :)]I’m with Kword all of it!..thou I laugh when Tina said “. “I hope to God, that who ever this is, did not stop by to discuss a Disney character!” …lol….Very anticlimax. hehe.
Great update. Hopefully for the sake of all readers of this story that the drunken little blonde has been up to no good and that whatever she has used as bait to attract the lions she has the scent or blood on herself as well and they take her as part of their midnight snack they were promised. I think most lions may be nearsighted and will mistake her as part of the prey. Good riddance!!! Thanks.
Oh no I smell trouble! Ahhhhh don’t take tooooo long!!!!
How do you do it Kins? Please tell me how because the way you write those words seems so sexy to me.. You made me sigh when they kiss, it was absolutely beautiful..I didnt know why only now that i just started reading this story but i guess its never too late:-) and about the “walk on” don’t mind me i was just kidding:-D thanks.. phacey
Once upon a time, I told one of my friends that I thought anticipation sometimes more sexy than sex itself. I don’t know if it’s the whole truth, but at least in our fan fic world,I totally believe it.Hey, guys, what more proof do I need than Ks’work, huh?