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    Savannah

    Story written on November 2, 2011 by kins40.
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    Chapter 19

    She walked in first letting go slowly of the hand which was holding onto hers. 
    The tall four-poster bed stood at the centre of the room. The white gauze of the mosquito net had been drawn across and hung loosely around the edges. The whiteness of the protective curtains match the pristine fabric of the sheets, the immaculate expanse only interrupted by a light blue blanket threaded with lemon yellow which lay at the foot of the bed. 
    The sheets had been turned down, awaiting the body which usually took residence between the cool and luxurious cotton fabric.
    Bette stepped up behind Tina closing the door quietly after her. She reached the blonde woman and slowly turned her around. She gently cupped Tina’s face in her hands and leaning in put a whisper of a kiss on her lips before moving to her cheek and jaw and then finally speaking.
    "I really want you, Tina." She breathed the quiet statement in the accountant’s ear, allowing her lips to lightly brush Tina’s jaw line once again and gently caressing her temple against Tina’s. 
    It was almost imperceptible but Tina felt it, a slight tremble in the body of the woman who was so close to her. There was something unspoken in the vet’s words, a ‘but’ which she was sure was imminent. She turned her face into the hand which was cupping her cheek and took it  gently in her own. She kissed the inside of Bette’s wrist and turned her face again to lock her eyes with the vet’s.
    "Then…. make love to me ……" Tina murmured bringing their bodies even closer, "Please…" Not pausing for a reply, she brought her lips to Bette’s for a slow, languid and unrushed kiss.
    How was it that Tina was capable of jump starting Bette’s heart the way she did by merely speaking? The vet was sure that the younger woman could hear her heartbeat. It almost threatened to leap out of her chest at this very moment in time. 
    It had been years since she had touched another woman, held her trembling body in her arms, kissed her…….. been inside her.
    Her hands tingled at the thought, her body reacted, a familiar ache, a warmth of tidal proportion submerged her… The past was just that… A moment, a long time ago and right now Bette was sure it did not matter anymore.
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    5. Gee, and here I thought my view would be obstructed by the mosquito netting ;) Beautifully written – so sensual, tender, playful (loved the shoe dilemma), and tastefully h-h-h-h-h-HOT! Had to remind myself to breathe a few times… All I can say is there’s nothing like anticipation fulfilled and you delivered big time Kins! Please tell me you’ve talked with Tina and hatched a plan to keep her in Bette’s life. It just wouldn’t be right after their sweet night of passion and confessing her love to leave – besides she promised both Shane and Augustine, and clearly I am not the only one here that doesn’t want to be heart broken along with Bette ;) Enjoy the remaining bit of your holiday and have a super weekend (which will be fast approaching given your shortened work week). As always, looking forward to your next post – you know how much I love this story and you tell it so incredibly well! iHH xxx (P.S. looks like you’ve vanquished that bad ole WB ).

    7. Awwwwwww… So f***ing beautiful!… I have no word here, apart from A-MA-ZING!!! I return your compliment K, you outdid yourself with this chapter! I’m always admirative of those authors who can write good NC-17 (to quote iHeartHeart, “tastefully hot”), and you are one of the best, believe me! I was wondering about the 3 words and when they would eventually come (no pun intended…). Good girl, Tina! Great way to appease Bette’s worries without answering her plea. As in “Don’t ask me what I’m going to do, just know that my heart is yours”… Awwww! I thought that was so funny how some of your descriptions of B&T’s moves matched those of felines sometimes. Way to go, writer! Oh, and another funny detail (and it happened with “Letter on the subway” too), your descriptions created images in my head of course, and all was going well until you talked about Bette’s left hand and Tina’s right thigh, which in my head got them in a very weird position… Until I realized I had Bette lying on the wrong side of Tina. Oups! So I shifted her on the other side in my head, and BAM, it suddenly made sense!!… Anyway, seems like we don’t give Bette the same side of the bed then. Oh well… ;) So thank you again, and what else can I say… You rock!!! xxxKw

    12. I would’ve been clawing at my computer if yesterdays server problem had extended until today. OMG  so amazing. Loved every letter of each word that formed sentences in the paragraphs of this joyride.  thank you kins40

    13. I won’t repeat how wonderful you are and so is this chapter, because no word is enough. I just know that I almost lost my breath afraid of interrupting the love and intimacy between them. Eager to find out what’s tina’s plan, if she has.

    14. That was amazing. So sweet and tender. I’m really glad Tina told Bette that she loves her. That girl is going to have to find a way to move there permanently!

    16. Okay we know what Bette was feeling, thinking or doing while they made love. Now we just know you will have to give us Tina’s point of view. YES? It was a fantastic chapter, loved it so much. Thanks for sharing this wonderful love story with us.

    17. Wow Kins!! The way you play with words always amazed me!! Brava girl!! ;-) ITS so beautiful! Your writing is such an art Kins!!! The way you describe everything really brings out the true meaning of making love ;-) so beautiful and hot and …. *sigh*… ^_^

    22. This is why I enjoy your agonizingly slow pace as the pay-off is always worth the wait. Beautifully written…full of emotion and so tender… and sizzling hot, of course. Tina’s “Love me, Bette” request gave me chills. Can’t wait for Bette’s reply.

    23. What more can i say cuz they’ve said it all! :-).. With your words i could feel the intensity of their union..it was simply breathtaking.. Thank you kins!

    25. WOW I AM SPEECHLESS,AWESOME AWESOME STORY,WITHOUT A DOUBT ONE OF THE BEST EVER WRITTEN.VERY ROMANTIC AND INSPIRING AND WHO CAN BLAME TINA FOR FALL IN LOVE WITH BETTE,IF SHE IS THE MOST SEXY THING,VERY HOT SCENE AND I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE HOT HOT SCENESPD:PLEASE POST SOON I’M DYING TO KNOW WHAT WIL HAPPEN!!!

    29. What a wonderful love making. This chapter gave me unlimited goosebumps. I am still feeling butterflies in my stomach. And your description of Tina…. WOW. Pls Pls Pls Pls Pls post soon. And make Bette say it back. (But I think thats NOT your idea…is it??)

    33. I’m not done yet with my reading…But i have to put this first before I forgot..lol..cuz took my breath away…..love could be tender and full of life but she also knew all too well, that when it disappeared it left bitterness and empty spaces where your heart used to be..Damn you are good. Now back to reading. ^ ^

    34. I CAN’T STOP MYSELF FOR COPYING THE LINE?!..So beautiful….the next few days do not exist. Only me. Only you. Only now. And right now, we are together, and nothing else matters.”..OMG..And the last line I know Tina is in deep Shit.. “I love you, Bette.”…..Thanks a lot Kins40..^ ^

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