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Savannah
Story written on August 6, 2011 by kins40.
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"Sijambo, Good Morning Mama Bette!"
As Bette neared her team she started explaining the reason for this early morning gathering.
"We received a call late last night. An elephant was spotted lame, so it is very possibly injured and according to the report the animal seemed to find it difficult to move. I would very much like to find this elephant today and see what can be done. The animal was spotted due North about 50 miles from here. We will track together to the location and split if the elephant has moved on."
A chorus of understanding and approving voices emanated from the group.
As the men moved towards their vehicles to start the journey ahead, with shouts of "Good luck, Kila la kheri!" Bette spotted the only person who so far had been missing from the group.
"Shane! Morning, I thought for a second you wouldn’t show up." Bette exclaimed.
"Hey, how you doing? You know I would never let you down and besides what would you do without your best wildlife photographer?" the skinny brunette replied in her usual soft tones.
Dressed in the same fashion as the rest of the team, she sported a messy hairdo and a half smoked cigarette hung from the corner of her lips, forcing her to squint slightly from her left eye as the smoke threatened to sting her eyes.
"You are going to have to put this out," Bette said pointing to the ashy stick which hung precariously from Shane’s mouth, "Animals don’t like it, I don’t like it and it is a fire hazard."
"You are the boss!" Shane replied as she duly obeyed the request.
The two women loaded their belongings into the first vehicle and the fully equipped mobile veterinary unit set off into the darkness.
They remained silent for a long while. The only noise was coming from the car’s engine and the odd fracas of bouncing equipment in the rear of the cabin as the vehicle negotiated along the uneven Kenyan tracks.
"Hey Missy…. I haven’t seen you in a while." Shane was the first one to break the silence.
"What on earth do you mean? We work together, I practically see you everyday." Bette replied taking her eyes of the road for a split second.
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Interesting premise, can’t wait to see where it goes
Well well well was asking myself when Tina Kennard will make her entrance in the story and how she will be meeting Bette.Now, I cannot wait for your next post kins40. thank you for posting.
Kins you are absolutely brilliant! I love this no one likes to get audited and Bette sure as hell won’t like it either lol
Very interesting story. And now our lovely T. Kennard makes her appearance. Been wondering when and how she would appear and waiting for this to happen and happy it will happen early on in the story. Can hardly wait for them to meet and size each other up. Great update. Thanks.
Been contemplating veganism; maybe that description will give me a jump start. ;-) Great first couple of chapters. Love the change of scenery.
Loving this story. I wondered how Tina was boing to enter the story. PPS
You are an excellent writer. Have you sent some of your work to Boldstrokes Books. I’m sure Radclyffe would appreciate your talent as well. I would pay to read one of your books. I’ve been silently lurking and finally had to say how very much I enjoy everything you write.
Again, you just amaze me with your descriptive and vivid images. Your poetry just flows off the screen of my laptop and fills me with exhilaration. So excited to read more!
I like the feel of this story, Thank for the time and effort you put forth to create for us. PPS
Wait, is Bette been with Tina or not? Was it another woman that broke Bette’s heart or not? PPS!
I knew that Natural Geographic will be perfect with Bette in it ;D I enjoyed reading this chapter a lot, it is just like a movie ur description was very visual, thank u :DYaay, Tina is here finally ;D
I love this story so far. Thanks so much for posting it. The way you describe the savannah I feel like I’m really there…beautiful.
Amazingly written! Can’t wait for more, glad Tina’s on her way;) But wonder how do u know all the details, wildlife etc? Really amazing and joy to read. Tnx for posting!
Very descriptive, your words bring the reader right into the moment. So, Tina’s an auditor, huh? Auditors seem to be the most feared/disliked (misunderstood!) people in my company, I can only imagine Tina’s greeting is going to be met with some initial wariness. Their eventual meeting will be very interesting. Thanks for the post! :)
Amazing detailed descriptions, feel as though I’m right there beside Bette. Happy to see Tina entering story
Hi Kins! :-) great chapter as always!! :-) thanks for the warning in the beginning!! :-D as descriptive as it went… no worries! scrambled egg is not my fave :-p lol when read about the injured elephant, I kinda worry that maybe Tina was the culprit! But then I don’t know should I linger on the relief or not as she’s the auditor – as many mentioned, not a profession with open arms welcome in the company and usually it will affect the interpersona relation too… So I do looking forward to where are you going to take us Kins!! :-) btw … With those details.. You left me wondering.. Are you a vet yourself? ;-)
For what it’s worth, I registered here just because I loved your stories that much. And though it took me long enough, I am finally commenting. You’re a great writer and a big inspiration, although I’m so much worse than you are :).
This was posted on my birthday. Ok more in for the ride. Tina has arrived.
Excellent chapter. So descriptive I felt like I was watching a movie. I was wondering when Tina would make her appearance and how. Now the excitement begins. PPS!!
Yes! Enter Tina :) What excellent writing…. I could just picture everything. Thank you wonderful story.
You’re a really good story teller K40. .The scene with the “Elephant”.. is so life like..And how Bette describe to Shane “How could I not be happy when I get to see this everyday?” .. ..like i’m riding with them?… Amazing… So,Tina is a reporter here?..
Soooo good!Thank you.
Very interesting. Can´t wait to see where you´re going with this.
Hi kins40, Thank you for another wonderful chapter as Bette’s life and purpose in Kenya was exposed. The delicate balance of conservation and interference was expertly drawn out. Along with the potential dangers of working with and caring for wild animals in their own territories. It was great to see Bette and Shane working together, showing the great bond of friendship they share. And then , almost like an epilogue, TIna was introduced as an auditor. I am sure she will have much time to review Bette’s facts and figures. I can’t wait to read more and follow how this intrigue adventure continues. The African sun heats the day just as the heat between Bette and Tina might warm the night. Please carry on soon. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
What a beautifully written, original story. I felt I was in the story with them..you are an amazing writer! Eewww on the scrambled eggs!!
Captivating! Your writing is so evocative. I can almost feel, hear, smell as well as imagine the people and surroundings. Reminded me of The Poisonwood Bible (another favorite read). I thought your description of the injury and treatment of the elephant was done well without getting too gory ;)… but then again I have my loving partner, who is herds manager for our local university’s vet school in the large animal department, to thank for that (LOL). Looking forward to your next post Kins :)
Thats good and yeahhh Bette and Tina meet
I just love it when Shane comes on the scene. She is the definition of cool isn’t she? Love her… Always a good friend.