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Savannah
Story written on November 8, 2011 by kins40.
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Tina smiled. She understood and would wait for as long as it took. Her eyes were filled with the love she had professed the night before and the sight of those adoring eyes made Bette’s heart swell up until her chest felt full to capacity.
Not withdrawing her eyes from the brunette, Tina raised their joined hands and kissed each of Bette’s fingers in turn and scooting closer to the blue shirt wearing woman, she placed her lips delicately over the awaiting ones. Everything else around them was instantly tuned out.
Bette pulled Tina towards her, gathering the blonde into her arms. Everything in that moment was right. They parted briefly and Bette’s long fingers traced over Tina’s forehead, cheek over her lips and down her chin taking in the beauty of the young woman before her.
Tina’s eyes ran over Bette’s face enjoying the spread of goosebumps the light tickle brought to her skin.
“Are you cold?” Bette whispered.
“A little bit.” Tina answered equally softly.
“Do you want to go inside?”
“No…I think I’d like to stay out here for little while..” Tina answered with a knowing smile.
She moved up from her seated position and brought one knee over the thick cushion flattening her hands on either side on the vet’s thighs, finding herself over Bette. She leaned forward and nuzzling her head to the vet’s neck to suck delicately on the warm skin she found there, slowly moved forward pushing her lover into a laying down position.
Bette’s hands instantly moved to the younger woman’s hips guiding her down on top of her.
The warm mouth which had busied itself on the soft column of the brunette’s throat reached her ear and breathed.
“Will you keep me warm?”
Her question was met by a soft moan as Bette adjusted herself comfortably below Tina, grabbing the blue blanket which had fallen onto the floor when Tina had moved up, to wrap it over their two bodies.
“I will do my best….. promise…”
“I love you.” Were the next words from Tina, “I so really do.”
They stared into each other’s eyes and Tina bent down to kiss her lover tenderly on the lips. However long she had left with Bette, she was determined to enjoy every moment with her.
They spent a great deal of time, lost in their embrace, meticulous in their exploration of each other. re-igniting progressively the embers of their passion filled night which still smouldered beneath the surface.
There was a rustle in the distance. Bette heard it first, but banished it to the back of her mind entirely focused on the mouth which was devouring hers.
A low rumble came next accompanied by a further much clearer shuffle in the dry undergrowth. Bette stilled her actions and opened her eyes. Her view of their surrounding beyond the viewing deck was obstructed by the high arm rest of the sofa they were lying on, but she was certain that something close by, was approaching.
Tina had remained oblivious and let out of a groan of discontent when the vet moved her head away and to the side.
The blonde did not remain unhappy for long, though. As Bette turned her head in an effort to listen out, she exposed the side of her neck to the accountant. Tina did not hesitate and dove straight in, latching hungrily on the pulse point just below Bette’s ear.
Tina knew. Tina remembered how the brunette had hissed with utter pleasure every time she had hit that spot last night.
The move took Bette by surprise and she let out a small whimper but forced herself to freeze almost immediately now entirely focused on the approaching noise.
Not wanting to worry, the beautiful woman above her, Bette reached the back of Tina’s head and wrapped her hand behind her neck stilling her movement.
“T…. sweetie….. stop!” Bette spoke in the lowest possible voice.
The loud crack of a branch, possibly less than 15 feet away finally distracted Tina from her focus.
“W…what … what was that?”
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Loud crack of a branch?… I have this very comical image in my head of Jodie falling down from a tree on her ass after she had been playing “voyeur” from afar. Wishful thinking I guess… Hopefully nothing too bad is going to happen, but like you said it yourself, you’re the worst tease, so we’ll just have to wait for your next update to know… Okay, speaking of being a tease… I hate you, how could you do this to me?… Bette in that blue shirt AND pancakes in the same scene???… And I know that you know those are two of my greatest weaknesses!!!… Gawd, that was hard to read… Tina Kennard, you are a hell of a lucky woman!!!… Anyway, I loved it all K, the tenderness, the love, the sexiness, the lizard (God, I loved the lizard!)… Your talent blows me away every time. I guess I should know by now… But nope, still amazed with every new chapter!… Oh and I must confess that the following part: “She could see the two of them tangled in sheets, arching against Bette’s strong body, her hands grasping frantically at the vet’s shoulder as the brunette rolled over to position her into a straddling position never once breaking their undulating motion.” is one of the most sensual descriptions I’ve ever read. It’s like watching a movie where the heroin has those very brief flashbacks of a night of loving… Very well done, really! That line illustrates perfectly how special their night was. Thank you so much for your update, that was delicious… at all levels! xxx Kw
Oooo, what’s that? I’m scared now, it kinda approached really fast… Great update by the way, PPS!
you never disappoint with your vivid descriptions of not only the landscape scenery and wildlife, but also of “other things to be admired”. Your sensual descriptions of the Tina’s replay of the night before just further showcase your talent. As for the cliffhanger, you’re killing me so please post soon!
What? What? What!!! U left it there!?! Oh come on! Is it Jodi or a lion? As a fellow writer I know u didn’t spend a chapter describing the lions if they weren’t gonna be important
what was that? could it be one of the lions? well kins u really spoiling us with this second in a raw NC17, it is beautiful update. I don’t know if I catch u in chat room with my +4 GMT timing, lol;D
Oh My! How wonderful and sensual and sexy was that update! loved every word of it …I tell you kins40 your writing is like watching a movie in my head. Love this story! I do hope what is approaching them is not too bad! thank you again.
Your writing is electric and so vivid. I went to your original posting where you stated that English is not your mother language. That is so hard to believe. Native speakers should take heed and learn from your writing.
Goddamnit if thats Jodi, I want her shot I love this story, I cant help but feel this big drop coming soon. Always keeping me on the edge of my computer seat. Thanks kins40. It doesn’t seem as if you have a WB problem
The description of love making did actually taste like honey. It gives me goosebumps every time you write NC-17. There two types of NC-17( I dont want to mention the dirty type). One is erotic and then there is sensuous. Yours is 100% sensuous. I just love it. I dont have words to describe how I love the way you write. But you still are a tease. Now I will keep wondering, what was that?? I would say Bette is a lucky woman. She gets to hold delicate, soft, beautiful Tina in her arms. I would do anything to hold Tina in my arms. I have seen so many people, very good looking, stunning , extremely beautiful(far better looking than Laurel, My office is just next to modeling agency), but there is something about Tina(Laurel) that just…. She has me. “It does feel like coming home”. I feel so good to even think about her. Your stories gives best picture of Tina. How you paint her. WOW. I still read your stories more than once. Please post soon. Please Please Please.
Go on with your bad self girl! Kins you are an amazing writer. This continues to be absolutely wonderful in every way – sometimes recalling a moments shared passion can be just as powerful as the actual thing itself (I’m with Kword – delicious on all levels for sure) …. and I have to say, I wouldn’t mind being that blue button down shirt (blush). Okay, now please tell me that the sounds Bette heard from the deck weren’t the skulking of a one JL… or maybe it is but Butterfly is right behind ready to flatten her underfoot ;) At the risk of sound wholly unoriginal and like a broken record (remember those? ;) I LOVE THIS STORY!!! As always, thanks again for sharing your incredible talent! iHH xxx (PS, another word nerd gold star for you – I’m sure you know why. HA!)
I think that it is a stampeded, and I have a feeling that Jodi is so behind this. But aside from that can you not feel the heat from these two amazing ladies, it was so so steamy, love love love it.
Hope no trouble there
What or who was that?… Damn they ruining the moment?!!.. …How can they interrupt this kind of moment? …”re-igniting progressively the embers of their passion filled night which still smouldered beneath the surface.”….Hope is not Jodie again?
They are so sweet together. I get sad every time I think of Tina having to leave. :(What is sneaking up on them? I hope it’s not one of the lions from the night before….
Well, I too thought it might be Jodi or a lion. It better be good to interrupt them like that! Love it! PPS!!
So? What the heck is that?! OMG Kins! You are the teaser!!! >_< ... lol but if it's really J who's being eaten by the lion I think it's ok to interrupt the moment for a while.. :-P dang! Now pining for your next post again ... Btw when I read this "That simple image almost made her blood catch fire." .. I was nodding and so agree and then thinking.. "does Kins wrote this sentence to express her readers state of mind when reading her nc17 or what?" :-p thanks Kins for another great chapter... (but no thanks for the hanging :-p lol) hmm... Does their breakfast inviting some wild animal to taste the pancake with honey!? Hmmm...
Another excellent update,thank you.The end is scary,PPS.
What a sweet, loving update..such amazing writing!!
Just spent the last 2 days reading chapters 1 to 20. What a great story. Looking forward to more!
That was beautiful and warm.
10 stars.