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Savannah
Story written on November 20, 2011 by kins40.
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Tina’s head rested on Bette’s chest, lulled by the steady rhythm of the vet’s heart. Bette’s cheek rested on Tina’s head, intermittently kissing its crown with a contented sigh.
"Are you okay?" Tina asked softly.
"Yeah…. I’m fine…." Bette answered just as softly. "I think we should get a move on…."
"Oh okay…" Tina reluctantly said. She was enjoying being held far too much and was slightly disappointed at the thought of leaving the warm and comfortable embrace. "Have you plans for today?"
Bette looked into sudden saddened eyes. "No… At least nothing that does not involve you!" Bette reassured with a smile. "Maybe…a quick check on our new neighbours." The vet was always conscious of the compound’s safety, "If you want to come with me… you are very welcome to…." Bette continued with hopeful eyes.
"You mean… Check on the lions?"
Bette nodded.
"Sure ..why not!" Tina smiled. After this morning, she felt like she could take on any type of wildlife encounter.
"Deal…. Go jump in the shower….while I take care of those dishes." Bette instructed kissing rosy lips briefly before sending Tina on her way with a playful slap on her behind.
She watched the blonde step back into the bedroom and head straight for the bathroom. It took all her resolve to not follow the accountant’s footsteps but she had a job to do this morning and for the safety of all involved she had to do it above all else.
It took all but a few minutes to tidy everything away and Bette made her way back into her bedroom to get herself ready.
She could hear the shower running and the mental image of Tina’s flawless creamy smooth body entered her mind. The temptation became overwhelming in the space of a few seconds. She moved to the bathroom door listening out when she realised the door had been left slightly ajar.
It was just perfect.
The blonde would not hear her come in.
She unbuttoned her blue shirt and discarded it together with her white boy’s brief before quietly stepping into the small tiled room.
Never had she been so happy to have opted for a wet room design because right now she had an unobscured view of a very unsuspecting, very sexy and very wet Tina.
She walked up to her silently and wrapped her arms around the blonde’s waist pulling her back into her eager body enjoying every point of contact thus created. There was a slight jolt of surprise and a moaning gasp from the showering woman but Tina soon relaxed into the familiar arms.
"I thought you would never join me…." Tina whispered.
The blonde’s hair was all slicked back together by the running water and hung neatly down her back, leaving much of her neck exposed to Bette’s talented mouth.
"Well I need to wash too…." Bette murmured as she ran her lips over the nape and ear of the accountant.
Tina turned her head and voicelessly demanded that Bette kissed her. She was rewarded instantly and in the process let her body do the rest of the begging for the brunette’s touch.
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I am more and more impressed with your writing with every post. Of course, the topic is what brought me here but your talent keeps me coming back. I appreciate you for sharing your gift.
Ma favourite line of this chapter?… “I thought you would never join me….” How perfectly worded, Tina Kennard!!… This chapter was absolutely wonderful, dear you! I loved the meeting between Tina and Ellie. It was beautiful and so vivid. I was there with them, and at one point, I was screaming “My turn, my turn, my turn…!” to touch the trunk and blow in it… By the way, how ambiguous is this acquainting method…? Have you actually checked this out, or are you just a sex-freak? *worried look*… Just kidding… Seriously though, how do you know all this stuff? You just know or do you do some research? Anyway, you got me on the edge of my seat during the first part. I could already see Bette playing hero and fighting a ferocious lion with a pancake or a coffee spoon. A lion that she would have vainquished of course, and from then on she would have been called Bette “Lioness” Porter. Grrrrr…. How sexy! Sorry, got distracted for a sec… Anyway, I was still relieved that it was just a friendly encounter… More seriously, this was a great chapter and I loved it, and I’m so glad that their little adventure didn’t make them stray from their great adventure… Thanks for the update, sweet friend! xxx Kw
I don’t know which is more AMAZING…? Your story – or you!? I guess they’re one in the same…but I’m loving it!! Please hurry we’re all hungry for more! (my thought is that bitch-face Jody dragged a kill near the camp to lure the lions…but of course this is “me” thinking out loud) :)
You do not dissappoint; love it
You do not dissappoint; love it
Wonderful update, very moving.
What a wonderful update..Bette, Tina, and Ellie..equals a perfect afternoon!!
love it! love it! love it!
well don`t know what happened there,lappy got mind of her own,,,,,,,everything you put into this story is just truelly amazing,i`ve said it before you make us feel that we are really there in the moment virtually watching what`s happening, please please keep this story going, there is so much you can give us, it`s like a drama serial that i would willingly watch on tv……..x..j
I felt as though I was touching Ellie’s trunk myself! Lovely story.
You are simply a very talented writer.
They are a Magnificent creature. Such a shame that a “few” people knows that. … :(..
Phew! that was a relieve, I was afraid they will meet the lions at that point, but thanks to u it is only Ellie it was a great add to the story, really I love it. and the way u describe the encounter is so vivid I felt I’m with them there;DAnd yes I’m from ME thank u, and welcome . Actually I feel blessed for being able to read ur story ;D
Beautiful.Thank you.
That was frighting at first, then it became a sweet and sad moment, and then just so loving and tender. I had tears in my eyes as I read the exchange between Tina and Ellie and the story of the journey that Bette had with Ellie and the lost of her baby, and then I was truly gone when you see that Ellie’s new baby is still watching Bette and Tina as if to say a thank you to Bette for taking care of it’s Mom. Thank You So So Much For The Update.
Thanks for such a wondeful update. Of course, we all thought of the lions when the low growling happened, glad it wasn’t. Your description of Ellie and her baby and the way Ellie wanted to say hello to Tina was just fabulous. Each time you post another chapter it turns into a trip to the savannah and all that one has to discover and enjoy there. Not to mention the adventure that our girls finally enjoyed with each other. Thanks for sharing a wonderfully loving story with us.
omg K, I almost missed the post. I absolutely love the connection between Bette and Ellie. You made me cry over this one love it and love you even more for sharing this story with us
Is it a problem that I keep falling in love with the elephants? Can I get you to sign an agreement vowing that no fictional elephant will be harmed in the making of a good story?
Another wonderfully written update that makes me wanting for more. So beautifully described. Thank you for this wonderful story and I’m so glad it wasn’t a lion. Thank you again.
Beautiful chapter. Very emotional. Loved every minute of it. PPS!!
And you leave it like that??? AHHHHHH!!!! No kins! No!!!! Hahaha please hurry with the update I do very much love this story
Beautiful and imaginative as always. I really like the interactions with the animals and the way you weave it into the story.
My heart is beating in better rythem now as it was just Ellie. Hey.. how do you know so much about elephants?? You describe them in detail, so cute. I hope there will be no further encounters with lions. Post more often please. Waiting can be excruciating.
My heart is beating in better rhythm now as it was just Ellie. Hey.. how do you know so much about elephants?? You describe them in detail, so cute. I hope there will be no further encounters with lions. Post more often please. Waiting can be excruciating.
Hey… I made a spelling mistake in first comment, corrected in second, now I am back to say one more thing, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT..(One thing many times)
Hiya Kins! So glad to be able to catch up! :-) … So beautiful morning there with lovely encounter although kinda frightening in the beginning! Though once I read word “Ellie” the one pops in my head is the pink cute elephant :-p and your writing sent me to the savannah, vividly-again! So amazing :-) I wonder do you keep elephant as your pet or ?? Hahaha… Coz it seems like you know so much about them! ;-) and it’s so sweet on how Tina interacted with Ellie! And the last 2 pages makes the room temperature warmer in this cooling mountains area… :-p lol
Yea, the adventure continues and what a most delightful chapter! I felt I was there saying hello to Ellie along with Tina your details were so well written Kins. And the story of how Bette and Ellie grew up together was so touching. And speaking of touching, that shower scene was just starting to uh…. heat up. Might you be planning a “steamy” follow up or are you trying to torture us some more by leaving us all hanging? (PS – can you sneak in and grab Bette’s blue shirt for me? I’ll PM you where to send it ;) Thanks again for sharing your awesome story with us Kins- you ROCK! xxx iHH
I like seeing Bette being the elephant whisperer. We know that her charm is working on Tina too. Thanks Kins for bringing us this beautiful story.
This story is just so delightful. Everything you write is just so delightful.
Everytime i read a post from you it’s either im the last to comment or the next to the last to comment and so my problem is all the wonderful people who had left their messages already used up all the positive adjectives to describe your writing and the story. But i guess it wont hurt 4 me to borrow their words and mixed those into one sentence. This story is beautiful and your writing is amazing! Thanks K and i cant wait 4 more;-)
They are so sweet, love them