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Savannah
Story written on December 11, 2011 by kins40.
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Tina swallowed nervously, trying to loosen the ball of fear that had lodged itself in her throat.
"You can do this." she convinced herself. "Just barge in and surprise them, they are bound to make a quick exit and run for it."
She walked steadily toward the surgery door which stood ajar. A small corner in the lower left hand side of the frosted glass window was missing, where it had been broken to help the intruders gain entry. She could still see the light-beam of the torch as it was pointed around the room carefully and methodically.
The cone of light suddenly froze and a command was heard. She couldn’t however make out what had been said. The intruders in all likelihood had found what they were looking for.
She had reached the door and had placed her hand on the metal door knob. The cold, steel of the handle stuck to her clammy hand. Her stomach tensed, she took a breath. This was it, she was about to confront the burglars.
The noise inside the room stopped. Hurried and worried murmurs and urgent order to remain silent were then heard. Tina swung her body around to avoid detection through the frosted glass of the door and halted her own movement to listen intently.
Had she inadvertently made herself known?
All she could hear at present was the fast flow of her own blood stream and thumping heart in her ears. Her whole body was on alert. She could also almost feel the adrenaline as it was slowly released, increasing her heart rate, constricting blood vessels, dilating air passages and screaming at her to choose between fight or flight.
The rummaging inside the room resumed quickly and Tina let out a shaky breath. They had not seen nor heard her. She was still standing on the other side of the door and her hand gripped the handle firmly.
She pushed it as quietly as she could, just enough to help let her step inside the room. The usually pristine surgery, Bette’s pride and joy, Bette’s lifetime of work, Bette’s reason for living was a mess.
"How dare they?" Tina thought inwardly, now incensed that anyone should interfere with her love’s living.
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Gosh, you’re just driving me crazy! jodie is one nutty and crazed fool. Alright then it has to be Ellie and her crew that Tina was dumped by and it is now Ellie that is approaching her. She will remember her scent and take her back to Bette. I hope. I’ve never done this to you before but, please post soon; like in the next few minutes. lol Great chapter. Thanks.
“Tina”.. your mysterious endings are going to kill me eventually. Post soon and put us out of misery.. Pls
“See how Tina extricates herself from a potentially disastrous situation…” Hmm. You must be referring to the next exciting episode, because I’m not seeing an extrication here. I knew you were up to no good when you left those keys dangling in the ignition! (Breath-takingly good scene-writing, by the way!)
I kept hoping Bette would show up with a 9 mm and shoot Jodie, you best not be leaving us here long that would be mean
No beast so fierce but knows some touch “No beast so fierce but knows some touch of pity. But I know none, and therefore am no beast.” Richard the 3rd (for Jodie)
To say that I was elated that you have posted today is putting it mildly. Always been a fan since the start. So thank you so much for the update. I have been waiting for the next chapter. Please let Bette get to Tina in time. And please post really soon before I die from the suspense. LOL. Your stories will and are going to be read over and over again by me. Cheers!
Thanks for the update. PPs
Now, that is MEAN!!!!! You, my friend, are a very very mean woman! Not only do you hurt our sweet Tina (Yes, your read it right, “YOU”!), but as if it wasn’t enough for her to have a broken wrist, a cut lip, sedative in her blood and the disgusting taste of that son of a b*tch Duvallier in her mouth (beuaark… by the way), you also had to abandon her in the wild Savannah to be the prey of pitiless predators!! You, heartless woman!… You better make things right! And you better do it soon! *scolding tone, of course, but I suppose you had already figured out that I would use that tone, right? Cause it would make sense that I would be using such tone, considering my words and their intention, which is mainly to scold you… Anyway…* That being said, two things in your favor: 1) A huge bravo to you for this amazing chapter. Didn’t know you had it in you to write this kind of action (and scary) scenes! Wonderfully done, I was holding my breath the whole time! 2)I’m kind of happy that we gonna get to see a pissed off Bette!! She’s gonna flip! First, she’s gonna run and save her girl, then she’s going to hunt the b*tch down and make her regret the day she was born. And when she does, I want to be in the front seat!! (Love pissed off Bette!). Now, please make it right soon. I promise to finish my next chapter faster if you do *puppy dog eyes*… Thanks for the update, my friend! xxx Kw
Oh my gosh, my heart is beating out of my chest!! Please find her quick, Bette! Great update!!!!
OMG Bette hurry up!!!! Thanks for the awesome update K.
OMG I’m speechless I don’t know what to say to that chapter. Bette please find her.
Oh my god. Those are not lions right? How will anyone find Tina now.
Oh gosh! I was sitting at the edge of my seat reading this and then you ended it that way. That was just plain mean! Please please post soon. Thank you for this story.
Omg!!!!!! Update!!!!!!!
And you say “It’s only a fiction?” How could we, if you’ll write this way? …My heart is beating so fast..that I can’t hardly breath? … Thanks for this..but??…Please don’t leave us HANGING?!…PPS??….
You know….this is a little bit cruel to stop here….Thank you for the update,great story.
Crazy freakin’ exciting! You have some mad skillz!
Oh noes……waiting with baited breath…Love this story, it is so very well written. Thank you.
Oh No, I can not believe what I just read, you certainly had our girl Tina go through thr wringer, and that crazy witch drew her out into the wilderness, I sure hope that this is Ellie and her family, they will at least remember Tina’s scent, and maybe bring her back to Bette, who is going to lose her mind when she see’s her workplace and realize that Tina is gone. Waiting for another update.
As you must know, I’ve read this a few times. Kword75 said it best. Like Kword said we get to see a po’d Bette and that in itself is an awesome thing to see, terrible to live thru if you are the victim of her wrath. However the victim this time deserves everything that can be heaped onto her and then some. And when Bette finds jodie, I want to be sitting next to Kword as the chairman of the “I HATE jodie CLUB.” Hopefully she will never get to kill the elephant as she might get lost before she finds the elephant and the lions or something truly evil, bad, poisonious and vicious gets her first before Bette gets there and leaves just enough of her to be recognizable to know that she had a horrible death. She has brought it on herself. As Merlion said, it was probably a very good thing that than witch threw her out of the car and thankfully didn’t have any designs on Tina for herself which would have been unthinkable, the woman is crazy and evil. As Azmama said, “you have some mad skillz.” Damn I love it. You have brought us all to the edge of our seats. Please hurry and relieve us!!!
Hi Kins! Thanks for that reminder of this is only a fiction … Though I am not so sure those warning is useful for these bunch of FF reader! :-p Just like telling a vampire to convert into a vegan (bad example maybe, but that’s what comes on my mind :-p) anyway, so Tina knew a bit of self defense but still left in the savannah unconscious, wounded, and sedated?! … Okaaay… Then JL is driving freely in Bette’s car with those precious items to destroy some life?? And the ending of this chapter is only one word…”Tina”?! OMG Kins!? Are driving me to hang around with our Mexican friend-Corona to ease the tensions?!? :-O oh no!! … PPS?! :-) lol
I guess it’s official now Santa. Kins40 is naughty. Do I tell her to forget about her wish list lol.
Hi Kins! Thanks for that reminder of this is only a fiction … Though I am not so sure those warning is useful for these bunch of FF reader! :-p Just like telling a vampire to convert into a vegan (bad example maybe, but that’s what comes on my mind :-p) anyway, so Tina knew a bit of self defense but still left in the savannah unconscious, wounded, and sedated?! … Okaaay… Then JL is driving freely in Bette’s car with those precious items to destroy some life?? And the ending of this chapter is only one word…”Tina”?! OMG Kins!? Are driving me to hang around with our Mexican friend-Corona to ease the tensions?!? :-O oh no!! … PPS?! :-) lol
Uggggh! u can’t stop teasing us, can u?Tina put herself in very dangerous situation from the start, and now she is laying helpless in the middle of no where. I just hope that the animal is our Ellie not the lioness. I think our Bette will wake up into massive shock when she recognize what happened. Oh, and we have to wait until next week to know what will happen, do u think it’s fair? :(
Uhm Kins… Somehow, on my second thought… *blush* … :-p … I kinda glad that Tina is being deserted in the savannah, I think it’s for a better reason than to let her stay under JL’s control-which I am sure would be terrifying.. You know, sometimes animals is having more compassion than creature who called themselves human but not act as one. I am so looking forward to read your next update!! Curious whether my guess is right or not ;-) LoL :-D
F——– ck noooooooo!!! How COULD you!?!? Our (and Bette’s) dear Tina, man-handled, drugged, and left for naught in the wilds. My god girl what were you thinking!!! Deep breath…. okay, all-in-all I’m very impressed with this chapter. I believe it’s your first all-action/drama one yes? Well done, it literally made my heart race and hope against hope that my favorite blonde would triumph. So now we must wait for one Alpha Bette (and a mighty pissed one) to right the wrongs you have crafted. Speaking of which, she must have been damn tired to not hear the commotion going on! Dear Santa, please, please, please ask Kins to guard over Tina until Bette rescues her and takes care of that awful JL once and for all. If she doesn’t give an extra lump of coal in her her stocking (haha). Okay kiddo, no more partying until you FIX this ;) xxx iHH
I agree with Ballent, please don’t make us wait.
So I waited all week long just knowing that when the weekend arrived there would be the next chapter to this story. But sadly the weekend is now gone and no update. Please don’t make me wait too much longer. I love this story.
Oh no can somebody kill Jodi please, Bette go find Tina