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    Savannah

    Story written on August 27, 2011 by kins40.
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    Chapter 6

    She looked glumly around the room,  as she continued drying her hair with a soft towel. The place looked like it had been hit by a bomb, she started tidying the sheets and soon caught herself on. After all she did pay over inflated prices for someone else to do this for her.
    She got dressed and walked out in the direction of the dinning area, where she’d hoped to get her breakfast in peace. 
    Tables had been laid out in the open area overlooking the water hole. Waiting staff were busying themselves amongst the guests. Inside a splendid buffet bar had been organised. 
    Local fresh fruits, freshly pressed juices and a variety of pastries formed a multicoloured blanket on one side of the buffet bar and on the other side, dressed in their whites, a couple of chefs were preparing breakfast omelettes on demand. Their jovial faces were a warm welcome to the sleepy guests and nothing was ever too much trouble.
    Jodie rolled her eyes at the happy atmosphere which was playing in front of her. She approached one of the chefs and placed her order for an omelette.
    "Jambo, what can I get you?" was the convivial greeting from the toque wearing man.
    "Yeah yeah… Jam…whatever ….. Omelette please tomatoes and cheese… Don’t make it too runny this time!"  The small attempt at politeness was almost too much for the blonde. She went to take a seat at a secluded table, waiting for her order to arrive. 
    The pounding in her head had not subsided entirely. Her mood, however, seem to  worsen with every passing minute, if it ever could be possible.
    A shadow was cast over a table soon after she sat down. Someone had approached, visibly wanting to talk to her. 
    Not bothering to look up, she barked, "What now?" It took all her resolve to not swear at the unwanted interruption.
    The hunter jacket wearing man, she had seen a few days ago, was standing awkwardly by her table.
    "Good Morning Miss Lerner," came the voice of the man.
    "Well, if it isn’t Mr Duvalier, what bad news do you have for me now?" Jodie asked sarcastically. 
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    1. You are such an amazing writer..you always have the ability to bring me inside of the story as I if am there observing. Jodie is so slimey..poacher is the perfect job for her. Really great update..can’t wait for more!!

    2. Hey you… So great to be back! I wish I had had a Tina to take care of my own back these last few weeks, that is a sure fact!!!… Anyway, thanks for this chappy, partner, I love the fact that there is a vilain in this story. And what a vilain!! God, how worse could she get??… But I love it. Screw Jod… Oups, sorry for the bad language. I love the African context of this story. I know I will sound like a big softy romantic, but the savannah atmosphere makes great love stories! I love where this is going, and this is a fantastic story. Thanks for sharing. You know that already, but I was lkg fwd to you returning with a new long story. Thanks my friend! xxx Kw

    3. All I know is…is that if ‘Jodie the skanky ho’ messes with that elephant or our Bette and Tina ‘fledgling wannabe / soon to be’ romance…I’m gonnna come through the computer and kick her slimy ass myself! I love this story…thank you so much for the vision of our girls in such an original context…but at the same time keeping us familiar with the girls we know! I can hardly wait for more and I hope you come back soon!! Thank you!!

    4. I really don´t know what it is, but this story reminds me of an old John Wayne movie called Hatari. I don´t think there were any poachers in that film, but a rather flirty baby elephant. I really dislike this Jodie, but it´s such a great story, so a few more chapters and then she better go for a serious walkabout..

    6. Thanks for the update. Please let the injured elephant smell jodi and go crazy and stomp her arrogant ass to death. Hope Tina pushes jodi aside when she appears to get in Bette’s pants. And/or let Bette find out it was jodi that tried to kill the elephant and have her arrested and jailed for years for poaching. Killing her would be the next thing for the authorities to do to her. Just hate her. Thanks.

    7. i can’t wait for the next day either, and as for Jodi, I vote she gets either mauled by a lion or crushed by an elephant! Evil bitch! BTW I went to your page and read all of your stories, I finally found the time to do so, my favorite was “at first sight” very trippy very good! thank you!

    8. Hi Kins! Thanks for the update!! 20degrees is a lot of difference! Good luck for the adaptation ;-) thanks for spare your time to posting the updates :-) hmm.. I am counting on the elephants who is having a very good memory to take necessary action when he sees the assailants! Jodie alone already a disaster, now you put her with lots of money… Egomaniac with blood thirst attitude and not so bright brain.. Ugh!! I hope she’s not having more power as it will be a perfect disaster recipe >_< and Kins my friend.. somehow must admit that you joined the club already as you make Jodi the perfect villain in the story ;-p lol... So glad that you made boundary between her and Bette as I am sure Bette would not be attracted to her at all! Please let the certain nurse blonde and her have more exposure?! ;-) I am so looking forward to their Saturday too :-D

    9. Welcome back Kins! Thanks for the extra posts whilst you were on holiday. Hope you had a wonderful time away. I gotta tell you the opening of this chapter put me back on my heels! I initially mistook the blonde to be Tina. Clumsy reading on my part :S As always, looking forward to MORE! such a well written and enjoyable story.

    10. Beautiful update, thanks;Dwell, “the devil called Jodi” seems will not take Bette out of her head soon! but she make the story more interesting :)I’m looking forward for tomorrow too ;D

    13. Ah, ze plot thickens. If Jodi touches that elephant, I’m coming after her myself. ;-) Welcome back from holiday! (Weird for this usually silent reader to be leaving a first comment.)

    15. Thanks for the update. I never thought I could dislike Jodi more than I already did until now. I love Dainty’s idea of the elephant remembering Jodi and going postal on her…lol.I love the gentleness that Tina has with Bette. I think if Bette is ever going to open up to someone again it will take someone with patience and kindness like Tina.

    16. When you said the “Blonde” can’t remember last night event.. I thought It’s Tina? and Helena is with her?..I’m more worried… but it turns out it’s only Jodie. Man.. I’m relieve..but i’m afraid what is Jodie planning?.. Bet if Bette knew that Jodie is the one who’s responsible to that Elephant’s injury ..She will never forgive her.

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