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Savannah
Story written on September 8, 2011 by kins40.
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"I hope I am not chasing you away?" Tina asked softly.
Bette’s heart sank. It did feel like she was running away. "No, you are not," and wanting to lighten up the mood a little she added, "I am being audited and the auditor wants to go out in the morning to see a little bit more than her four walls. I just want to make sure I’m not late."
"You are totally right. First impressions are the most important." Tina said in mock seriousness. "Is she nice?"
"Well, I haven’t met many auditors before, but she is definitely the prettiest so far…. In saying so the last one was bald, he had a pot belly, huge grey sideburns and smelt of onions!"
Tina burst out laughing and swatted the brunette’s hand.
"Go away now!" She said pretending to pout.
They wished each other good night and Tina stepped back slightly to give the vet some room to manoeuvre. Shortly after, the blonde was standing alone at the front of the lodge watching the two red tail lights disappear, seemingly swallowed in the absolute darkness of her surroundings.
She was still deep in thought when she suddenly heard childish ‘kissy’ sounds coming from beside her. They were closely followed by slow applause.
"Who’s there?" Tina asked frowning and straining her eyes to try and identify the person who was currently hidden by the impossible darkness of the night.
"Did you kiss her goodnight at least?" The voice of a woman asked.
"What is it to you?"
"Just curious. A beautiful catch like her is not to be sniffed at."
Tina heard a sharp scratching noise and a halo of light appeared in the otherwise total darkness. The little flame at the end of the match, revealed the identity of the disembodied voice.
It was that blonde woman, Bette had talked to earlier on in the evening. She was busy lighting a cigarette. She took a long drag and inhaling the smoke she released it to blow the flame out effectively making her disappear once again.
Tina watched as the glowing red dot of the end of the lit cigarette moved in the obscurity. The woman was coming towards her.
"How is a beautiful, intelligent and rich, may I add, woman still single? I’d say there’s something wrong there!" Tina could hear the evident smirk in the words of the cigarette smoking woman.
"I’d say it is none of my nor your business. Bette and I are friends."
"Goody then, you won’t mind if I try to seduce her."
A chill ran over Tina’s body. There was indeed something deeply unpleasant about this woman. She walked away not bothering to give the woman an answer.
Jodie laughed, triggering a heavy rough, raspy and gravelly cough. She swore loudly, cursing her surrounding and the amount of alcohol she had ingested.
Her mind shot back though at the retreating blonde, "Oh sorry," she said hoarsely, "Did I offend you? Would you like to go first perhaps…. Jodie Lerner has enough love for two women." And with that the older blonde broke into an even stronger coughing fit.
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That a was a lovely moment ruined by Helena’s abysmal timing. And Jodi… she’s just repulsive. Thanks!
Can Jodi fucking die now? Bitch! BTW I knew the kiss was gonna be interrupted! Someone has to make a move! Ahhh! You know what kins my friend, YOU’RE A TEASE!! lol PPS
Oh so ur gonna tease us huh? Thats ok since I know you’ll stop torturing us eventually. Thanks for the great post lookin forward to the next one. PPS
Frickin’ Helena! Has she become the new Alice?? Never would have thought her obtuse! Still a wonderful day for the two of them. You had me on the edge of my seat anticipating the kiss. Love that you and MeLL are tagging each other to post.
So close to the kiss but Helena had to ruin it. Hope the first kiss comes soon.
i hope the vultures are circling round hodie,ready to peck the life out of her,ugh that woman gives me the creeps,,,,,please let our girls get together sooner than later….ppvs…x
Can we just feed Jodie to the hyenas? What a crass lowlife! Please continue to post this great story.
That was beautiful. I am in awe of the research you must have done to write this so well.
Great job and I gladly second Querida’s astute comment about your research. Such an entertaining and enlightening story to read!
It seems the chemistry between Bette and Tina is too strong for Bette to ignore. If they spend time together something is going to develop.Jodi is just extremely creepy. I hope Bette finds out about her plot to kill the elephant before she causes any harm.
What a loathesome piece of pondlife – I mean, Jodie is just argh….
Jodie is one sick puppy! Amazing as always!!
I’m with tibetter24 Can just Jodie die now?..Anyway she’s a menace. And i bet she’s the culprit why “Kipepeo” lost her family…. ..
thanks to ur story, now I have total respect to elephants :D, the attraction between the two is powerful but I don’t know why Bette restrain herself? and this Jodie is a pain in the nick Uggh.I loved ur update, looking forward for the next one ;D
Such a sweet chapter. Laughing at all the Jodie hater’s comment’s. Wonderful job as always. PPS!!
Yeah for Kipepeo! Yeah for B&T connecting! Yeah for an extra long post AND for this wonderful story Kins :) Rest up and enjoy your weekend! As always, I’ll look forward to and enjoy your next installment when ever you can post…
Love this story. For gosh sakes will someone just off jodi or let her cough herself to death, quickly, very quickly. The woman has to go. She is very close to repugnant reptilian for me. ewwww. I thought she would have been the one to ruin their “moment,” not Helena. This slow burn you have us witnessing is just wonderful, but awful too. I’m also with the person above me that said Tina needs to complete the audit first before becoming involved because it is indeed a first class conflict of interest. So I hope Tina completes the audit very quickly so they can get on with their lives together. Great chapter. Thanks.
Love how Tina has come to see the special work that Bette is doing for the animals. So close to that kiss and yet so far, can we just have Jodi take a long walk off a short peir.
Damn I hate Jodi lener , Bette and Tina are so good
Amazing story.What about the lion for Jodie?
That’s what I call a Tibette “moment”!… In fact, that’s what I call a Tibette story!… Oh, how you love those almost kisses, don’t you? ;) Don’t get me wrong, I looove a good slow burn, and I know how good you are at that!… But then again, not too slow please, cause the burning (and what a fire this is!) will be the end of us readers!… I’m torn, cause I kind of agree with slntrdr, Tina being the auditor, there could be some conflict of interest… Oh hell, who cares?… And I love what an absolute vilain you’re actually portraying Jodie as! It is actually almost funny… but in a good way, of course!… I love it! That chapter was great, and I particularly enjoyed it, and I’m sorry I couldn’t read last night. I was kind of engrossed in something else… Not “that” kind of something else, but you will know what I mean! ;) Thanks for that lengthy chapter, my friend. You’ll hear from me veeeeery soon! B&H, Kw
Hi Kins! :-) Thanks for the update! I hope when you read this, you are well rested and ready to start the weekend!! :-) …Ugh, Dang! I knew the moment would be blown away, but never in a million year I expected it was by Helena… By now you should know who was the baddie on my mind… :-p though in the end of the chapter she did appear to disrupt the sweetness of this chapter >_< ... Btw Kins, I do wonder... how long does it take (on our real time) to let the girls having their Saturday?! ^^, he3... So looking forward to your next updates!! ;-) PPVS!? thanks :-p
Oh, and also… Am I wrong in guessing that, writing that moment when they had to say goodbye at the jeep, you just couldn’t bring yourself to have Bette leave just yet, and that your characters kept holding each other back despite what you had originally planned?… Cause that transpires from your writing, and that happened to me a lot when I was writing Cure-all. That’s one of the things that startled me the most when I started writing, but that I loved more than anything… It’s just an assumption though… xKw
Such a beautiful chapter ruined by the awful hacking of a classless hunter. Hopefully the morning brings another opportunity for that first kiss. Great right K40. Your next post will be expected very soon ;)
Oh, for heaven’s sake, Helena! Then again, we can’t have Tina kissing her auditee until she has finished her audit, can we? Finish the audit, Tina, so you can resign from your firm and become CFO of the Melvin Porter Foundation. :-)
Love love this chapter. So beautifully written and just so descriptive and just simply awesome. You’ve written Jodi so well that I just want to take her out and shoot her :) Thank you for this wonderful story.
There now I’m completely hooked on this story which means the lawns won’t get cut again!!
I never liked Jodi in the show and I certainly don’t like her here!
Great story – well written. Thank you.