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Say Nothing Chapter 11
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As they pulled up in front of the hotel, the valet came to the car. The glance from Bette was like that of a slightly frightened teenage girl. “I don’t think I will be staying. Thank you.” The valet walked away from the car with Tina and Bette still occupying the seats.
“Won’t you please come up for a bit?” Tina didn’t make eye contact with Bette. Her gaze still out the side window.
“Do you think that this is really a good idea Tina?” Bette’s head was turned toward Tina. Her eyes looking a the back of Tina’s head. Tina never made a move to look at Bette. “Yes, I think it is a good idea.” Tina voice was almost a whisper but there was need in it’s tone. “We need to talk. I …need …to …talk.” Tina’s voice was almost pleading.
Bette opened the car door and motioned for the valet to come to her. “I think I am going to visit for a bit.” She handed the keys to the valet and he followed her to the passenger side of the car and open the door for Tina. She smiled up at Bette as the valet offered her his hand to make her exit from the car easier. The trip to Tina’s room was made in silence.
Tina opened the door to her room and allowed Bette to enter first. The tension was palpable. “Tina, we need to talk.”
Closing the distance between them. “Let’s not.” Tina’s voice was breathy and full of want.
“Tina you are a beautiful woman and very desirable. I just don’t know about …..”
Holding her finger up to Bette’s mouth. “Shhhhhh. There will be time to talk but, not now. Please.” With those words spoken, Tina leaned in and kissed Bette. Slow, light kisses. Their lips meeting, their mouths open slightly, searching. Bette’s initial hesitation dwindling. They stood quietly but for the slight, exhaled breaths as they gently kissed. Their tongues lively dance, engaging. It wasn’t hot and passionate, it was tender and playful. Bette was now fully invested. Her body starting to respond. Tina knew her need and it was Bette Porter. For whatever reason, Tina could not get her fill of this woman. She still was not sure what this all meant, how could she answer that question for Bette. If she kept Bette’s mouth busy, Bette couldn’t ask the question.
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Talking is overrated sometimes. Time for some love, and they can talk later. They are both aware of the difficulties getting involved would raise, but they should still go for it.
i just love this story!
Great story. Intriguing and well written. I can’t believe Bette’s turning down sex w/o commitment. LOL.
I truly admire your story. Dialogs are great.
Great story! Damn Bette, it’s Tina why be difficult…stop thinking with your head and listen to your heart. Just do it!!! PPVS
There’s plenty of time to talk. .. .. .. . later ;)many Thx to you, djrk
arrggh- you did NOT just stop there. hmmm, well I think you did! WHY!? :) In my opinion talking is soooooo overrated…!;) thanks for a great post!
Way to go Tina. Enjoyed the fact that it is Tina that is making the first move. She wants Bette and she will not be denied that pleasure.
So Bette is a little taken with Tina and dosen’t even know it, offers to meet the mother, didn’t see that comeing. Talks her way through foreplay, smooth move, then gets the girl and the showing, Way to go Bette. Thanks for the shout out and thanks for the gentel reminder to vote, our foremothers would be proud of you. Thank you, Md
I adored Bette’s concern that Tina’s passion for her would compromise her work — it just seems so “Bette” — particularly with both of them being so focused on their work. I am enthralled by the story and I too cannot get enough! PPVS
The both are in so much trouble. I think that Tina is the best Kisser on the show. Love this
Now that they talk but hope let talk more!
i’m here, and you’ll be smiling! je. this realistic Bette is killing me. i undestand all the work thing, the distance… but how can you resist this beautiful, talented and demanding Tina? she won’t know what hit her! great chapter my friend! Hugs from Argentina, in a very special day.
wow, i’m enjoying where this is at. pps.
You just can’t post enought. This story is just so amazing and I love how you have written Tina. They will fall for sure. Oh…I went to vote at 6:30am. Only had to wait an hour and fifteen minutes. Hope everyone that is registered votes. Please give us a new chapter very soon.
i agree with coop…talking IS overated. i wonder which one will leave their comfort zone for the other. this tina is strong and stands on her own.
bette are u crazy???? shot up and kiss the woman!!!! djrk i love this story ppvs ppvs
Great story. No more talky talky – but i guess it is a good thing to clear the air. But come on as much as Bette wants to be clear on things – nothing is clear when it comes to love – It messes with your head. I look forward to seeing how this all plays out ! This is one of my favorite stories to follow. PPS
i have said it so many time… sleep is so over rated… and bette i do see what you mean… but come on now… this is tina… dam girl… and about voting… i just got out of the shower and soon to be on my way to vote… i agree… its our right and we all should go out an vote… lets just hope everyone did their home work and at least checked out the views of both sides before voting… PPS
great story
And please, dont believe that talking is overrated. It is, but not in your story. I cant deny some pleasure from reading of nc-17 chapters, but when story consist only from these chapters it becomes somehow boring. You have great storyline, I really hope that you’ll keep slow pace, and write us many chapters more. It is much more believable than both Tina and Bette are not sure from the very first moment that they meant to be together forever, ok, they feel strong attraction, but they need time to understand everything happening, to make plans, to be sure..Thats why I love your story, it’s not just a fairy tale, I can believe that such stories can happen in real life.
Love This!!! Bette this is Tina SHUT UP!!!!! Thanks PPS
I find this story so intriguing. Love it. I’m stunned at Bette’s holding herself back from Tina and quite surprised at Tina’s forcefulness. Yet it’s hard to know –because they don’t know–what their actual feelings are for each other. My suspicion is that neither woman has ever been in love before. Perhap it’s a work in progress. Great writing. Thank you.
another excellent update!
Oh great. Stopping right there where I think it’s a crime to just leave us all hanging like that. LOL. I think Bette is just scared. She is more into Tina than she wants to be and is trying to stop things from progressing because once she falls…it’s gonna be so hard to recover. I mean who can give up a chance to be loved by T? She knows what’s in store and maybe she’s afraid she won’t be able to let go so easy. It’s just coz it’s Tina. Great chapter, as usual. Please post soon. And I hope you continue where you left off and give us another scorching update. Keeping my fingers crossed. LOL
I love the communication …. Excellent story!! PPS
It is obvious that Bette doesn’t want to put the exhibit in danger. Tina’s straight forward opinion is the exact description of their current affair attraction. We agree with her that they should go with the flow and see where it leads them. It is too soon to speak about forming a relationship. Dating is more appropriate. Bette should start to relax, having Tina by her side, as much as Tina is beginning to feel that way. They both can make a good team and be in sync. Thanks for this wonderful update, DJRK. It’s becoming more and more interesting, as you start to unveil every detail that had not been touched before. Hugs and kisses on both your cheeks. PPS Lucero & Marsha (JC’s Salsa Aunties)
This is great.. I love your story, just keep posting (real soon) :D
They should just go for it and talk later!! PPS